| Angel of Fate1 |
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Author has written 20 stories for Fire Emblem, D.Gray-Man, Final Fantasy VII, Full Metal Panic, Harvest Moon, Rise of the Guardians, and Clannad. UPDATE: FINALLY. UNRAVEL IS UPDATED AND OFF HIATUS. ENJOY! -Hitomi (10/04/12) UPDATE: :3 Writing a certain chapter for a certain fanfic after putting it off for so long You'll see! -Hitomi (10/03/12) UPDATE: Just letting you guys know I'm still alive. I graduated in March, so I officially got my Bachelor's degree. However, I've been unable to write Unravel or my other works due to writer's block, preparing to study for Masters, and the hope of finding work. I'm sorry if I haven't been able to update for so long. And I'm also letting you know I haven't given up on Unravel or anything else yet (Unravel especially since I know many of you have been keeping an eye on it). Actually, I haven't been able to tell you guys, but it's recent that my DGM OC Rue got stolen (long story...). I'll explain this when I have time. Perhaps, this is also why I've been holding back from Unravel too, so my inspiration has been a little lost lately. Right now, writer's block is holding me back since I'm not quite sure how to move Unravel forward anymore (though the idea is still building up in my mind). That and I've been restraining myself on rewriting it since I have to finish writing it first, right? Anyway, I'm just leaving this here, so you know of my well being and whereabouts. -Hitomi (05/21/12) Since it's been so long writing fanfiction after having disappeared, let me reintroduce myself. -My name is Hitomi, which is my usual alias, though I go by other names too such as Blue (or Bluey) and Alice. No, I'm not telling you my real name as that's reserved for people who really know me. My nicknames in real life are Kris, Krissy, and Krispy, so draw your own conclusions on what my real name is. XD And then, there's the other nicknames that relate to either certain characteristics I have (notably my stinginess, temper, and boyish ways) or my height (let's not get into that either). As you can see, I've been on fanfiction.net for a long time, even though it may not look like it due to lack of fics on my pages (I deleted my old fics from long ago). Though, I've recently started to write fanfiction again after the writer's block has been driving me crazy. So, for those who have the courage to flame me for whatever reason (usually because of me offering constructive criticism in my reviews), don't act butthurt when I say my feelings honestly. Although I am still learning how to write (I don't claim to be perfect in my writing), I've been writing for a long time, so I already know what I'm talking about when it comes to pointing out writing flaws. Don't want my advice? Suit yourself, but there are people who can be quite harsh in their reviews than myself. Fanfiction I've written so far (that counts the deleted): Current Work Title: Unravel Genres: Friendship/Romance Pairing(s): Lavi x OC (may add in other pairings, depending on how the writing will go) Full Summary: With a new member in the Black Order, things will take getting used to... Especially when all the newcomer knows is how to kill and only that. What were they thinking, letting a former assassin join the Black Order? But, this'll do her good... As she tries to find her purpose in life and experiences things she hasn't felt or gone through before... Status: In Progress (writing Chapter 40 and story will go under a gradual rewrite) Unravel Official Website OC Information Name: Rue Marucut Full Profile (drawn by WaveringHeart on DA) Black Order Exorcist Files: Rue Marucut 1.0 (REVAMP), Black Order Exorcist Files: Rue Marucut 2.0, Extended Profile Information Fanart Chapter V - Shadows of Doubt (drawn by WaveringHeart on DA) Irony Genres: Multiple Pairings: Undecided (and I'm not telling, anyway, because I want it to be a surprise!) Full Summary: (yet to be written) Status: In Progress This is the section for Irony I just wanted to make this since it is an in progress fic like Unravel, so I consider it as a priority to work on. And since there are some OCs in there that have appeared in the story, I will put them here. Hitomi AKA Lenore - The runaway princess from an arranged marriage and a tactician with a enigmatic past of sorts. Is shown to be calm and indifferent when it comes to tactics; however, her true personality will come out when she's around certain people, even though that's not her intention. She specializes in swordplay and under the guidance of a certain character, so she's a Myrmidon. Full Profile (has yet to be drawn) Sprite Portrait - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/SLL/HitomiSpritePortrait.gif (This is how she looks like in Lyn's route. Did this recently too Please, don't redistribute, modify, or steal!) Long hair version (this being when she's in Eliwood's and Hector's stories) - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/SLL/HitomiSpritePortraitlonghair.gif Keiya AKA Cythras/Chancellor of Badon - He's the person Hitomi's running