| Sweet Lu |
Author has written 42 stories for NCIS: Los Angeles. If you read any of my stories you will know immediately that my favorite character is Marty Deeks from NCIS:LA. He is the main focus in all of my stories. I have enjoyed creating a backstory for Deeks and delving into his childhood. I also love seeing what trouble he can get into and how the other members of the team respond to him and help him. He and Kensi are a couple in my world and seem to be having a wonderful time. My take on the team shows more emotion from the characters than on the show and that allows me to add a little more depth to their relationships. I like psychological drama and I explore that using Deeks. I have created several original characters who inhabit my stories from time to time, some good guys and some very, very bad guys. Hope you enjoy getting to know them. My favorite episodes are "Human Traffic"; "Personal"; "Plan B" and "Deliverance" from Season 2, but my all time favorite episode is "The Debt", episode 10 from Season 3. Whenever I need inspiration for a story, I watch that episode. It's how I picture him in my stories. Season 4 gave me "Free Ride", "Kill House", and now "Wanted". That last scene in "Wanted" was perfect. Thought ECO was brilliant in that last scene in "Parlay". His sensitive and expressive portrayal of Deeks at that moment made it one of my all-time favorite scenes. Then, of course, there was the finale...the best one ever, but making for a very, very long summer. I am a very visual person, and have had a long career in graphic design, so writing is a new adventure for me. I have written songs in the past, and the introductions to a multitude of iBooks, but never fiction. I work on getting better everyday. As you all know the characters from NCIS:LA are not mine, but the property of their creator Shane Brennan, the writers and CBS, and I thank them everyday for creating Marty Deeks and for hiring Eric Christian Olsen for the part. I do lay claim exclusively to my original characters, George and Joe Atwood, Elan Hand and Jim Littlefield, and I can't forget Pete Archuleta or Miguel Rodriquez, otherwise known as Miggy. This continues to br so much fun and now I'm addicted to writing. Thanks to all of you who read my stories and send along your comments, and for saving my stories to your favorite lists. I really appreciate each and every review. Your encouragement never fails to inspire me. | |||||||
1. Promises to Keep » reviewsDeeks is assigned to guard a little girl whose father is a high level researcher for the Navy. It's his first field assignment since recovering from his brutal ordeal. Reading the preceding two stories in this trilogy, "Judgement" and "Vengeance", will give context to this multi-chapter story, otherwise there are spoilers.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,782 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 6-19-13 - Published: 6-16-13 - M. Deeks & G. Callen2. A Question of Character reviewsAn exploration of Deeks' emotions during the final episode of the season and beyond as he tries to deal with Sam's lack of trust and what it might mean for his future at NCIS.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,704 - Reviews: 42 - Published: 6-10-13 - M. Deeks & S. Hanna - Complete3. Vengeance » reviewsThe sequel to Judgement. Deeks life has returned to normal, but the team continues to watch out for him in case the threat made against him becomes real. Suggest you read Judgement before reading this sequel. Includes entire team.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 39 - Words: 141,721 - Reviews: 755 - Updated: 4-2-13 - Published: 9-21-12 - M. Deeks - Complete4. Masks in the Darkness reviewsA story for Halloween. Kensi has to decide if Deeks is playing a prank or is in serious trouble on Halloween night.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,719 - Reviews: 35 - Published: 10-30-12 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete5. Judgement » reviewsAn exploration into Deeks' desire for revenge after the team is taken down by an arms dealer. Inspired by the season finale.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 37 - Words: 101,140 - Reviews: 619 - Updated: 9-9-12 - Published: 5-22-12 - M. Deeks & Hetty L. - Complete6. Treasures » reviewsHetty enlists Deeks' assistance in cataloging some of her treasured collections. They both realize their relationship is special and when Hetty finds herself in danger, she must rely on Deeks for help.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,639 - Reviews: 117 - Updated: 5-15-12 - Published: 4-21-12 - M. Deeks & Hetty L. - Complete7. Going Dark » reviewsDeeks and Callen go undercover as brothers in Istanbul to chase down a navy man selling sensitive intel and Sam goes along as backup.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 12 - Words: 29,363 - Reviews: 128 - Updated: 4-15-12 - Published: 3-17-12 - Complete8. Violence and Violins reviewsA very short exploration of Deeks' memories about growing up playing the violin.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 658 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 4-11-12 - M. Deeks - Complete9. Fault Line » reviewsDeeks struggles in the aftermath of a failed operation and the team must find a way to help him deal with overwhelming guilt.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 7 - Words: 12,623 - Reviews: 68 - Updated: 3-12-12 - Published: 3-5-12 - M. Deeks - Complete10. Solus » reviewsAssistant Director, Owen Granger sends Deeks on a dangerous mission that separates him from the rest of the team.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 42,273 - Reviews: 139 - Updated: 2-27-12 - Published: 2-2-12 - M. Deeks - Complete11. Discord » reviewsThe team starts to disintegrate during an operation and they all must figure out how to repair their broken relationships before it costs them one of their own.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 15 - Words: 36,356 - Reviews: 125 - Updated: 1-23-12 - Published: 1-5-12 - M. Deeks & G. Callen - Complete12. After the Aftermath reviewsDeeks and Kensi go on a road trip up the coast, but the ordeal Deeks suffered on Christmas haunt their time together. This is a sequel to Aftermath and July's Christmas, but it will stand alone.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,551 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-30-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete13. Aftermath reviewsSequel to July's Christmas. Kensi is heard about what happened and Deeks tries to resolve some of his personal issues.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,897 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-26-11 - Kensi B. & M. Deeks - Complete14. July's Christmas reviewsDeeks is undercover on Christmas Eve and fights to protect a girl in trouble. The whole team has a part in this story.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,516 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-17-11 - M. Deeks - Complete15. Photographic Memories reviewsDeeks receives an old photo in the mail and his world is turned upside down as long-buried memories are recalled and threaten to overwhelm him. The team struggles to help him. Dark theme.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,903 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 12-9-11 - M. Deeks - Complete16. The Junkie reviewsDeeks' undercover assignment for the LAPD puts him in danger as he tries to save Callen and Sam.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,879 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-1-11 - M. Deeks & G. Callen - Complete17. Friends reviewsDeeks has returned home after a trying undercover assignment that has left him injured.