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since	: 10-11-02, id: 279696, Profile Updated: 03-04-09

Author has written 7 stories for Indiana Jones, Patriot, Matrix, and Saving Private Ryan.

experienced writer especially in poetry and short stories and even songs. i will not accept rude, criticizing, or anonymous reviews. I especially will not accept any reviews that say my characters are "out of character". LET ME WRITE MY OWN STORIES!

my band: http://www.myspace.com/mooncyclerecordings

solo project: http://www.myspace.com/jonathanbaltzly

poetry: http://www.poetrypoem.com/mooncycle

original stories: http://www.storypen.com/mooncycle

video: http://www.jbbremerton.com

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1. Upham's Redemption reviews
An aternate scene dealing with Mellish's death.
Saving Private Ryan - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-11-06 - Complete

2. The Matrix: Reprogrammed reviews
An alternate version of the original Matrix movie. Please R&R
Matrix - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,669 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-29-05 - Neo & Morpheus - Complete

3. Self Substantiation reviews
This is a record of those who have been subject to self substantiation, i.e. freed from the matrix by their own will. Please r&r
Matrix - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 758 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-22-04 - Neo & Niobe

4. The Other Side of the Real World
Events surrounding the first coming of the One. Please R&R
Matrix - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,153 - Published: 2-16-04

5. Doors reviews
Story of the first Matrix hacker to enter the hallway. please R&R
Matrix - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,488 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-16-04

6. gabriel's revenge reviews
an alternate scene where gabriel kills tavington and changes the course of the film. a must read! PG for violence.
Patriot - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 572 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 10-19-02

7. Indiana Jones and the Terror of Nepal reviews
Indy goes to Mt. Everest to solve a murder case. PG rating for violence.
Indiana Jones - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,610 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-13-02