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Author has written 15 stories for Power Rangers, Doctor Who, StarTrek: The Original Series, H2O: Just Add Water, A-Team, and Muppet Show. I'm Michelle. I am here because I cannot stop writing, and this site provides practice, unbiased peer review, and my self-imposed deadlines. I am a Reformed Presbyterian (I mention denomination because it clarifies what I actually believe in a way "Christian" does not), on Eastern Standard Time, and female, as my name implies. I adore good writing and good criticism. If I write or review badly, please tell me as specifically as possible, so I can fix it, make it up to you, or explain why I disagree. I'd also appreciate it if you wouldn't swear: it's distracting. Links Photobucket: Michelle-the-Editor Database: Power Ranger Fanfiction Teams Wiki Backup Database: Fanfiction Ranger Teams (Also for fics with major upcoming revisions and ones still in development) Original Kamen Rider Database Roleplay Games Power Rangers rp (Also I have a sub-RP in the works here, Lone Star) By Order of the The Official Time Lord Registry, Let it be known that on the date December Second, in the Year of our Lord Two Thousand and Eleven, Michelle the Editor gazed upon the Untempered Schism and saw time in all its infinite possibilities and eternity and fled. Her chosen name is the Badger, for the creature's solitary nature, coolness, dislike of the open outdoors, and ferocity when provoked. So it was chosen and so it shall be, The order is stamped with the Seal of the Time Lords. The Official Time Lord Registry To remind me I'm just a fanfic writer, The Worst Lines I Have Ever Written “Good, good, demon (It's a unicorn). Your bonded girl has seen your love for her.” He dropped the scythe, and put both hands on the hilt of his sword, very slowly raising it over his head. “BEFORE SHE DIED!” He roared, and swept the blade down in a lethal arc. These next three are all from a medieval fantasy novella. If a twig snapped loudly or too many leaves crunched at once the offender would get rapped on the head with a small stick the size of a pencil. Her already-flaming eyes whooshed like a fire tasting a splash of gasoline... The glare Nona gave him burned as hot as lasers, but he didn’t flinch. Compare to the times I tried to fit the setting: “Stop it, you are a dragon for crying out loud, not a swamp-quiver! Crying over fallen trees never grew one back, and these two are just as fixable, so drop it!” “Don’t just stand there an’ swing yer sword! Ye’re supposed to be fighting, not dancing, ye tardy-gaited fleas!” And, on a review for this very site: The pacing was very well-paced... Currently Writing Power Rangers: Lost Ninjas--Thursdays Mako's Grandchildren--As each chapter is finished Toppled Hourglass (revised version)--As each chapter is finished Other People Shift in Time by Pixiescale1185--Beta'ing Dak rain12--Beta'ing Power Rangers: Zenith Strike by Princess Kindle Rose--Collaborating I will not be accepting any more beta/cowriting requests until at least some of these projects have ended. Fics to be Revised Legion of Monsters (Major) Stellar Corps (Minor) Mesozoic Giants (Major) Quotations We should not write so that it is possible for the reader to understand us, but so that it is impossible for him to misunderstand us.--Quintilian Don't tell me the moon is shining, show me the glint of light on broken glass.--Anton Chekhov Never be a diva, occasionally be a donkey.--N.D. Wilson ANY character – whether original or canon – portrayed with no depth of character and believability will slowly deteriorate. And that, is what makes a Mary Sue.--Elihu, The Mary Sue Test Criticism may not be agreeable, but it is necessary. It fulfills the same function as pain in the human body. It calls attention to an unhealthy state of things.--Winston Churchill THE DEFINING TRAIT OF A MARY SUE IS HOW THE STORY, CHARACTERS AND AUTHOR RELATE TO THEM. It’s not about all the things that make them so great. It’s not even who they are as characters. It’s about their place in the story. If you think about it, the success (or failure) every single literary device in any story can be traced back to how it was used, not what the device was. You can use an abominable cliche correctly. You can convincingly deliver an unorthodox message. You can make a believable character with thoroughly unbelievable traits... IF YOU EXECUTE THEM PROPERLY. In essence, a Mary Sue is nothing more than a poorly-executed character.--dualtriene, Mary Sue Essay “One word, Ma’am,” [Puddleglum] said, coming back from the fire; limping, because of the pain. “One word. All you’ve been saying is quite right, I shouldn’t wonder. I’m a chap who always liked to know the worst and then put the best face I can on it. So I won’t deny any of what you said. But there’s one thing more to be said, even so. Suppose we have only dreamed, or made up, all those things-–trees and grass and sun and moon and stars and Aslan himself. Suppose we have. Then all I can say is that, in that case, the made-up things seem a good deal more important than the real ones. Suppose this black pit of a kingdom of yours is the only world. Well, it strikes me as a pretty poor one. And that’s a funny thing, when you come to think of it. We’re just babies making up a game, if you’re right. But four babies playing a game can make a play-world which licks your real world hollow. That’s why I’m going to stand by the play-world. I’m on Aslan’s side even if there isn’t any Aslan to lead it. I’m going to live as like a Narnian as I can even if there isn’t any Narnia. So, thanking you kindly for our supper, if these two gentlemen and the young lady are ready, we’re leaving your court at once and setting out in the dark to spend our lives looking for Overland. Not that our lives will be very long, I should think; but that’s a small loss if the world’s as dull a place as you say.”--Puddleglum, the Silver Chair | |||||||
