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Krystal Lily Potter
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since: 11-07-02, id: 291146, Profile Updated: 04-26-09
country: Canada
Author has written 16 stories for Harry Potter, and Kingdom Hearts.

Screen Name: Krystal Lily Potter
Name: Kaylee
Age: 20
Hair: Dark Blonde
Eye: Blue
Nationality: Canadian and proud of it!

Favorite Movies: Transformers, Dark Knight, Pirates of the Caribbean (all three), National Treasure, Jurassic Park, almost all Disney movies
Favorite Songs: Wishes, There is Life, Just Stand Up & The Last Night (I know...random...)
Favorite Video Games: Kingdom Hearts (I, II & re:CoM), DDR, Mario Kart Wii, Brain Age (What can I say, it's addicting!), Pokemon (hell ya! Old school!), Super Mario 64 DS(how I miss my N64), and DDR Disney Grooves.
Favorite Books: Harry Potter (1-7), Dan Brown Books in general, Michael Crichton books & any book that has some interesting murder/mystery/horror/sciency-stuff to it.
Favorite Types of Fic: Harry Potter, Kingdom Hearts, Final Destination, Pirates of the Caribbean
Favorite Genre: Drama with romance and adventure and sometimes a bit of horror mixed in.

Favorite Couples:

Harry Potter:
Harry/Hermione
Ron/Lavender
Ron/Luna
Neville/Luna
Ginny/Dean
Neville/Ginny
Ginny/Draco

Kingdom Hearts:
Sora/Kairi
Roxas/Namine

Pirates of the Caribbean:
Will/Elizabeth

Pet Peeves of Fanfiction (much of which I am guilty of):

1. When people, anyone, bash a story because of a certain couple in it. It doesn't matter if the couple isn't likely to happen or will not happen (an example is H/Hr from Harry Potter), this is fanfiction people! It doesn't have to be realistic. People should just learn to respect different opinions and, if reading a story with a couple they don't support, just comment on the quality of writing, not bash the story simply because someone likes (for example) H/G but it's a H/Hr story. I make it a point to just accept that people like different ships and not make a big deal out of it like some people, even if I really really hate it.

2. Netspeak in stories or any type formal writing at all. I don't care if in a text message or instant messaging, or even author's notes, if there are things like 'lol' and 'u' instead of 'you' or 'r' instead of 'are', but seeing it in stories (or essays like some of my friends used to do in High School) is very angering. I can't stand it, and if someone is doing that they really are not ready to write and post something.

3. Author's Notes in the middle of stories. Yes I know I used to do it something bad, but I refuse to interrupt a story with a useless (lol) or anything else like that. Not only is it annoying (I've read several stories where a person interrupts every second or third line) but it also makes a person want to skip over any set of brackets that may hold important information (that is actually in the story and pertains to it, like this little note right now). If there is something a writer wants to explain, they should put a number by the word or phrase and explain it in a separate AN.

4. Keep Author's Notes at the beginning short. Some people will look at this one and say, "Wow, she is such a hypocrite". I know mine can be a little bigger, but I mean don't put replies to reviews and everything BEFORE a story. Save them for author's notes at the end so people can just happily skip them over if there's nothing important. If there is something important I suggest making it stand out in bold and italics or maybe spaced out more than the rest.

5. People who review and say, "This story sucks, stop writing" or something else to that effect. That's just useless flaming. You don't have to like what I write, but if you don't just clearly tell me why and suggest what I can do better. (I know that I make typos and I always make stupid grammar mistakes, but I don't have a beta reader and I'm not really that trusting in other people.) I support constructive criticism, but flaming is the most useless thing anyone can do. Half of the time flamers themselves don't even know how to write very well.

6. People who beg for reviews or only say they'll update if they get so many reviews. I know it may seem frustrating at first if you don't get many reviews (I feel your pain) but believe me, begging isn't going to get you any more. Many people (I know from discussing this with other people) would rather read and review a story that they know is going to keep going and get finished. So to all the newbies who may read this (not many probably) or anyone else, if a story gets no reviews or only one or two in the first chapter or two, don't give up. Keep pushing yourself and keep working. Just please, don't beg for reviews. Once again, I know I sound like a hypocrite.

