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| HimeFlye |
Author has written 15 stories for Naruto, Avatar: Last Airbender, Gosick/ゴシック, and Shuumatsu no Laughter/終末のラフター. Hi. There's not much to say about me. I'm an aspiring writer who dreams of getting published someday and making a living off it. I am well on my way I think since I already have two rejection letters (both of which are framed and hanging on my wall.) The second was a little harder to take. So I decided to try my hand at a bit of fan fiction and get some feedback. Some of my favorite books are: 'Mistborn' by Brandon Sanderson 'The Lord of the Rings' by JRR Tolkien 'The Work and The Glory' by Gerald N Lund 'No Flying in the House' by Betty Brock 'Ella Enchanted' by Gail Carson Levine What all serious fan fiction writers want to know: "Why, WHY do people take the time to read a 3'000 word chapter, yet not the two minuets AT MOST it takes to review? Do unto others, give helpful reviews! | |||||
1. Path of Sand: A Kankuro Story » reviews"I know you lied to us before. Do not lie to me again" The Kazekage said. "Tell the truth this time." Kankuro felt like he was pressed between two brick walls. How was he supposed to explain time travel to his father when he didn't understand how it had happened himself? All he had wanted to do was save Gaara. . .Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 21,571 - Reviews: 49 - Updated: 1-21-13 - Published: 9-22-12 - Kankuro & Gaara - Complete2. Shuumatsu no Birthday reviewsHaru glared, feeling fearful of the people around her. But they weren't watching her. They weren't whispering at her, they weren't cursing her to a painful half death. . . They were talking about her brother. Luca laughed. "Haru, are you still crying over the cake!"Shuumatsu no Laughter/終末のラフター - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,999 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-20-13 - Complete3. Pieces » reviewsChapter 5 Itachi - Someday you'll rise to fly, and you will go to the very top of the world. But once you get there you will look back down, and miss everything you left behind.Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,593 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 11-11-12 - Published: 2-8-12 - Itachi U. & Sasuke U.4. Proof reviews"You're just an ignorant captive princess. You know nothing of love. You don't have the ability to love."Gosick/ゴシック - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 588 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-24-12 - Victorique B. & Kazuya K.5. Desert Fox » reviews"They used to be our allies a long time ago. A time that ended with my birth! You said he was great, but no one could be great who would. . ." Gaara's eyes flashed open, "Seal a demon within their child?" Tami Nara turned away, staring at her shadow.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,175 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 6-24-12 - Published: 5-13-12 - Temari & Shikamaru N.6. The Bandit Princess reviews"It's going to be alright." Toph said, rubbing the badger mole's nose. "I'm not going to let anything happen to you."Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 903 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-16-12 - Toph7. A city by Any Other Name would be GREAT reviews"Names are very important. It will bring the aura of the city and help it become the place we want it to be." Aang and Zuko both thought. "Penguin City!" Aang cried, jumping out of his chair.Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 690 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 4-6-12 - Aang & Zuko8. Hello, Goodbye reviews"Naruto You're so beautiful." she whispered, fingering a tiny strand of silky damp hair. In her mind, she saw a thousand images pass. It was their life. . . Together.Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,112 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 3-18-12 - Kushina U. & Naruto U. - Complete9. The Safest Place » reviewsNaruto sat on the floor, rubbing his head. "WHAT? I said I loved her. Not that I was going to marry her!" The toad smacked him across the head with her stirring spoon, leaving a red lump. "Naruto-chan!" Naruto paled, "No . . . I didn't mean that!"Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,782 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 2-14-12 - Naruto U. & Hinata H. - Complete10. Green Card: Gaara's answer reviewsBoth her brothers nodded without actually hearing her. They were each intently looking at their cards.Naruto - Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 948 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-29-12 - Gaara & Temari - Complete11. Night Watch reviews"We're not used to the snow and cold Gaara. You can get sick." "I'm alright." Gaara said. "Well I'm not only your bodyguard, I'm your sister. I outrank you. So there."Naruto - Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,684 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 12-19-11 - Gaara & Temari - Complete12. I Want a Brother » reviews"Why'd I have to end up with a dumb sister? Why couldn't I have a brother instead?" "You have a brother Kankuro." His eyes widened, "I do?" Yashamaru nodded, "You'll meet him, tonight." Kankuro smiled, A brother. Gaara. How come no one told him?Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,535 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 10-31-11 - Published: 10-8-11 - Temari & Kankuro - Complete13. Hate reviews"But he betrayed you," Gaara said. "How can you still care when he betrayed you?" "I don't care Gaara," Naruto said, "Sasuke's still my friend" Gaara's lips turned to a small frown. Shukaku stirred uncomfortably.Naruto - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,479 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-12-11 - Gaara & Naruto U. - Complete14. Gaara's Rei reviews"I keep having bad dreams that bad guys are coming." She crawled under the blanket further. "trying to get you?" he asked. "No," she whispered, huddling deeper, "trying to get you."Naruto - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,050 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-15-11 - Gaara - Complete15. Two Caged Birds » reviews"Just stop it! All you ever do is whine and complain; 'I'm hungry', 'I'm thirsty', 'I want a bird'. You got one so stop it!" Hinata ran from the room crying, leaving Neji shaking in anger. "Hinata!" he ran after her. He was going to get in trouble.Naruto - Rated: K - English - Family/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,560 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 7-18-11 - Published: 6-23-11 - Neji H. & Hinata H. - Complete