1. Power Rangers: Lost Ninjas » reviewsLothor's empire of space ninjas didn't capture quite all of the schools they attacked. A few scattered students from the Terra, Earthlight, Ethereal and Season Ninja Academies begin forming alliances with each other, to fight back, get home, or even destroy each other. On hiatus until May 9.Power Rangers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 26 - Words: 67,527 - Reviews: 117 - Updated: 5-16-13 - Published: 5-11-122. Power Rangers: Toppled Hourglass » reviewsAkra-Mary Sues-are attacking, possessing and controlling the Power Rangers in every incarnation, and only a few misfits with morphers stand in their way. The revisions have begun!Power Rangers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Parody - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,752 - Reviews: 108 - Updated: 5-6-13 - Published: 3-27-12 - Isinia C. - Complete3. Mako's Grandchildren » reviewsA glimpse at the not-too-distant future of 2043, when mermaids have been exposed and accepted for decades, through the eyes of a Sea World employee, a few brand-new mermaids, and others. Formerly titled "Mermaid Shows at Eleven."H2O: Just Add Water - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,878 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-30-13 - Published: 12-1-12 - Will B. & Bella H.4. Mermaid Magic According to the Internet » reviewsKim's suspicions about the reality of mermaids return, and in her search to understand them, she turns to the Internet, in particular various mermaid spells. The results? Constant bathing, live fish in the bathtub, drinking seawater, universe-bending paradoxes, maybe a tail or two—the usual dish of crazy served up on the Web.H2O: Just Add Water - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 20 - Words: 34,362 - Reviews: 121 - Updated: 12-21-12 - Published: 8-1-12 - Kim S. - Complete5. The Guide to Gary Stu » reviewsHow to put together the perfect Gary Stu for Power Rangers fanfiction. A prequel-spinoff-companion to StarWriter0303's Summed Up Life of Mary Sue. Warning: hackneyed, melodramatic Mia/OC.Power Rangers - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,376 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-1-12 - Published: 10-1-12 - Mia & Deker - Complete6. Power Rangers: Mesozoic Giants reviewsSet in 2010: A group of teenagers who think they're the children of the Mighty Morphin Power Rangers discover that not all is as it seems in their fight against space pirates. On hold and mostly-deleted pending heavy revisions; full explanation inside.Power Rangers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,001 - Reviews: 128 - Updated: 8-20-12 - Published: 11-13-11 - Finster7. Power Rangers: Aztec Storm » reviewsWith the escape of Diabolico from the demons' tomb, a band of ancient star demons known as Tzitzimime launch a new attack on Earth. The Aztec gods choose five teenagers to fight them as the next generation of Power Rangers. Moderate violence alert.Power Rangers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 23 - Words: 59,172 - Reviews: 77 - Updated: 3-8-12 - Published: 9-2-11 - Complete8. Mighty Morphin' Muppet Rangers reviewsWhen the Muppets' world is attacked by a new evil overlord, Doctor Bunsen Honeydew selects-you know what? I can't tell you more of what to expect than the title already does. Extreme silliness ahead. Oneshot.Crossover - Power Rangers & Muppet Show - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,541 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-29-11 - Kermit - Complete9. Welcome » reviewsThe newest generation of Rangers is welcomed- -more or less- -into the Ranger family. Third in the Letters Between Rangers spinoffs, though the order isn't particularly important.Power Rangers - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,647 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-18-11 - Published: 8-4-11 - Mia & Cameron W. - Complete10. Power Rangers: Legion of Monsters » reviewsThe Alchemist, in his plot to destroy the Stellar Corps Rangers, recruits teenagers whose pasts involved Power Rangers, and gives them powers based on classic monsters. Begins at Stellar Corps chapter 5, but both are independent stories. Color swaps have been made in anticipation of revisions.Power Rangers - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 19 - Words: 45,218 - Reviews: 69 - Updated: 8-20-11 - Published: 4-16-11 - Complete11. Power Rangers: Stellar Corps » reviewsThe Crack in the Byzantium's wall may not have led to the end of the universe. Now an army of Weeping Angels is loose in the Power Rangers universe, and former cleric Marco has assembled a team to combat them.Crossover - Doctor Who & Power Rangers - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 56,918 - Reviews: 76 - Updated: 8-19-11 - Published: 3-5-11 - Complete12. Things I Am Not Allowed To Do In Power Rangers » reviewsWhat the fandom has been lacking since someone wrote such a list for Harry Potter. Chapter 10 now has its framing device, but aside from a few more similar additions which would not trigger Story Alert, this is complete.Power Rangers - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 50 - Words: 46,692 - Reviews: 271 - Updated: 8-15-11 - Published: 2-24-11 - Complete13. How To Write Bad Fanfiction » reviewsBased on the How To Write Badly Well blog, this fic carefully walks through all the steps to creating a truly horrific fanfic. Applicable to any fandom, involves several nonsensical Star Trek crossovers in later chapters. Badfic summaries are always cut oCrossover - StarTrek: The Original Series & A-Team - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 10 - Words: 15,635 - Reviews: 40 - Updated: 7-21-11 - Published: 4-24-11 - Murdock - Complete14. House Call reviewsWhen Fire Heart becomes mysteriously ill, Clare calls up an old ally to help. Second of the Letters Between Rangers spinoffs, but no special order of reading required. Oneshot.Power Rangers - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 940 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-17-11 - Clare & Aisha C. - Complete15. From Out of the Shadows reviewsA pair of mysterious Rangers attack every Ranger and villain base, on one specific day. Can the Rangers stop them before it's too late?Power Rangers - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,727 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-1-11 - Dustin B. & Chip - Complete
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