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since: 08-03-02, id: 246069, Profile Updated: 05-16-12
Author has written 42 stories for Naruto, Mai HiME, Xenosaga, Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, Fate/stay night, Final Fantasy XIII, Bleach, and Sailor Moon.

Otherwise known as Aki, or Ext. (Previously known as Eagle8819)

On posted fictions:
Do not own. Credits for beta-ed fics goes to Astarael00. Most fictions in year 2007 and below are generally considered unreadable and probably won't be updated again if and until they are fixed. I generally don't use the word 'abandoned' on any of my works, because I tend not to deny the possibility that I may pick them up again, however unlikely that may be.

And to any reader who stumbles across this - do, also, know that I appreciate your messages, reviews and encouragements. I know I don't say it often enough - and I'm usually guilty of not saying it, even. But if you see this, thank you. It's really nice to know that people enjoy what I do a great deal, and I hope you will continue to be entertained. :)

Update 19/04/12: Editing of Circuit Clout (grammar fixes, etc) complete. Will also be reposting fictions in a slow and gradual process to AO3 under the same pen name to act as both a back-up and possibly as a migratory move, depending on how this site behaves in the future.

Objectives to achieve:
1. Some Vivio/Hayate crack? (?!) completion of Paper Cranes.

2. FF13 fic(s).
Probably. News of FF13-2 is sort of disheartening, and I've been losing a fair bit of interest.

3. Revision of MGLN fictions.
Because there are characterization issues, plot issues, sentence structure issues and whatnot. This will happen...sometime in the future. Soon. Maybe not so soon. Eventually.

4. To populate Précis.
To comb through the FFXIII fandom for canonically, characteristically correct fanfictions that pass The Standard to be entered into the Précis community. Suggestions are always welcome, but please note that Précis will only accept fictions that I think is characteristically correct. A compiled list of quality fictions that are online but not available on ffnet can be found on my LJ.

5. Stop being lazy.

6. Get motivation to stop being lazy.

From now on, I'm going to say "objectives to achieve" rather than "active projects to complete," because, well. The latter is a rather relative term, isn't it...? Yeaaaah.

MGLN: Dēcadent.
A series of fictions that are linked in some form and manner. This was the order they were written in, despite the overlapping timelines between fics. There are direct connections between three of these fics; Ode to Darkness, indirectly hints at it.

I. White Devil (white chalk)
II. Ode to Darkness (this is how it ends)
III. Resplendence of Ebony (it's all just one full circle- )
IV. Time Immemorial (and this is how it started.)

An empire wasn't built in a day. But a day is all it takes to make one fall.

