| Marissa Blackwing |
Author has written 1 story for Sonic the Hedgehog. Okay, here goes: Relatively new to this, so I'll keep it blunt. That fits me better, anyways. I do NOT like chatspeak. Overuse of crap like 'LOL' will result in my ignoring you. What disappoints me most about many of the fanfics on this site is that most of the writers apparently cannot be bothered to use even remotely decent grammar. I don't expect anyone to use perfect grammar and stuff all the time in just the right way, that's just silly. However, when it becomes very difficult to follow a single paragraph and you can't really tell exactly what the author meant to say, you shouldn't publish it without serious editing. Don't be lazy. And remember, 'I'll fix it at the end' is not a good excuse; no one's buying that, we all know that when you finish whatever you're doing, 90% of you will probably never look at it again. Don't really know what else to put here, you wanna talk you can PM me. Enjoy. | |||||||
1. Black Wings: Shades of Gray » reviewsThe first in the series, occurs shortly after the events of Shadow the Hedgehog, after the apparent fall of Black Doom. A mysterious red-eyed man has appeared, but what are his intentions?Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,547 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-21-12 - Published: 5-1-12 - Black Doom & Shadow