| Bret Baxley |
Author has written 9 stories for Saving Private Ryan, Band of Brothers, Master and Commander, Flight of the Phoenix, Commander in Chief, and Open Range. I'm not a very good author but I try. I enjoy reading stories more than anything. My interests are eclectic but I'm drawn to history and historical type stories. If I review your stories I will try to be constructive and truthful and hope you will be the same to mine. How else can we become better writers than help each other? | |||||||
1. Open Range: Sugar and the CampWhen Charley and Boss go to the nearby town Mose and Button find the bag of sugar Boss had hidden. Everything was grand until they had an unexpected and unpleasant visitors. In the movie it was never shown what happen to Mose and Button. This is one version.Open Range - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Western - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,393 - Published: 8-11-12 - Complete2. Open Range: Discussing Button's FutureBoss and Charley discuss Button. From a deleted scene of the movie.Open Range - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Western - Chapters: 1 - Words: 674 - Published: 7-17-12 - Complete3. The Calloway Saga » reviewsA completely original story based very loosely on the TV series, Commander in Chief, but filled with original characters. Ride with Mackenzie Allen Calloway on her roller coaster life to the Presidency and beyond.Commander in Chief - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 15,646 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-15-12 - Published: 1-7-104. Open Range: Button's StoryNow I know in the movie Charley tries to explain to Sue Button's story and it was a sorry explanation. So I decided to write my own version just 'cause it made more sense.Open Range - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,876 - Published: 7-14-12 - Complete5. Band of Brothers: Brothers in Arms » reviewsCharacters from Band of Brothers, Saving Private Ryan & Saints and Soldiers come together to fight a common foe.Band of Brothers - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 30,101 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-26-10 - Published: 9-12-086. Doudle's Adventure » reviewsWill Doudle survive or will he be lost forever?Master and Commander - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 8,003 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 2-9-09 - Published: 9-23-08 - Complete7. Flight of the Phoenix » reviewsFrom Elliott's point of view.Flight of the Phoenix - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,401 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-5-08 - Published: 9-30-088. Saints and Soldiers » reviewsOutgunned and ill-equipped a small band of Allied Soldiers behind enemy lines must fight the frigid wilderness and roving German troops to smuggle critical intelligence back to Allied territory.Band of Brothers - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 18,041 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 9-19-08 - Published: 9-14-08 - Complete9. The Gathering Place reviewsWhat happened to Wade after he died?Saving Private Ryan - Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 986 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-8-08 - Complete