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1. heartbeat reviews
when something knocks you out for three weeks straight. Post-manga.
Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,935 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-27-12 - Jadeite/Jedite & Rei H./Raye/Sailor Mars - Complete
2. walk to the bottom of pandora's box reviews
Time ceases to have meaning when immortality comes into play.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,249 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-19-12 - Fate T. - Complete
3. Paper Cranes » reviews
Kurosaki Ichigo died when he was twenty nine.
Bleach - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 20,002 - Reviews: 58 - Updated: 1-4-12 - Published: 8-28-11 - Rukia K. & Ichigo K.
4. To Let Nature Run its Course reviews
A companion piece to Prerogative of the Brave. In which Nanoha and Fate talks.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,181 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-1-11 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
5. Circuit Clout reviews
In a time where Fate did not become an enforcer but a convict-turned-civilian collaborator. A world where TSAB is forgiving, but not forgiving enough to let ex-convicts into its organization. This is how her path was re-shaped.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35,491 - Reviews: 22 - Published: 7-11-11 - Fate T. - Complete
6. The Woes of Yagami Hayate reviews
In which Fate and Hayate engages in a conversation about a certain matter..
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,206 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 5-13-11 - Hayate Y. - Complete
7. Strife reviews
War knocked on their doorstep. And they were on different sides of the door. Post-strikers, one shot. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,453 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 5-3-11 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
8. ciel bleu reviews
And all that she saw was a vast, vast blue. Nanoha-centric, one-shot fiction. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,888 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 4-19-11 - Nanoha T. & Fate T. - Complete
9. Impasse » reviews
Like a piece of an artwork. AU, high school fiction. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,443 - Reviews: 40 - Updated: 4-16-11 - Published: 11-11-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
10. Magnitude Nine Point Zero reviews
When mother nature strikes. AU.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 850 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-11-11 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
11. Time Immemorial reviews
Part IV of the Dēcadent Series. Prequel to Resplendence of Ebony. Scenes and snippets of a distant past, carved by the future. This is how it started. N/F.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,005 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-22-11 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
12. Quandary reviews
Fang shouldn't be surprised to see Oerba full of life again. But she is. Set post-game, four years. Fang/Lightning centric.
Final Fantasy XIII - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,140 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 12-16-10 - Fang & Lightning
13. Minus Six » reviews
A split second was all it took to change everything again. Everything. Lightning-centric, post-FF13. Based on the Japanese version of the game.
Final Fantasy XIII - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 13,497 - Reviews: 35 - Updated: 12-14-10 - Published: 9-16-10 - Lightning
14. puzzle pieces reviews
A collection of snippets and scenes with Fang and/or Lightning as the focus. Potential spoilers. Rated for all sorts of situations. Also based on the Japanese version of the game.
Final Fantasy XIII - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,637 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-22-10 - Lightning & Fang
15. hic et nunc reviews
This is the reality of it all. This is what happens when Cocoon falls. One-shot, post game.
Final Fantasy XIII - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,049 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 9-4-10 - Complete
16. bits and pieces reviews
"I haven't given it much thought." She said, and it was true. The past few weeks, all of them had been occupied with just trying to survive, trying to get answers. "And somehow I don't think life would be the same." Lightning-centric, spoilers inbound.
Final Fantasy XIII - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,436 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-31-10 - Lightning
17. Daybreak reviews
He doesn't know why she's giving him that look. Game-verse, post Fate-route. Spoilers eminent. Shirou/Rin.
Fate/stay night - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,989 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-15-10 - Shirō E. & Rin T. - Complete
18. Culmination reviews
A drop of blood mixed with the clear liquid on the floor. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,636 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 12-25-09 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
19. Sonreír » reviews
She isn't going to think about it. She isn't going to do that at all. AU fic. N/F.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,245 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 5-30-09 - Published: 3-4-09 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
20. Paper Thin reviews
She should have been used to this by now. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,343 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 5-25-09 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
21. The Little Things reviews
Fifty themes, fifty sentences. Drabbles. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,653 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 1-20-09 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
22. Stigma » reviews
Because it was her own magic that she had called forth. Her very own hands that had slain. Fate Testarossa Harlaown killed for the first time when she was sixteen. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,677 - Reviews: 49 - Updated: 9-13-08 - Published: 10-18-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
