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HI EVERY ONE IM NARUALGEEK OR CAT, AQUARING, OR BAKURA/AKEFIA/RYOU, SHADOW , OR LIGHT MAN DO I HAVE A LOT OF NICK NAMES LOLZ
AND IM NATURALGEEKS YAMI NIGHT!! AKA HER BALCK SIDE IM THE ONE WITH THE TEMPER LOLZ
we love anime and good comets so plz no bad comets XD lolz and i have a temper to!
or i will get you
YAMI!!!! THATS IT NO MORE BLEACH FOR A WILE!!! GOT IT!!!
AWWWWW MAN *pouts*
anyway WE HOPE WE CAN WRITE GOOD STORIES!!!
Speaking of stories why the heck haven't you writing a good one yet!
I ALREADY TOLD YOU MY COMPUTER WONT LET ME USE MY MICROSOFT WRITING THINGY WITHOUT THE PRODUCT KEY THAT MY DAD LOST WHAT 2 YEARS AGO SO BACK OFF NIGHT! *gives night a glare satin would run from and then commit suicide*
night: OK calm down cat please calm down no...NOT THE BASEBALL BAT! PLEASE PUT IT- OWWWWWW!
me: SHUT UP NOW!! *gets ready to swing again*
age: um no f*ing way!
personality: happy go lucky girl with a smile always on her face, caring, helpful, loving, and smart BUT WARNING IF MAD RUN FOR YOUR LIFE! SHE OWNS A MAGICAL BASEBALL BAT THAT NEVER MISSES IT'S TARGET!
fav. things to do: pretty much anything
where she lives: not gonna tell ever!
name: Nicknames will do but prefers shadow night made the account for my late b-day present.
favorite TV shows: anything anime except 4 little kid shows like Dora *shudders*
magic: is an mutt (Angle, dark angle, were-wolf, dragon, vampire, sorceress, etc.), fly, levitate, freeze, seduce, hypnotize, sing you to sleep, play any instrument, make you happy, get rid of badness, save things like plants, animals, humans, etc., comfort, shape shift, melt, weather, speak to animals, telepathic, has ESP (physic), and any magical power that i am to lazy to write down.
age: 5,000 years
personality: only nice to close friends, sometimes smiles, dose not really care 4 anyone except crushes and me of course, NEVER helps! is loving, smart, sneaky, dangerous, is my black side, can be mean if chooses to, DO NOT GET HER MAD!!! I REPEAT NEVER EVER GET NIGHT MAD!! SHE WILL GET U AND THEN GET HER CHAINSAW O_O"
fav. things to do: torment people, scare people, break up couples, hurt people, embarrass them,
lives: currently resides at my house but if upon finding a millennium item she can move into that item if possible (millennium rod, ring, puzzle, or made up millennium items like the bracelet! u will see later on trust me. -_-")
name: night (or kitkit my personal nickname i use sometimes _)
fav TV shows: anything anime with fight and gore (all time fav. bleach)
magic: is a dark angle (will explain in a fanfic), brings back the dead as slaves, fly, levitate, smoke, disasters, curses, seduction, shape shifting, freeze, melt, again lazy same as geek just darker
age: 3 months
personality: playful, energetic, happy, sweet, cuddleable , forgivable, soft, caring, helpful, fun, and lovable, evil, vicious, fierce (half sided cat)
fav. things to do: fall asleep in your lap, play games, help out, be mean, rude
lives: with me and night!
magic: can transform into a cloud and can turn into anything in that form (like a cloud car or cloud pancakes!)
AND ANOTHER THING NIGHT *starts sobbing* WHATS WRONG WITH ME WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
night: right now just about everything bakura fangirl *sighs* get up and do the dishes or i kill the kitten
me: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT FLUFFY AND I MAY LIKE BAKURA BUT DO NOT STALK HIM LIKE YOU DO NIGHT *runs to do dishes and get away from night*
night: *grabs chainsaw* COME BACK HERE YOU PUNK OF A HIKIRA! (light)
WOOT! ITS MY BIRTHDAY! SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Night: great...-_-" Sugar High lucky me.
Hey! Its Shadow! I just wanted to say that Im doing something pretty special... OK! Well I am accepting requests for any shipping with Ryou, Bakura, Akefia or all 3! So send me a pm or request it through a review if your an anonymous person! XD But I do have a few rules! I cant write anything above T so that means ONLY fluff! UNDERSTAND! Also I'm sorry but I cant make the pairing with people like Vivian or Mokuba or any other weird pairing like that! I JUST CANT! I'm only used to writing hikari/yami sorry but its true. -_-" sorry for being a wimp!
[ Please make a footnote if the applicable trait is common in the universe of the character, for that will nullify its status as a Sue trait. ]
Point Counting : Night
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[X] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
[X] They are physically strong.
[X] They have a rare hair/fur colour.
[X] Their eyes are an unusual colour.
[ ] This eye color happens to be red.
[X] Their eyes change colour.
[X] They have wings.
[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
[X] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (Millennium bat)
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
[X] They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (Mutt)
[ ] They never knew one/both their parents.
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
[ ] They are emo/cutesy.
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[X] They struggle to stay sane.
[X] They are a psycho.
[X] They have multiple personalities.
[X] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. (She IS a MUTT HELLO!)
[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[X] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
[ ] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name. (Night isn't that unusual)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age. 15 isn't young.
[X] They are connected with a certain element.
[X] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[X] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood. ( Both me and her are rejected by Ra and Osiris)
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared. (Must I say It MUTT!)
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives. (Most of our lives)
[X] They are/used to hide/hiding from someone/something. (We are still hiding from our dad.)
[X] They have a rare blood type. (It's not even on the blood type list! XD The doctors are scared of her!)
[ ] They cry blood.
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
[X] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'. (Egypt)
[X] They are very mysterious/dark. (well she is my darker half!)
[ ] They are very lively/happy. (... -_-" no... just no OK.)
[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient. (NO!)
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession/power here].
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (A neckless our mother gave her to control her powers.)
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have a some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have insomnia.
Overall Points : 31
Point Reduction : 3 Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements :
[ ] They smoke. [ ] They are an alcoholic. [ ] They are overweight. ] They are addicted to drugs. [X] They have a short temper. [x] They enjoy bullying others. [x] They do not care much about others. [X] They are relatively emotionless.
Final Score : RESULT: 19
05 : Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
06-15 : Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 : Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 : Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... right now.
Me: NEVER! Night is Night I can't change that.
Night: Tell me to change and you WILL die!
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