7. People who post author's notes as chapters saying WHY they haven't updated. For the love of heavens people, please don't do this anymore. Not only do you get people's hopes up thinking there's another chapter (if it's a good fic), but you also get those same people pretty angry when they look at the chapter and realize it's an author's note. I thought stories that did this were supposed to get deleted off of the site, but maybe I'm wrong. Again, I know I was guilty for this once upon a time, but that ended awhile ago.

8. Self-Inserts. I just, don't enjoy them. Some are well written, yes, but most of them aren't. I don't really have a big spiel for this, I just really don't like them.

Writing Goals, Ideas and Updates:

Shadows of the Beginning - Prequel to Shadows of a Dream. My AU of Birth by Sleep, sort of. It's mostly based around Ventus and his connection to Sora, and the moments that led up to his death.

Possibilities:

Shadows of a Dream: Final Mix - Still not sure HOW I'm going to post this on the site, if I should just overwrite the story I already have or start updating it from scratch...but I think I have 10 or 11 extra chapters planned out for this one and I'm altering some of the chapters I already wrote...in some cases a lot.

Shadows of Reality: Final Mix - Same as above. I'm not exactly sure how many extra chapters I have planned, but it's a fair chunk if I remember right.

Into the Darkness - While this is STILL on hiatus, I've been looking into ways to starting it again. Right now I don't have ANY of the original files kicking around, they're on the PC somewhere, but I'll see what I can do. This one is less likely than the other ones though.

Random Oneshots for series I haven't written before...let alone read! Holly doesn't think I can write things that I'm currently not obsessed with. It's my goal to eventually prove her wrong so I think I'll be looking into writing one shots for things I do like, and things I haven't watched since I was a kid. Her suggestions: 1 Harry Potter, 1 Kingdom Hearts (I think I can safely say this is done), 1 Eragon, 1 Pokemon, 1 PotC, 1 Digimon, 1 Star Wars, 1 Final Destination...and a few other things. Not sure if I'll get around to this, but I'll see.

Pictures to go with Shadows of a Dream:

Midori & Crysita

Savior Keyblade

Sacrifice Keyblade

Twilight Keyblade

Chain of Memories Keyblade

Midori Naito

If anyone wants to contact me, PM me on this site or send an email to krystal.lily.potter@hotmail.com. I might not get around to replying right away but I promise, I will reply eventually.

I dislike writing disclaimers in my fics, so I'm writing one on my profile that applies to everything I write. Do you honestly think that I would spend my time writing here if I was getting paid by Square Enix to make the plot line for Kingdom Hearts, or if my name was JK Rowling? No. Moral of the story: I own nothing but my ideas and my OCs.

