-Words of Encouragement-

The LORD is my Light and my Salvation; whom shall I fear? The LORD is the Strength of my life; of whom shall I be afraid?

When the wicked, even mine enemies and my foes, came upon me to eat up my flesh, they stumbled and fell.

Through a host should encamp against me, my heart shall not fear: though war should rise against me, in this will I be confident.

- Psalms 27: 1-3 Holy Bible King James 1611 Version.

Copy and paste this to your profile if you need words of encouragement from the Lord.

-About me-

I am just a normal guy. Nice-to-nice but I can be insane, crazy, etc. at times. I am a big fan of anime, manga, and comedy (Crayon Shin Chan, South Park, Family Guy, etc.). A fan of Marvel and DC Universe, Capcom, SNK, Namco, and Nintendo.

I am a big fan of SEGA, but I HATE their mascot Sonic the Hedgehog. The link below is the reason why. Now I can't see Sakura Wars and Phantasy Star shining because that abomination just had to take their spotlight and SEGA may cancel projects sending them to shine internationally. Damn you Sonic, SEGA of America and Europe, and Sony.

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/news/view/116581-Sega-to-Drop-Games-and-Employees-During-Extreme-Restructuring

I'm into Cardfight! Vanguard. I'm currently playing Narukami (not Eradicators. I'll play them once they come to the West) and Spike Brothers.

-What I like/dislike about Sonic the Hedgehog...-

Likes about Sonic: Sonic Riders (the first), Sonic 1 (both Genesis and GBA version),2, CD, 3, Sonic and Knuckles, Sonic Rush, Sonic Generations, Sonic 06, Sonic Archie Comics (including the crossover with Mega Man), SonAmy and ShadAmy (I ship those couples).

Dislikes about Sonic: Sonic the Fighters and Sonic Battle (I rather play Tekken, King of Fighters, Street Fighter, Virtua Fighter,and Mortal Kombat than those pieces of s*t.), Sonic Chronicles: The Dark Brotherhood (WTF is this s*tstain doing in the RPG genre? No...just no...Sonic, leave the RPGs to Sakura Taisen/Sakura Wars, Phantasy Star, and Shining.) Sonic Unleashed (Piece of s*t that I've ever seen.)

I'm mostly anti-Sonic - 75%

-My OTP's of anime and video games-

Sousuke x Kaname (Full Metal Panic, FMP)

Zero x Yuki (Vampire Knight)

Kai x Misaki (Cardfight! Vanguard)

Oga x Hilda (Beelzebub)

Tojo x Kunieda Aoi (Beelzebub)

Robert Garcia x Yuri Sakazaki (Art of Fighting/King of Fighters)

Kyo Kusanagi x Yuki (King of Fighters)

Terry Bogard x Blue Mary (Fatal Fury/King of Fighters)

Andy Bogard x Shiranui Mai (Fatal Fury/King of Fighters)

Hwoarang x Lili (Tekken)

Kazuya x Jun (Tekken)

Jin x Xiaoyu (Tekken)

Yoshiki x Ayumi (Corpse Party)

Rolf/Eusis x Shir Gold/Shilka Levina (Phantasy Star II)

Josh Kain/Kinds Ji An x Nei (Phantasy Star II)

Rudolph Steiner/Rudger Steiner x Anna Zirski/Amia Amirski (Phantasy Star II)

Hugh Thompson/Huey Sorn x Amy Sage/Anne Saga (Phantasy Star II)

Dante x Morrigan Aensland (Devil May Cry x Darkstalkers)

Ohgami Ichiro x Shinguji Sakura (Sakura Wars/Sakura Taisen series)

Kojirou Akechi x Erica Fontaine (Sakura Taisen Mysterious Paris)

Shinjiro Taiga x Gemini Sunrise (Sakura Taisen V/Sakura Wars So Long My Love)

Shinjiro Taiga x Diana Caprice (Sakura Taisen V/Sakura Wars So Long My Love)

Miyabi Neko x Hugo Julliard (Sakura Taisen Kanadegumi)

Chaz Ashley/Rudy Ashleigh x Rika/Fal (Phantasy Star IV)

Rune Walsh/Thray Walsh x Alys Brangwin/Lyla Brangwen (Phantasy Star IV)

Rhys/Kein Sa Riik x Lena/Lena No Satera (Phantasy Star III)

Nial/Lane Sa Riik x Laya/Laia (Phantasy Star III)

Sean/Shiin Le Cille x Laya/Laia (Phantasy Star III)

Ethan Waber x Karen Erra (Phantasy Star Universe)

Alis Landale/Alisa Landeel x Ichiro Ohgami (Phantasy Star x Sakura Taisen/Sakura Wars)

The main couples are Kai x Misaki, Shinjiro Taiga x Gemini Sunrise, and Chaz Ashley/Rudy Ashleigh x Rika/Fal.

