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since: 02-11-01, id: 42194
country: United States
Author has written 32 stories for Jet Grind Radio, Conker's Bad Fur Day, Rurouni Kenshin, Parappa the Rapper, Kingdom Hearts, Teen Titans, Trauma Center, and Megami Tensei.

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All right, time to update the profile.

Useful links -

Mary Sue Litmus Test: http://www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html

Free online Spell Checker: http://www.spellcheck.net/

Trailer for Trauma Center: New Blood

http://media.wii.ign.com/media/949/949432/vids_1.html

Artwork for Paying the Price

Detective Anonymous from Deviant Art was kind enough to make an artwork piece for my story. Here's the link:

http://detectiveanonymous.deviantart.com/art/Paying-the-Price-65784917

My TraumaCenter Original Characters

Okay, I'm going to operate under the assumption that my Trauma Center OCs were not well received on DeviantArt.

I'm not going to say that they are HATED, but I'm assuming that no one cares about them. I can't say I blame anyone. While I don't mind OCs, I'm not a huge fan of OC Centric fanfiction. There are exceptions, of course, but I mostly read fanfiction for the canon characters.

On the other hand, the readers on fanfiction.net seemed to really like them, so I am pleased to announce that both Jessie and Tim have survived the initial test drive! This means that you'll be seeing both of them again.

Name: Timothy Ficsher
Age: 24
Position: Nurse at Caduceus USA

Here's a link to his picture and profile on deviant art: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57456904/

Name: Jessie Darlene Niguel

Age: 23

Height: 5'4

Weight: 120

Occupation: Atmospheric Researcher

She is Victor’s younger sister and just as much of a genius. Just like her brother, she’s quick to loose her patience with people, but she is a lot more outgoing than he, though that’s not really saying much. She is very into her career, but in her spare time likes to read and tend to her small garden. She’s currently working to see how climate patterns and changes are going to affect agriculture, so while she does garden mostly for her own enjoyment she can still feel some what close to work.

Jessie also loves Victor more than anyone else in the world. One would not be able to guess just how close they are as brother and sister due to their seemingly detached and indifferent mannerisms towards each other and those around them, but they care for each other deeply.

Her picture on deviantart: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60637158/

Note: I did not draw the portrait of Jessie. It was a fanart prize I won for a fanfiction contest. She's pretty close to what I pictured in my mind, so kudos to PreseatheKitsune for the line art and Picup for coloring. Thanks again!

9/23/2007

Obsessions -

Past obsession: Teen Titans

Current obsession: Trauma Center

Future obsession: I’m thinking it might be FFXII. To hell with Sephiroth! Balthier is my bishi!

Fanfiction Pet Peeves-

1. Mary Sues – these little buggers have ruined the name of well crafted and interesting original characters!

2. Poor use of grammar and spelling – I am no English teacher and I do not expect perfection from everyone. We are human and humans make mistakes. However, there is a difference between honest error and a blatant disregard for the language. If you’re old enough to have gone to grade school, you’re old enough to write a sentence using proper spelling, grammar and structure. It really isn’t that hard.

3. Character bashing – So you don’t like a character? That’s perfectly fine. No one said you had to love him or her, but please spare the rest of us from your need to bash this character.

4. Atrocious Summaries - The worst summaries I've seen usually say "You hafta read to find out!"

I don't want to find out. I want to know what your stupid story is about now so that I'll know whether it sparks my interest or not. Usually those are indicators that it just isn't worth your time if they can't be buggered to explain it.

Also are summaries with beyond horrible grammar such as -

Summary: omfg! raven and bb get maried and have a kid but then they die oh no and the kid has 2 find out who killed them. sad storie with blood! lol rofl read and review!

For crying out loud! Would it kill you to use proper grammar and punctuation? If your entire story is like that, you can expect that no one is going to "lol rofl read and review". This ties in with my second peeve. Arg!

My Stories

Status: Incomplete

The Beast Within Us Teen Titans: OMFG! I updated it! ROFLCOPTERS!