away from because he is her fiance in their arranged marriage. He has a "cool" facade but, most of the time, he acts like an airheaded fool because of his tendencies to skirt chase women. Don't let him fool you with that, though, as he is competent when it comes to tactics and combat. He's a Mage. Full Profile (has yet to be drawn) Sprite Portrait - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/SLL/KeiyaSpritePortrait.gif (how he looks like in Lyn's route) Straight hair version (this may possibly be him when it's Eliwood's/Hector's routes, but I might change my mind since he looks like he matured in looks and that'd be too quick in that one year time span) - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/SLL/Irony-Keiyamatureversion.gif Kate AKA Marchioness Kathelet - She is considered as motherly and very concerned about everyone. She yells a lot when angry and doesn't like it when Erk makes her look stupid. Her common phrase when lecturing, "What were you thinking!?" Kate is a Valkyrie. Full Profile - http://sheezyart.com/art/view/1044748/ Sprite Portrait (need to ask Kate about this if she still has it since she made the portrait herself as long ago as I made Rose's) Rose - Bodyguard of the missing princess, Hitomi. She's a calm, serious person who works hard in her duties (although she's soft towards the princess, be it when she is on or off duty). When outside her duties, she tends to be more relaxed and is a considerately open person. Her fighting class is Halberdier as she specializes in lances. Full Profile (has yet to be drawn) Sprite Portrait - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/SLL/RoseSpritePortrait.jpg (I made this myself a few years ago by combining some FE sprites (haven't done spriting for so long either and I feel like I should go back to it), so don't redistribute, modify or steal!) Hikaru AKA soon-to-be Marquess *censored* - Hitomi's twin brother, who will be the one to inherit the throne. The eye and hair color are all the twins have in order of being alike for their personalities are opposites in every way. In spite of this, Hikaru is fond towards his sister and would do anything to ensure her safety and happiness (even if it means keeping the wary suitors at bay, fiance most especially included). He's an Assassin. Full Profile (has yet to be drawn) Sprite Portrait - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/SLL/HikaruSpritePortrait.gif (Just did this recently Please, don't redistribute, modify or steal!) Sure, everyone's tempted to call out on Sue as soon as they spot an original character in a fanfic of a certain fandom with whatever accusations there are (beautiful looks, sad past, etc.). But someone from Twilightsucks . com has this nice, little quote that states on what a Sue really is (in their opinion, at least) and why I agree with it: "A Sue is a character that is the author's darling, that always gets their way, never gets hurt no matter what happens, has awesome powers nobody else has, gets the main role of the story and succeeds with no effort in whatever it is they're doing. Get it in your heads." | |||||
1. Locked Heart » reviewsAn incomplete Guardian living as a normal girl. She is the spring spirit, well known as the Queen of May, but her potential has yet to show. Then again, how can she prove herself when she's a wallflower? -eventual Jack Frost x OC-Rise of the Guardians - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,083 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-28-12 - Published: 12-5-12 - Jack Frost2. Unravel » reviews*pre-DGM timeline from Chapters 1 to 20; eventual Lavi x OC* With a new member in the Black Order, things will take getting used to... Especially when all the newcomer knows is how to kill and only that. *UPDATED AND OFF HIATUS*D.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 43 - Words: 268,776 - Reviews: 250 - Updated: 10-4-12 - Published: 5-30-09 - Lavi3. Unravel: The Secret Files reviewsA mini series/collection of side stories and what not related to my DGM fic, Unravel. Dedicated to my fans and readers of Unravel. Read at your own risk! XDD.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,173 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-27-124. Everything Comes and Goes reviewsA new start is all she wants. The circumstances around this decision are unknown and things are not what they seem to be... The only thing she knows what to do is move forward and never look back. OC/Heroine x ? Unknown PairingHarvest Moon - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-25-12 - Lillian5. Calling You Home reviews"What, no 'Welcome home' for me?" - Based on Chapter 207 and before. Spoilers. Kanda x OC up to readers whether platonic or romanticD.Gray-Man - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,334 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-23-12 - Kanda Yuu - Complete6. Irony » reviews-Tentative title; Tactician-centric- Running away to fight and/or find yourself is one thing. Running away to escape from your arranged marriage is another. -Multiple genres; pairings undecided-Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 43,469 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-25-11 - Published: 2-9-11 - Tactician/Mark7. Unforgettable reviews-FE7; one-shot- The first impression people make will always stay with you.Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 850 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-18-11 - Bartre & Karla - Complete8. I'll Be Your Last reviews-One-shot- Just when he was going to turn in for the night to bravely face another day in spite of his loss, it seems that he wasn't expecting her to wait for him the whole time he's been away... -Zack x OC; a hint of Zack x Aerith-Final Fantasy VII - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,685 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-5-11 - Zack F. & Angeal H. - Complete9. Soldier's Daughter reviewsA collection of drabbles and one-shots concerning Misae and memories of growing up with her parents, Sagara Sousuke and Chidori Kaname. Multi genres.Crossover - Full Metal Panic & Clannad - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 673 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-1-11 - Misae S.10. The Rose's Thorns reviewsIt's not easy, shouldering the pain of a deceased loved one. But always know that you're not alone. -One-shot; Zack x OC; Reno x OC friendship-Final Fantasy VII - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,674 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-12-11 - Zack F. & Reno - Complete11. Operation Social Butterfly reviewsTarget: A tomboy in her own world. Mission: Getting her to open up to the idea of going out and socializing. This is going to be difficult. Lavi x OC with a little of Allen x Lenalee. Birthday gift fic for Broken Glass Dolls. -AU-D.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,504 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-25-10 - Lavi12. Imperfect Valentine reviews*One-shot, Lavi x OC* Still being unable to understand what love is can be really frustrating at times, especially when being aware of your imperfections... But, all you need is just a tiny push to go forward and everything will be okay.D.Gray-Man - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,392 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-29-10 - Lavi - Complete13. Ice Flare » reviews*AU?/AR* Because information of the Heart is too vague, the Earl and the Noah Family go after their first target: Lavi. And he doesn't have a clue of this. And little does he know that, because of this, he has a bodyguard... *Lavi x OC* *on temp hiatus*D.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 24,071 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 4-22-10 - Published: 1-8-10 - Lavi14. The Price of Freedom reviews-One-shot; Lavi x OC- Running away and never looking back, we paid that steep price. However, since it's come to this, it doesn't mean that we're unhappy with how we lived our lives. We're happier than we've ever been...D.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,850 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-2-09 - Lavi - Complete15. From The Heart reviewsSomeone's view. . . On their obligation to protect their loved one, no matter what the cost. . . And deep thinking on it. . .Fire Emblem - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 837 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-23-0516. Love Thy Enemy reviewsFor Chris's FE fanfiction contest "Don't hold back, don't let go because, before you know it, your opportunity will go... To the world, you're just one person, but to one person, you could mean the world..." Karla's Point of View Bartre x KarlaFire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,953 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 2-4-05 - Bartre & Karla17. Whisper, Forbidden Tears reviews[Birthday Gift-fic for Link015, one-shot sequel to "Requiem", songfic to Evanescence's "Whisper"] The final battle, Light... There is one thing this tactician regrets... His death, she was the demise. [Tactician's POV. Don't like it, don't read it.]Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,084 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-5-04 - Complete18. Hello reviewsOne-shot, songfic for Evanescence's "Hello" Thoughts, feelings and skits of memories through a thief's eyes... Of how his loved one's demise... Matthew's Point of ViewFire Emblem - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,433 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-12-04 - Matthew & Leila - Complete19. Requiem reviews[One-Shot] How painful death can be... [Tactician's POV]Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,438 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6-18-04 - Complete20. Between Dreams and Reality reviewsI have no idea what made me write this... This is in my Point of View as well as all of the readers, that is, if they think the same way... I say the poem sucks, though...Fire Emblem - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 543 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-22-04