-Couples I despise-

Aichi x Misaki (Cardfight! Vanguard) - Misaki is NOT a pedophile sick asses.

Shinjiro x Rosita/Rika (Sakura Wars) - Really, in reality, Shinjiro's ass will get thrown into the asylum.

Ohgami x Iris (Sakura Taisen) - Same goes with Shinjiro.

Kojirou x Coquelicot (Sakura Taisen Mysterious Paris) - Akechi with a little girl? No...just no...

Kojirou x Miki (Sakura Taisen Mysterious Paris) - Really? As if he'll make a move on his own sister in reality.

Kourin x Aichi (Cardfight! Vanguard) - I rather ship Morikawa x Kourin for the rest of my life than this sick couple. Kourin is also not a pedophile. Please Bushiroad, kill this couple and give Aichi a real woman. No whores. Rekka should be okay for Aichi cause they are the same age and all.

Naoki x Shingo (Cardfight! Vanguard) - Those two are not gay. Besides, they argue real often and insult each other. Does that give you anything?

-Myself as a writer-

I help support the group Eliminator as a non-member. I'm a moderator of the constructive critic group/forum Pen to Paper. I also support CU (Critics United) and LU (Literate Union).

I mostly specialize in helping people for Sakura Wars/Sakura Taisen series and Phantasy Star series (PS, PS2, PS3 Generations of Doom, PS4 The End of the Millennium in particular).

I will have no mercy for those who steal other peoples work and use it for themselves (plagiarism). Those lazy and unoriginal spuds who have no skill.

I'm not THAT good in Language Arts, so my fics are a bit meh. You may praise and/or criticize the fics as you may please. It would be grateful to be have criticizing reviews to help me improve.

The avatar is Dragonic Kaiser Vermillion. I do not own DKV nor Cardfight! Vanguard. Bushiroad owns the copyrights.

The LEGO Assassin series were done by me and my cousin. It belongs to my cousin but we don't own the rights to LEGO. I'm not sure if they're troll fics or not but give criticism to help him improve.

-Stories!-

coming soon: Phantasy Star (a reboot of the series)

current story: Sakura Taisen (again reboot), Sonic Kyo: The Kaze no Ryu (reboot combining Sonic X, Archie Comics, etc.)

on hiatus: The LEGO Assassin 4, Sakura Taisen x Phantasy Star (Because I don't have time to work on them because of school. :S)

-Mary/Gary/Marty Sue/Stu-

They are nothing more than poison that makes a person vomit. They just fulfill the author's arrogance and want for attention. The term originated from the name of an OC in a Star Trek fic. I wish I could tell you more about it, but I'll let you look it up on Wikipedia.

If you are creating an OC, always put him/her through the Mary Sue Litmus Test. Nuff said.

I severely dislike Mary Sues and Gary Stus.

-What I like/dislike...-

Likes: anime, video games (fighting, first-person shooters, and non-MMO RPGs mostly), writing, working hard to achieve goals, card games, God. (He is my Lord and my Authority above all others. I respect all authority He placed for my sake meaning He cares for my safety, etc. He created humans including me, the earth, and the universe.)

Dislikes: Plagiarists, Mary Sues and Gary Stus, pedophiles, Sonic the Hedgehog, Yu-Gi-Oh!,

-Character Ratings 101 #1. Sakura Taisen/Sakura Wars-

#1. Sakura Shinguji 5 out of 5 - Overall, she has great potential as a main heroine. Dark past, trauma caused by thunder, father died in war and in front of her, experienced depression, sadness, etc. , and learned from the past to become the mature woman she is now.