23. Expiation » reviews
"You're terrible at this, aren't you?" AU Fiction N/F.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,435 - Reviews: 38 - Updated: 9-13-08 - Published: 8-8-08 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
24. Resplendence of Ebony » reviews
Part III of the Dēcadent Series. It's one full circle. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 32,519 - Reviews: 140 - Updated: 9-7-08 - Published: 9-26-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
25. Incognizant reviews
You confuse me. You always confuse me. You make me feel so terribly lost. NanoFate.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,298 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 2-29-08 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
26. Ignis Fatuus » reviews
If things were not what they seem to be. An illusion. A misleading truth. Is there even a truth? AU fiction. NanoFate.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,282 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 2-10-08 - Published: 12-25-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T.
27. Snare reviews
When a mischief goes wrong... NanoFate. A pointless oneshot, so it's a pointless summary. Random fluff. And fluff. And fluff.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,100 - Reviews: 33 - Published: 1-9-08 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
28. Stain » reviews
Aftermath of MaiHiME: The pieces of a puzzle has been set in place, and time moves again, the clock is ticking, a cherished memory becomes a scar, a peaceful interlude ends, and a new chapter begins... Possible ShizNat.
Mai HiME - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 35,466 - Reviews: 161 - Updated: 10-29-07 - Published: 2-19-06
29. The Blue Sky reviews
Takamachi Nanoha was someone who belonged to the sky. Post StrikerS. Nanoha centric. Hints of NanoFate? No, not really..
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,198 - Reviews: 54 - Published: 10-7-07 - Nanoha T. - Complete
30. Endless Time reviews
So when did things change, exactly? When did they start to look at each other differently? Short introspective fiction. NanoFate. Updated 24.9.07. Betaing complete.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,047 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 9-14-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
31. Ode To Darkness reviews
Part II of the Dēcadent Series. This is how it ends. N/F
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,900 - Reviews: 27 - Published: 8-25-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
32. White Devil » reviews
Part I of the Dēcadent Series. The white chalk. FateNanoha.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,564 - Reviews: 64 - Updated: 8-10-07 - Published: 7-26-07 - Nanoha T. & Fate T. - Complete
33. Feathers » reviews
There was despair in Limietta's tone, and Fate knew this wasn't a hoax or a bad joke gone wrong in twenty ways. Deep NanoFate friendship. Spoiler heavy.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,797 - Reviews: 34 - Updated: 7-17-07 - Published: 6-16-07 - Fate T. & Nanoha T. - Complete
34. One Sentence reviews
Fifty themes, one sentence each. Drabbling. Pairing: Kuga Natsuki and Fujino Shizuru. Theme set, alpha.
Mai HiME - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,942 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 5-17-07 - Complete
35. Touch It reviews
You will be relatively safe from spoilers just so long you played Xenosaga II. Random insanity ensues.
Xenosaga - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,144 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 4-29-07 - Complete
36. Game » reviews
At first they were friends. Then they were something similar to a brother and sister, but just as real. Then they were the best of best friends. Then a drunken stupor changed that. Like a game, one wrong move, and everything changed. Narusaku.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,632 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 4-2-07 - Published: 3-24-07 - Naruto U. & Sakura H.
37. Closing the Chapter » reviews
Three colors clashed together, creating a swirl of colors, and thousands upon thousands of memories, happy, sad, bittersweet...everything, were reincarnated in mere seconds. The reunion of Team Seven. Spoilers. Team seven friendship, Narusaku.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,672 - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 12-17-06 - Published: 10-27-05 - Naruto U. & Sakura H. - Complete
38. Ghost reviews
Entry for the Great Heaven and Earth FanficFanart Contest II. Theme: Ghost
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,592 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-16-06 - Naruto U. & Sakura H. - Complete
39. The Missing Scene reviews
Mai Otome: Two can play a game, Shizuru. Natsuki stares back at her. Takes place in episode 2, pointless oneshot, so it's a pointless summary. ShizNat.
Mai HiME - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,620 - Reviews: 31 - Published: 4-19-06 - Complete
40. Tarnished reviews
Nothing will stay the same. In time, people will meet a fork, where they could only choose one path. With time, objects wear out. With time, people will change. With time...even feelings can change.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,408 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 3-19-06 - Naruto U. & Sakura H.
41. His Story reviews
My name? It's Naruto. Uzumaki Naruto. And you better remember it! One shot. Drabble. Narutocentric.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,806 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-29-05 - Naruto U. - Complete
42. Promise of a Lifetime » reviews
The child was crying, tiny fists rubbing at the eyes. A picture frame lay on the floor next to him. Drabble. Hints of pairing. Complete.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,313 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 11-19-05 - Published: 11-16-05 - Naruto U. & Sakura H. - Complete
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