Paying the Price: Chapter eight is up. Been up for a while. Sort of forgot to update that here. Mleh . . .

TraumaCenter: Illness Trauma Center: Taking a break from this. I really want to finish Paying the Price.

Status: Completed

The Great Jet Grind Radio Insight Fic! - One shot I wrote a long time ago when I was still in high school for the video game 'Jet Grind Radio'. Those were good days.

The Third Day - Poem to be a co-companion to my fanfic 'Souls and Soldier Squirrels'. Both were based off of Conker's Bad Fur Day.

A Butt is For What? - Completely random one shot based off of Rurouni Kenshin. Man was I bored or was I bored? People seemed to enjoy it though.

I Wish - Sadly the only chapter fic I've finished thus far (TBWU will be the second though. I'll make sure of it!). Based off Rurouni Kenshin. I confess it is rather poorly written. I'm actually a bit ashamed of it, but as they say, you are your own worst critic.

Full Tank: The Extended Special Edition - Parappa the Rapper one shot. Nuff said I think.

Trinity Hearts - Kingdom Hearts one shot starring Donald and Goofy. Those guys don't get enough fanfic/fanart love. My tribute to them.

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1. In Me It Shows » reviews
Being an adult means taking responsibility for your actions. Naoto understands this and is ready to accept the consequences. She just worries how her Grampa will react when she tells him she's pregnant.
Megami Tensei - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 9 - Words: 16,827 - Reviews: 56 - Updated: 9-5-09 - Published: 4-18-09 - Naoto S. & Kanji T.
2. Killer Butterfly reviews
Who would've thought the smallest member of the team would pose the biggest threat?
Megami Tensei - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 759 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-30-09 - Naoto S.
3. Caduceus vs Teh Internetz reviews
Tyler wtf r u doin?
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 999 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-20-09
4. Thank you, Dr Stiles reviews
All he wanted was to help people. For this, they showed him their gratitude.
Trauma Center - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,274 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-22-09
5. Pressure reviews
When the pressure's on, it's always nice to have someone at your side. Really cheesy DxA one shot.
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,157 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-30-08 - Complete
6. Milestones reviews
Just as certain as Derek and Angie will encounter obstacles in life, they will overcome them, together.
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13,759 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-29-08 - Complete
7. Knockout » reviews
Angie was not particularly close to him. But when one surgery turns into a three day waiting game, she starts to wonder if Derek really is more than just a colleague to her.
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,694 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 6-13-08 - Published: 5-6-08
8. Hunger Strike reviews
Sure, he's a genius, but he can't escape his feelings, or the nature of human physiology.
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,637 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-25-08
9. Hero reviews
The late Richard Anderson was truly an extraordinary man, one of incredible vision. Though few know of his life and times, his legacy will live on forever.
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,946 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-3-08 - Published: 12-12-07
10. Shy reviews
He had gotten used to being seen as a respected figure of the medical field, taking command of board meetings and operating rooms with professional ease. But, even if it was just for her, he would always be a little shy.
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,680 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-26-08 - Complete
11. And Thus I See reviews
There tends to be a lot on your mind when your a world renown super doctor, whether you want it to be or not.
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,857 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-25-08
12. Trauma Center: Illness » reviews
Sometimes doctors get sick too.
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 10 - Words: 28,204 - Reviews: 75 - Updated: 4-6-08 - Published: 4-26-07
13. Were It Not For Me reviews
Every year, the day came. Every year, it killed them both.
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,481 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-7-08 - Complete
14. Arch Angel reviews
It was her fault. The whole ordeal, all those deaths, had been because of her. How could anyone forgive her sins, when it was all her fault?
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,247 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-5-08 - Complete
15. Coffee Break reviews
It is amazing what a simple coffee break between two close people can do.
Trauma Center - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,046 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-19-08 - Complete
16. Paying the Price » reviews
Trauma Center: UtK In the aftermath of the GUILT outbreak, Dr. Derek Stiles finds himself haunted by disturbing images and uncertain of the path ahead.