#2. Ichiro Ohgami 5 out of 5 - Overall, he's badass, awesome, and has great potential. Through his experience in Teito and Paris, he became the Commander. Awe-inspiring indeed.

#3. Maria Tachibana 5 out of 5 - She's badass in my book. Nuff said.

#4. Sumire Kanzaki 3 out of 5 - She may be cool, calm, and awesome at times, however, piss her off and she'll become a bitch from Hell that you'll regret marrying.

#5. Kanna Kirishima 3.5 out of 5 - Cool, but kind of ripped off Goku. Overall, she's ok.

#6. Kohran Ri 4 out of 5 - I don't know what to say about her. Crazy as Hell, she can overlook important factors when inventing shit, and clumsy like Sakura. Overall, she's okay I guess...In my opinion, a combination of Doctor Who and Doctor Brown but a female version.

#7. Iris Chateaubriand 1 out of 5 - Seriously...who pairs a little girl with a freaking young man? No...just...no...

#8. Orihime Soletta 2 out of 5 - The bitchiest of the bitches. Nuff said.

#9. Reni/Leni 1 out of 5 - A palm tree is paired with Ohgami...seriously?

#10. Kasumi 3 out of 5 - She needs to be more developed. Plus she made a nice cameo in the Kanadegumi manga. Wow.

#11. Yuri 3 out of 5 - Again, she also needs to be more developed.

#12. Tsubaki 2 out of 5 - She looks kind of too young for Ohgami and she also needs to be more developed.

#13. Yoneda 5 out of 5 - He may be a drunkard, however, he proves to be one cool commander. One lucky playboy. I wish I was him. Just kidding.

#14. Erica Fontaine 5 out of 5 - She's cool and has strong suits but her only flaws is her case of ADHD (sort of.) and the fact that shes more clumsy than Sakura and Gemini.

#15. Glycine Blumer 5 out of 5 - Badass. Viking blood in her veins. Her only flaws are just her anger issues.

#16. Lobelia 5 out of 5 - She's a combination of K' Dash, Shadow, Vegeta, Spawn or Kratos (sort of because of the chains), Iori, Kagura, and Kyo. Awe-inspiring and badass.

#17. Hanabi 3 out of 5 - She's meh.

#18. Coquelicot 1 out of 5 - WTF? I think the creator of Sakura Taisen is a pedophile.

#19. Mell 3 out of 5 - More development.

#20. Ci 3 out of 5 - MOAR development.

#21. Grand Mere 3 out of 5 - She has strong suits for being a female army woman. She's meh.

#22. Shinjiro Taiga 5 out of 5 - Developing, strong-willed unless he get's depressed, and a definition of going down the road of being a man. Badass in my opinion.

#23. Gemini Sunrise 5 out of 5 - She has great potential. Her sister or inner persona, Geminine Sunrise, is also cool and badass. Developed well enough to say she had overcome some of her faults.

#24. Ratchet/Lachette Altair 5 out of 5 - She's awesome, badass, and cool. Despite having low spiritual energy, you can have her fight alongside you in chapter eight. But the process to activate it is long frustrating, and complicated. It'll be worth it.

#25. Cheiron Archer 4.5 out of 5 - She has strong suits but a lawyer and gangster at the same time? Odd...

#26. Rosita Aries 1 out of 5 - Pedophile alert! A Mexican Luffy, Naruto, or Goku with two revolvers? No...just no...

#27. Subaru Kujo 1 out of 5 - Another palm tree...

#28. Diana Caprice 4.5 out of 5 - A hypocrite at first, but she had some strong suits.

#29. Anri 2 out of 5 - She is nothing but a gay and straight bitch. Afraid of men then switched it around. WTF? Although she is cool as she had an AK-47 in chapter eight.

#30. Cherry Cocker/Plum Spaniel 5 out of 5 - She is just wow...despite her only flaw is that she's too flirty, she's still awesome. Example (beware of spoilers): She carried a freaking bazooka with her and inside the Statue of Liberty. Badass and hot at the same time.

#31. Sunnyside 3 out of 5 - Meh.

#32. Miyabi Neko

#33. Hugo Julliard

#34. G.O. Bach

#35. Genji Touhou

#36. Genzaburou Touhou

#37. Francisco Lews

#38. Johann Sibelius

#39. Kayama Yuichi

#40.