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,214 - Reviews: 24 - Published: 11-24-11 - M. Deeks - Complete18. Real Riches » reviewsDeeks goes undercover as a wealthy investor to infiltrate a syndicate using murder to further their reach for power. Hetty tries to teach him about the finer things in life and he's not sure he knows how to act like a rich man.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 18,068 - Reviews: 36 - Published: 11-22-11 - M. Deeks & Hetty L. - Complete19. Shelter reviewsDeeks is doing volunteer work at the shelter when gang trouble makes him wonder if he will survive the night.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,398 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 11-11-11 - M. Deeks - Complete20. A Lucky Man reviewsDeeks encounters a cop responsible for a blown undercover assignment and his anger and need for vengeance almost overwhelms him. The team struggles to save him as secret forces come into play.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,807 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-5-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete21. A Different Kind of Hero reviewsDeeks reconnects with a teacher who helped him in the past and whose memories shed light on his childhood.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,801 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 10-26-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete22. Sequel: Too Deep, Too Long reviewsThe team struggles to help Deeks deal with psychological problems after his five month undercover assignment with white supremacists.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,169 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-22-11 - M. Deeks & Nate G. - Complete23. Too Deep, Too Long reviewsDeeks has been deep undercover for a long time with a group of white supremacists planning a terrorist attack and it is taking a psychological toll on him that worries the team.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,761 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 10-18-11 - M. Deeks & S. Hanna - Complete24. A Common Bond reviewsWhen Deeks risks his career for a young abused boy, Callen has to fight to save them both.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,440 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10-10-11 - M. Deeks & G. Callen - Complete25. The Backup reviewsDeeks is brought in as a backup to Lauren Hunter who is undercover at a law firm. His alias is introduced as her boyfriend and Kensi is not happy.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,366 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10-4-11 - M. Deeks & Lauren H. - Complete26. One Kiss reviewsKensi and Deeks go undercover together and one kiss turns the operation into a dangerous situation for both of them.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,796 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 9-27-11 - Kensi B. & M. Deeks - Complete27. The Vulture reviewsDeeks finds himself back in the desert fighting for his life on an LAPD undercover assignment with human traffickers run by a vicious and dangerous man.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14,702 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-22-11 - M. Deeks - Complete28. Solitary Journey reviewsDeeks recalls the things and people he will miss as he lies dying after being captured during an assignment.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,981 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-22-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete29. July reviewsDeeks goes undercover as a homeless man to investigate a new drug dealer and is surprised by what he discovers about the man.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,924 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8-27-11 - M. Deeks - Complete30. The Haunting reviewsTwo detectives from Deeks' past push him and the team to the limit as he has to relive one of the darkest periods of his career and try to survive the aftermath.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,203 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-24-11 - M. Deeks - Complete31. Sequel: Forget and Remember reviewsDeeks has trouble dealing with his amnesia after being shot saving Sam on their first assignment as partners. The team struggles to help him. Please read "Forget and Remember" first for full effect.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,516 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-19-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete32. Forget and Remember reviewsSam and Deeks are partners on an operation that highlights their differences and has them fighting for their lives.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,935 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 8-15-11 - S. Hanna & M. Deeks - Complete33. Sequel: Friend and Foe reviewsWhen gang violence erupts in East LA, Deeks and Sam are reunited with Deeks' old friend Miggy. Reading the first story will help you understand Deeks and Miggy's relationship.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,789 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-13-11 - M. Deeks & S. Hanna - Complete34. Past and Present reviewsDeeks encounters a man from his childhood and his reaction stuns his partners.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,748 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 8-11-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete35. Epilogue: Devils and Angels reviewsThe aftermath of their last operation leaves the team trying to convince Deeks not to resign.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,448 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-8-11 - M. Deeks & Hetty L. - Complete36. Life and Death reviewsThe team looks for answers as Deeks undercover operation for LAPD goes horribly wrong.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,240 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 8-6-11 - M. Deeks & G. Callen - Complete37. Devils and Angels reviewsAn operation in the desert turns deadly and the team has to fight for their lives with the help of outsiders.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: M - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,819 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-6-11 - M. Deeks & S. Hanna - Complete38. Hope and Despair reviewsCallen and Sam are captured and worry about what happened to Deeks and KensiNCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,525 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-4-11 - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Complete39. Good and Bad reviewsThe team is sent to protect a Naval Commander after a kidnap threat. Deeks is assigned as a bodyguard to the man's young son.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,863 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 8-1-11 - M. Deeks - Complete40. Friend and Foe reviewsDeeks searches for Sam in the mean streets of the city after the team loses contact.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,546 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 7-31-11 - M. Deeks & S. Hanna - Complete41. Light and Dark reviewsStory takes place in one room where Kensi wakes after being tortured and tries to find her partner. Some fear and some romance.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,540 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 7-31-11 - Kensi B. & M. Deeks - Complete42. Lost and Found reviewsMarty Deeks is badly hurt on an LAPD assignment. The team rushes to save him and discover his attackers. Study of team members feelings about Deeks.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13,307 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 7-31-11 - M. Deeks & G. Callen - Complete