Trauma Center - Rated: M - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 12 - Words: 42,762 - Reviews: 61 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 3-7-07 - Complete
17. Adam's Bliss » reviews
Derek and Angie had done it. GUILT was eradicated and Delphi was wiped off the map. There was only one thing left: Adam. Little did they know that what was to be the end, was really the beginning. [Prequel to PtP. Spoilers for UtK]
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 16,088 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 11-23-07 - Published: 10-9-07
18. Master of Negotiations reviews
Some may call him a difficult man, but none can deny that Sidney Kasal has never lost a fight.
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,027 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-20-07 - Complete
19. You Lose reviews
Having the Healing Touch will allow you to save patients no one else could save, Derek, but it is impossible to save everyone.
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,827 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-9-07 - Complete
20. The Beast Within Us » reviews
Robin and Beast Boy go together about as well as a toaster in a bathtub. But they're going to have to overcome their differences if they want to survive their newest challenge. It's not a slash! Yay! Full summary inside.
Teen Titans - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 53,014 - Reviews: 106 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 5-28-05 - Robin & Beast Boy
21. Midnight Whispers reviews
They never could say what the wanted to say to each other while the sun was up. Perhaps one day they could work up the nerve, but until then, they always had their midnight whispers. DerekxAngie.
Trauma Center - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,900 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-25-07 - Complete
22. Necrophobia reviews
“That can’t be true! There’s gotta be something I can do!” Tyler yelled. “You’ll always be the Death Doctor.” Derek muttered as he slowly lifted his head. “Your past is written in blood.
Trauma Center - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,133 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-12-07 - Complete
23. Trauma Center: Happy Hour reviews
Tormenting your coworkers has never been this much fun!
Trauma Center - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,017 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 5-13-07 - Complete
24. Trauma Center: Embrace reviews
Angie Thompson was strong. She didn't need to be held in a man's embrace when life got rough . . .until Derek had shown her otherwise.
Trauma Center - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 979 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3-28-07 - Complete
25. Creatures of Habit: One Shot Collections » reviews
Originally known as Writing Practice Gooey thingy. Ficlets to explore the characters and their lives as well as some revelations they may encounter along the way. Raven's chapter is up!
Teen Titans - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,698 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-30-06 - Published: 4-1-06
26. Souls and Soldier Squirrels » reviews
(Chapter 12 is up) Pain, rage, and revenge. This is a story about one young grey squirrel and his fight to save his country.
Conker's Bad Fur Day - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 53,951 - Reviews: 65 - Updated: 3-21-05 - Published: 5-5-01
27. Trinity Hearts reviews
The night before the final battle, Donald and Goofy reflect. A fic dedicated to the two unsung heroes of Kingdom Hearts. PG to be safe.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,579 - Reviews: 22 - Published: 5-19-04 - Donald Duck & Goofy - Complete
28. Full Tank: The Extended Special Edition reviews
If you think Parappa had it bad when he had to rap to use the toilet, then...well...you're right that is pretty bad. However it could have been worse.
Parappa the Rapper - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,381 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 12-22-03
29. I Wish » reviews
Yahiko's sick and Kenshin takes care of him. However, someone with a strong hate for the Battousai makes a wish. Can Kenshin make things right or will Yahiko pay the price? Chapter 7 up! Sorry 'bout the wait.
Rurouni Kenshin - Rated: T - English - General/General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 19,113 - Reviews: 51 - Updated: 3-20-03 - Published: 9-19-02 - Complete
30. A butt is for what? reviews
Kenshin must answer a question to spare the universe from certain doom. Random insanity ahead. So tell me, what would you do with a butt?
Rurouni Kenshin - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,101 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 11-27-02
31. The Third Day reviews
(from Souls and Soldier Squirrels)A poem from Sarah's POV about her last moments alive. I wrote this in my creative writing class and it almost wrote itself! Please read and review.
Conker's Bad Fur Day - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-14-01
32. The Great Jet Grind Radio Insight Fic! reviews
This is what the JGR characters go through when it's my turn to play!
Jet Grind Radio - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,088 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 3-7-01
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