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| Incredibleintruder |
Author has written 55 stories for Fairy Tail, One Piece, Yu-Gi-Oh, Naruto, Skies of Arcadia, Jungle Book, Shantae, Danny Phantom, Aladdin, Pokémon, Bleach, F-Zero, Totally Spies, Sly Cooper, Digimon, Legend of Zelda, Mario, Teen Titans, Sonic the Hedgehog, I Dream of Jeannie, Power Stone, Batman, Avengers, Chip and Dale's Rescue Rangers, Street Fighter, Atomic Betty, and Rosario + Vampire. Hello to all who wants some basic information on who I actually am. For my real name, location and all of this, you're not in luck, as my screenname is not Incredibleintruder for nothing. I wanted to know the opinion of as many people as possible on my stories. I want feedback to know my strengths and weaknesses as a writer and I do believe Fanfiction.com has people who can tell me what I need to know about writing in general. One thing to keep in mind, though, is that English is not the language I normally use in real life. If you see big and obvious errors in my sentences, it might be due to this fact. So if you like my stories or think that something surprised you, feel free to let me know in reviews attached to those stories. I am here to improve and to know what I'm good at and what I suck by people who shall be fair and just with their reviews. Now, do enjoy those stories. Newer stuff on this profile! Hurray! 1- Please, don't say in reviews what you'd like for me to do or change. Just send me a private message indicating so and we may discuss it. 2-Do note that I am a free spirits, so I may end up updating a story at my leisure. If you write stuff like ''update!'' or ''Update Now!'' or similar stuff in reviews, it will not motivate me to do so at a quicker pace. It is in fact a little bit annoying and stressful, so please do not do that. 3-I am open to suggestions and all the like, but please do remember that I have the right to outright reject or refuse an idea. You have much more chance of being accepted if it suits more to my taste, so do read a few of my stories before even submitting a story idea. 4-I don't normally do challenges. To me, they are pretty much the same thing as requests, so they are under the same regulations stipulated in the previous point. 5- Don't ask me what will happen next in the story. Just read the thing and then wait for updates. | |||||||
1. The curry slave » reviewsAspara, the cooking teacher, has a plan to make sure people eat her magical curry. However, she knows she has to make sure this human, Tsukune, is out of the way. Fortunately, she knows just how to do so, thanks to the lovely succubus, Kurumu. Based loosely on the fifth episode of season two, the one with all the curry.Rosario + Vampire - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,086 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-31-13 - Published: 3-2-13 - Kurumu K. & Tsukune A. - Complete2. Never had a friend like her » reviewsAladdin, trapped in the collapsed cave of wonders, rub a very special bottle. This action will change the life of our favourite street rat forever.Aladdin - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,282 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-19-13 - Published: 10-5-12 - Aladdin & Genie/Carpet - Complete3. The Arabian Night guild » reviewsA certain visit from an emissary from the fabled Arabian Night guild could change quite a lot in the life of many women of Fairy Tail...Featuring hypnosis, transformation, belly buttons and various pairings.Fairy Tail - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,678 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-27-13 - Published: 6-4-124. The possibilities and realities of RavenRaven is walking simply during one of the calmer period of a superheroine' life, when she is suddenly the victim of some devious scheme that will change her forever into a definitely sexier person. This is a tribute story to Dragon-FangX from DA, who did a series of picture where Raven is being changed into various forms, like a belly-dancer.Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,103 - Published: 3-8-13 - Raven - Complete5. The Gerudo seduction dance » reviewsLink has been captured by the thieving tribe known as the Gerudo. Whatever will happen to him when their leader decides he'd make a good addition to their ranks, whether he wants to or not?Legend of Zelda - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,799 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-5-13 - Published: 6-6-12 - Link - Complete6. The evolution book reviewsIn a world where the animals have evolved much before any humans, Mowgli is the only human with the potential to reverse this. Being sent by many to bring the human race up, he will meet someone in his way that will change how he thinks. Warning, contain vore, smut and hypnosis.Jungle Book - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,051 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-26-13 - Kaa & Mowgli - Complete7. The atomic future reviewsBeing accidentaly hit by a chronal manipulation weapon by Maximus, Betty is manipulated by the strange and utterly mysterious effect of the gun, known by no one, not even its creator. What will happen to Betty?Atomic Betty - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,946 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-24-13 - Atomic Betty & Maximus - Complete8. The book of ShadalooTrying to find just how a book could have hypnotized her grandfather, Pullum Purna invites some