~Krystal Lily Potter~

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1. Shadows of Beginnings » reviews
All stories have beginnings and all stories have endings. Only when one brother's story comes to an end does the other brother's begin. Through tragedy, pain and darkness, light will rise, but this is only the shadows of the beginning. -Prequel-
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 17 - Words: 58,083 - Reviews: 132 - Updated: 5-20-09 - Published: 2-16-09 - Ventus & Sora - Complete
2. Now and Forever reviews
Scattered petals, sparkling dresses, smiling faces, slow music and, of course, him. Who was he? The one perfect guy that would stand there and wait for the slow music to start on the day when smiling faces were plentiful. S/K
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,868 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-30-09 - Sora & Kairi - Complete
3. Shadows of Reality » reviews
Destiny controls us all, and when it decides that the adventure isn't over and that the past must be left behind, all we can do is embrace the future and accept the shadows of reality. S/K, R/N, OC/Ri/OC & others
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 43 - Words: 169,575 - Reviews: 542 - Updated: 1-12-09 - Published: 8-24-08 - Sora & Kairi - Complete
4. As Beautiful As You » reviews
It was supposed to be the perfect night. Too bad fate never worked out the way Kairi wanted it to. Sora was just going to have to fix this, especially since he considered it his fault. The question he wondered was how? A Two-Shot, Christmas based fic.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 16,209 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 12-23-08 - Published: 12-19-08 - Sora & Kairi - Complete
5. Beach reviews
She didn’t understand him. It was just a beach. A beach they saw every day, that was nothing special.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,959 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-27-08 - Sora & Kairi - Complete
6. Fan Girls reviews
Oneshot! Sora and Riku had to deal with a lot of rumors since they came home, but this, this one seriously took the cake. Sora/Kairi and mentions of Riku/Selphie, Riku/Other
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,633 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 9-2-08 - Sora & Kairi - Complete
7. Shadows of a Dream » reviews
Half a year has passed, and life on Destiny Islands couldn’t be worse. Darkness, however, still creeps in the shadows, waiting to strike the purest hearts and souls of all. The only way to fight it: look beyond the shadows of a dream. SK, RN & RiOC
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 36 - Words: 93,891 - Reviews: 224 - Updated: 8-31-08 - Published: 5-30-08 - Sora & Kairi - Complete
8. Into the Darkness » reviews
History was rewritten and a much darker world is in place. Harry Potter is sent on a mission out in the muggle world, to recruit muggleborn witches and wizards for the light. He stumbles upon a certain witch and his life will never be the same again.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 11 - Words: 31,468 - Reviews: 67 - Updated: 3-13-08 - Published: 8-1-07 - Harry P. & Hermione G.
9. Harry Potter and the Seven Split Soul » reviews
Now that Dumbledore is gone the wizarding world has fallen into a place of fear with only one beacon of hope left: Harry Potter. Facing evils that he’d never thought he’d have to endure, Harry sets out with Hermione and Ron to find the four horcruxes...
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 34 - Words: 150,584 - Reviews: 357 - Updated: 4-1-07 - Published: 7-14-06 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
10. Harry Potter and the Scars of Time » reviews
COMPLETE! Sequel to Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince AU. Harry’s last year at Hogwarts has finally come but that doesn’t mean things will be any easier for him. After last year’s horrifying events the school thinks that nothing worse could happen. T
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 29 - Words: 165,871 - Reviews: 894 - Updated: 4-9-06 - Published: 11-23-04 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
11. Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince » reviews
COMPLETE! As Harry and his friends enter their sixth year at Hogwarts they don’t enter the cheerful world they left behind. They enter a world covered in a thick blanket of fear. It only hits Harry now how important he truly is when...full summary inside!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 32 - Words: 162,919 - Reviews: 901 - Updated: 11-23-04 - Published: 6-28-04 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
12. Mama Will Hold Me reviews
One-shot. In Tribute to the lives taken on 911 and all the families who were torn apart by it. A little girl remembers that day like it was yesterday, even though she was only 4-years-old when it happened. Watch as the tragedy. A little HHr
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,840 - Reviews: 39 - Published: 9-11-04 - Harry P. - Complete
13. The Bond of Blood » reviews
(COMPLETE)An inside look at the was three certain wizards can change between the years of 1995 and 1996 (Harry and co. 6th year at Hogwarts). The world is slowly both falling apart and coming together at the same time. Complete!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,568 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-15-04 - Published: 3-30-04 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
14. Harry Potter and the Elements of Life » reviews
FINISHED Join Harry, Hermione, Ron and two new characters in their 5th year with danger, death, heirlooms, powers, new friends and new romances HH Other couples coming soon
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 62,440 - Reviews: 178 - Updated: 2-21-04 - Published: 1-2-03 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
15. Aftermath of the War reviews
The aftermath of the finial battle of Voldemort Well one outcome. Harry wonder's why he bothers to live anymore and turns to his mother for help.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,384 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 6-27-03 - Harry P. & Lily Evans P. - Complete
16. Harry Potter and the Legend of Gryffindor » reviews
FINISHED What if James & Lily Potter lived? What if Dudley was a wizard? Well this is MY take of Book 1. Students are disappearing and it's up to Harry, Ron and Hermione to find them.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 18,985 - Reviews: 76 - Updated: 11-23-02 - Published: 11-7-02 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
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