-Character Ratings 101: Phantasy Star series-

#1. Alis Landale 5 out of 5 - I respect her and all that. Avenging her brother and saving Algo from Dark Force, awe inspiring indeed.

#2. Rolf 4.9 out of 5 - He's cool and everything.

#3. Rhys 5 out of 5 - A noble prince of the Orakians who fights with sense of justice. Hell yeah!

#4. Chaz Ashley 5 out of 5 - Awesome, badass, and one lucky guy. Rika, his girlfriend. Rune, his mentor along with Alys. Wren, his teacher. Kyra, his big "sister". And his friends are cool too.

#5. Ethan Waber 5 out of 5 - Just like Chaz, he is awesome, badass, and lucky.

-Here's the links to my forums MAH BOI-

http://www.fanfiction.net/forum/Phantasy-Star-x-Sakura-TaisenSakura-Wars-Fan-Club/132237/

http://www.fanfiction.net/forum/Literate-Critics-and-Writers-of-Dragonia/129019/

If you want to know the rules for Pen to Paper, here they are.

When reviewing

1. No flaming. My definition of a flame is a review meant to make you feel awful and terrible. However, I will give you permission to be much harsher with plagiarists. They need the sense knocked into them, hard and firm. As long as you're not seriously flaming/cyber bullying, it's OK.
2. Be respectful. A lot of these writers are young, and most are inexperienced with writing (much like myself). How would you like it if you got a review saying, "Your story is the biggest pile of bull* I ever came across, it hurts me to see such dismally awful fanfiction"? You wouldn't like it, trust me.
3. Be honest. You're here to help people improve on their writing, not to ignore all errors they made. You need to be honest (but not brutal). That way you can truly help them out.
4. Identify yourself as a member/moderator of this forum, even if it's not a rule-breaking story.
5. Give people advice. In all seriousness, how are people going to improve if you just point out faults/violations without even telling them how to fix them? Why people do this is beyond me.

When posting on this forum

1. All posts must be curse word free. As tempting as it might be to cuss at something that irritates you, it's rude. Plus, all posts must be T rated. Censor swear words e.g. c*
2. If a topic title says only members can post in it, then for Pete's sake, only members can post in it. If non-members post in it, then your post will get deleted. Sorry.
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When you come across a rule-violating fan fiction

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If you are confused as to the meaning of any of these rules, don't be afraid to PM Writergirl64 or one of the other moderators. We'll be happy to help.

-What pi$$es me off?-

Spam: Sell your unneeded stuff/shit on Ebay or craigslist. Don't forget to give me eggs and chicken soup with it along with 100% entirely natural fruit juice. I won't report but someone will for me but it depends on my mood. (I can report at any time. If I want to like the latter said.)

Plagiarism: I will only report this violation. It just makes me sick that I don't want to talk about it. This is equivalent to stealing money from a purse or taking candy from a baby. They're all sins. Chat/Script format and MA content...are just nothing compared to this disgusting, horrible violation.

Discontinued Stories (Even my favorites): The exception is that if you are time short like me because of school, etc. It's okay with me.

Motherfuckers who try to test me when it comes to Sakura Wars and Phantasy Star: I'm proud to be a fan of ST/SW and PS. NEVER force your Sonic related shit on me cause I'll kick your motherfucking ass FOR JUSTICE!!! In my opinion, Ichiro Ohgami and Alis Landale would kick Sonic's ass. Same goes with Goku and Superman but with no effort. (Goku base form could best Sonic unless Super Sonic is involved where the Super Saiyan forms are needed. Superman can see shit moving faster than light so one infinite mass punch and Sonic will explode into a million pieces.) When I'm done, I'm sending your ass into an asylum where you'll fit in with a bunch of pedophiles and hippies. All of you will have never-ending orgies with furries and shit. Good luck and have a nice death-free day.

I'm short-tempered and I could blow a damn fuse if I wanted to.

-Gibberish and shit-

I no longer report MA content and Chat/Script format. I'll just give constructive criticism, but not harsh (if necessary). If I owe you an apology because of what I did in the past, kindly ask and I'll do as you say.

If I'm needed in a fight, I fight...WITH JUSTICE!!!