people and expert on certain matters to get some answers on the whole Shadaloo thing.Street Fighter - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,366 - Published: 2-19-13 - Pullum - Complete9. The evil ways of JasmineWith a wish poorly worded by Jafar, Jasmine becomes something that he had never guessed she could be: utterly evil and manipulative.Aladdin - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,692 - Published: 2-19-13 - Jasmine & Jafar - Complete10. Gadget Hackwrench and the curse of the pink elephant reviewsGadget is lost in Egypt, away from her team. How will she survive such a rough environment all alone? Done as a request, combining Rescue Rangers with elements from 'Pink Elephant On Parade' from Dumbo.Chip and Dale's Rescue Rangers - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,691 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-13-13 - Complete11. Titans defeated » reviewsStarfire had been captured by a villain known as the Sultan. A being who has nefarious plans for her as well as her team. Now with a second part, thanks to some help from J4RRE77 from deviantart.Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,158 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-13-13 - Published: 6-7-12 - Koriand'r/Starfire & Dick G./Robin I/Nightwing - Complete12. Interrogation » reviewsWhat did happen between the moment when Sonic was captured by G.U.N and when he escaped in Sonic Adventure 2? What was Rouge's role in all of this?Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,506 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-8-13 - Published: 1-26-13 - Sonic & Rouge13. Advanced Ideas in MagicA high ranking member of A.I.M has finally created a weapon that combines magic, technology and some very dangerous chemicals together. What does the weapon do and how will it spell doom for the Avengers?Avengers - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,940 - Published: 1-23-13 - Ms. Marvel/Carol D. & Spiderwoman/Jessica D. - Complete14. Nico Robin's fate » reviewsNico Robin and Nami have been kidnapped in a mysterious fashion. What will happen to them and who is behind this?One Piece - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,924 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-21-13 - Published: 11-6-12 - Robin & Nami - Complete15. Captivating desires » reviewsThe first draft for the story 'A true desire obtained'. In this story, Danny gets to truly know Desiree in ways he would never have thought before after a slip of his tongue. Contains mature content and hypnosis.Danny Phantom - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,197 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 1-6-13 - Published: 6-8-12 - Desiree & Danny F. - Complete16. I dream of Harley Quinzel » reviewsHarley gets transformed into a genie, a being quite potent and powerful by a certain denizen of the fifth dimension. What will happen to her and whomsoever approach her and dare wish for something from her?Batman - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,227 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-31-12 - Published: 10-2-12 - Harley Quinn & Two-Face - Complete17. Birth of a snake reviewsBagheera is anxious to make sure Mowgli has a good future ahead for him. Thankfully, Kaa the snake is fully willing to help...Jungle Book - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,423 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-29-12 - Bagheera & Kaa - Complete18. Jasmine's opportunity reviewsJafar has a terrible plan with Jasmine set in its sight. What will happen to the Princess of Agrabah and what does it means for her future?Aladdin - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,478 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-2-12 - Jasmine & Aladdin - Complete19. The jungle witch » reviewsMowgli, having finally attained adulthood, has yet to truly experience some true lessons of life, especially in the love department. Thankfully, his panther guardian, Bagheera, has some plans for that, even though they involve breaching into the territory of the terrifying Jungle Witch...Jungle Book - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,911 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-21-12 - Published: 10-10-12 - Mowgli & Bagheera - Complete20. The birth of the new Arabian Nights reviewsSonic is trapped in the Arabian Nights thanks to a curse he received. Having to deal with a changed Shahra to get out of the fiction world, what will happen between the two of them?Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,083 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-13-12 - Sonic & Shahra - Complete21. Risky Boots and the magic lampRisky's plan to receive the three magic seals and to use the magic lamp for her own purpose backfired. What will happen to our favorite evil pirate?Shantae - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,605 - Published: 10-12-12 - Complete22. Rajah and his new life reviewsRajah, tired of being ignored because of this new male who keeps of stealing the attention of his mistress, gets a chance and a way to have vengeance when a certain cat sorceress visits him.Aladdin - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,541 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-6-12 - Rajah & Mirage - Complete23. What if Kaa had been smart? » reviewsHow could Kaa have made his first encounter with Mowgli go smoother? Here's how! Warning, contains Vore.Jungle Book - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,293 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-6-12 - Published: 10-5-12 - Kaa & Bagheera - Complete24. Kaa and the snake charmer » reviewsA certain harem-girl with unknown talents encounter the legendary Kaa. What will happen to her and the snake after their fateful and hypnotic clash?Jungle Book - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,723 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-18-12 - Published: 8-24-12 - Kaa25. The harem of the cards »Ishizu Ishtar, sister of Marik Ishtar, has gained quite a powerful deck recently, one whose powers go even beyong simple attack points...featuring hypnosis, transformation and belly dancing. Now complete.Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Suspense - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,549 - Updated: 9-4-12 - Published: 6-4-12 - Isis/Aishisu & Mana26. The best futureRyoma, a lone ronin in a strange land, meets a woman who will change his life forever...Power Stone - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,947 - Published: 8-19-12 - Complete27. Liberty for the enslaved » reviewsSome Pokemon gains strange powers and powerful evolutions thanks to a mysterious being. Who is this being and what are his intentions? Contains much of the usual stuff I normally write, notably hypnosis and belly-dancing.Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,540 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-11-12 - Dawn/Hikari & Charizard/Lizardon28. The new religion of Agrabah reviewsJasmine has some surprising and even frightening news to say to Jafar about who she actually worships. What are the plans of this deity for the whole of Agrabah and what does it means for its inhabitants? Kind of an evil fiction just for fun.Aladdin - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,768 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-26-12 - Jafar & Jasmine - Complete29. Totally Harem reviewsChallenge fic sent by T-rex989. Sam, Clover and Alex are sent to spy on the mysterious person known only as the Rajah. What they will see there will change their lives forever. Contains hypnosis, belly-dancing, romance and many more...Totally Spies - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,424 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-22-12 - Sam & Clover - Complete30. Dancers of wondersAladdin, Abu, the carpet and the genie gets to know some of the secrets of the cave of wonders wit the help of a certain trio of beautiful belly-dancers. Will they be able to keep that knowledge?Aladdin - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,850 - Published: 7-17-12 - Aladdin & Genie/Carpet - Complete31. I dream of Jeannie's sister reviewsJeannie's evil sister finally gets what she want out of Tony and her hated sister. Contains hypnosis, lemon and belly-dancing.I Dream of Jeannie - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,451 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-23-12 - Complete32. Shahra and her priestesses »The story of how Shahra, the genie of the ring, became a goddess and turned around her whole situation. An earlier version of 'Tales of the Arabian Nights' with a divergent storyline. Feature some AmyxTail and some other pairings as the story go.Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,208 - Published: 6-19-12 - Shahra33. The tales of the Arabian Nights »Here are the tales of a goddess named Shahra, a thief named Rouge and their adventures on the land of the Arabian Nights. Contains a lot of suggestive contents, hypnosis and belly-dancing.Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 21,210 - Updated: 6-12-12 - Published: 6-9-12 - Shahra & Rouge34. Mistress Wednesday reviewsThe first draft for what would be known as 'The hypnotic adventures of Vivi Nefertari'. In this story, Zoro confront Miss Wednesday, a woman who could teach him an important lesson: strength is not all that is needed in a fight. Contains hypnosis and slight ZoroxVivi.One Piece - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,391 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-9-12 - Vivi & Zoro - Complete35. Hypnosis in Maramba reviewsThe very first draft of the story 'The hypnotic jewel of Maramba'. In this story, the life of Vyze, Aika and Fina is changed forever as they meet the dreamy belly-dancer named Bellena. Contains a bit of suggestive content and hypnosis.Skies of Arcadia - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,680 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-8-12 - Belleza & Vyse - Complete36. Tsunade and the goddesses reviewsTsunade, the high priest of one of the greatest civilization on Earth, has finally gained the honor to rejoin the goddesses in their heavenly realm. What kind of gift shall they grant her? Contains lemon and Yuri. Crossover between Naruto, Bleach and Rosario to Vampire.Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,951 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-7-12 - Tsunade S. - Complete37. The lamps of Hypnos reviewsBowser finds some ancient artifacts from an old god of Sarasraland. Whare his plans for the lands of Sarasraland and the Mushroom Kingdom?Mario - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,360 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-7-12 - Bowser & Daisy - Complete38. The mesmerizing pirates of TerminaThe leader of the pirates of Termina Bay has a plan to become the undisputed leader of the whole Bay, but first, she will need a fitting candidate to execute her plan.Legend of Zelda - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,001 - Published: 6-6-12 - Zoras - Complete39. The snake princess reviewsBoa Hancock has fallen in love with Monkey D. Luffy and she will do anything to make him reciprocate those feelings.One Piece - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,249 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-6-12 - Boa Hancock & Luffy - Complete40. The hypnotic trio of Agrabah reviewsA certain trio of balcony girls use their secret magic abilities to get what they want when a certain prince is throwing a parade in the streets of Agrabah.Aladdin - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,652 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-6-12 - Aladdin & Genie/Carpet - Complete41. The charming cat princess reviewsA certain man wishing to rejoin Xros hearts gets more than what he wanted when he tries to lie to the princess of the Lake Zone. Contains hypnosis and transformation.Digimon - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,002 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-6-12 - Bastemon/Persiamon - Complete42. Sly Cooper and the gem of RiyadhThe next caper of the Cooper gang might be the last one for one of them as they search for the mythical and priceless Cobra gem. Featuring an OC of mine called Sahiba Cobra.Sly Cooper - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,846 - Published: 6-5-12 - Sly C. - Complete43. Totally GENIE reviewsA new organisation named GENIE is secretly threatening the world. Will the W.H.O.O.P agency have enough time to move against them with their top-rated spies or is it already too late?Totally Spies - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,051 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-5-12 - Clover & Jerry - Complete44. The mandala danceCaptain Falcon receives a gift from a certain princess from the planet Magica, something that will make him feel wonderful...F-Zero - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,028 - Published: 6-5-12 - Complete45. A slave named Rukiruki reviewsIchigo's life will be changed when he unleash the beautiful genie named Rukiruki.Bleach - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,728 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-5-12 - Rukia K. & Ichigo K. - Complete46. Victory in Haruba village reviewsBrock, Ash and Misty arrive in Haruba village where a trio of local citizen wishes to make them see a show they shall never forget.Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,028 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-5-12 - Jessie/Musashi & Ash K./Satoshi - Complete47. Jafar's victoryJafar has found a new artifact of power, unleashing the amazingly powerful Eden in the world. Will she be of any help to the nefarious vizier?Aladdin - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,645 - Published: 6-5-12 - Jafar - Complete48. A true desire obtained reviewsDesiree and Danny have their last confrontation. Who will be victorious and what does it mean for the world at large?Danny Phantom - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,392 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-5-12 - Desiree & Danny F. - Complete49. Risky Boots little belly slave reviewsRisky Boots has fund a way to make sure Shantae will never cross with her again. Warnings, contain vore and hypnosis.Shantae - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,148 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-5-12 - Complete50. Shantae: Triumph in defeatShantae has been utterly defeated by Risky Boots. Is this the end for our favorite half-genie or merely a new beginning?Shantae - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,952 - Published: 6-5-12 - Complete51. Shantae and the new battle towerA dear friend to Shantae has been lost in the new and dangerous battle tower near Scuttle Town. Is she in danger or are these monsters more than they seems? Containing hypnosis of all kinds.Shantae - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,812 - Published: 6-5-12 - Complete52. Kaa VS Shanti reviewsThe final confrontation between Kaa the snake and Shanti, now much more mature in body and mind. Will the confrontation be as one-sided as the first one?Jungle Book - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,983 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-4-12 - Kaa - Complete53. The hypnotic jewel of Maramba » reviewsA certain belly-dancer spy rejoin the heroic trio of Fina, Aika and Vyse when they are stranded in Maramba. What will happen to them as the spy uses her charms and magic to capture them?Skies of Arcadia - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,610 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-4-12 - Belleza - Complete54. Secret mistress of Konoha »Ino came back many years after the war, having gained new techniques and a sinister new purpose. Contain hypnosis, belly-dancing and some InoxShika.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 7 - Words: 11,822 - Published: 6-4-12 - Ino Y. - Complete55. The hypnotic adventure of Vivi Nefertari » reviewsThe goal of Vivi Nefertari to go save her people becomes quite easier when she eats a certain devil fruit with peculiar abilities...Featuring hypnosis.One Piece - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,337 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-4-12 - Vivi & Luffy
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