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Jules-foil
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since: 09-25-03, id: 461199, Profile edited: 10-04-08
country: United States
Author has written 9 stories for Angel, Charmed, Smallville, Star Wars, and House, M.D..

This is a reminder that unhelpful and/or hostile reviews aka 'flames' are not accepted here.

In regards to the complaint that I do not update enough, I am not going to apologize for that habit because I don't think I need to. If my stories are any good, it is mostly because I take the time to think things through. I try to develop my plots and characters. And I do not post until I feel it's ready. As an impatient fanfic reader myself, I can understand how frustrating that might be for some, but if it bothers you that much my only advice to you is to avoid WIP stories.

It's been said of my reviews that I am critical. In an attempt to avoid hurt feelings, I'd like to explain my philosophy on reviewing a little bit.

I was a creative writing minor is school. Before I sound too arrogant, let me assure you I hardly think that qualifies me as a great author or a potential critic for the New York Times. I only mention it because my most influential teacher often told us that the only thing less helpful than vague and nasty comments (what we call flames) are gushy and flattering comments. If someone is already doing something right, it's nice to let them know, but the only way anyone will improve and grow as a writer is to have the problems pointed out and advised upon.

So, when I write a review, I mention the things I like but I spend more time exploring things that could be improved. Now sometimes this may be a matter of opinion; I've gotten into my share of ideological conflicts although I try to avoid those unless the author asks for feedback on that topic. Most of the time, however, I try to focus on specific examples that I think disrupt the story or hold it back. Bottom line, I always try to be constructive and not malicious (I think I'm usually successful...) and I'm always willing to explain my comments if someone is confused or upset by something I've said (provided they are polite when they ask...).

Now I realize many authors are not interested in my kind of feedback. They have their own reasons for posting that don't include being critiqued or receiving suggestions. If that's the case, those authors should (and usually do) just ignore me. But I hope that understanding my reasons for reviewing will help assuage any hurt feelings that may come up. I know how sensitive people are about their creative works.




1. Issue » reviews
AU Begins between Cursed and Control. During his visit, Chase and his father had a huge fight. House wants details. Chase wants privacy. And Vogler’s arrival is making everything more complicated. Standard Disclaimer.
House, M.D. - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 15 - Words: 30,716 - Reviews: 151 - Updated: 8-26-08 - Published: 7-12-06
2. Fussy reviews
My first chapter of my first story written for 30 days and 30 nights. Takes place in season 5 and assumes that Wilson has now forgiven House, but I won't dwell on what happened and Wilson's Heart because for 30 days it's all about House and Chase!
House, M.D. - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,639 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 8-3-08 - Published: 8-3-08
3. Absolution » reviews
AU. There was more to Chase’s decision to go to Vogler than trying to keep his job. Afterward it's all over his guilt won’t let him stay quiet anymore. What has Chase been hiding from House? Credit to Fox, all disclaimers apply.
House, M.D. - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 12 - Words: 23,933 - Reviews: 184 - Updated: 1-25-08 - Published: 7-1-06
4. In the End » reviews
House's Fellowship lasts for two years. It's season 3. Chase's number is up and it's time for everyone to make some choices. All standard Disclaimers apply.
House, M.D. - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,193 - Reviews: 97 - Updated: 5-29-07 - Published: 10-27-06
5. Choices » reviews
AU What if Clark hadn't run alone at the end of Shattered, but had managed to bring Lex too? WARNING: Character Death
Smallville - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 14 - Words: 42,472 - Reviews: 140 - Updated: 3-6-07 - Published: 3-9-04
6. Precarious Balance » reviews
Leia dies young. Vader senses her death and Luke's life and becomes obsessed. Luke senses it too but even death can't divide force-twins. But can Luke handle power enhanced by his twin instead of shared and Vader hunting him? All disclaimers apply
Star Wars - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 12,723 - Reviews: 94 - Updated: 2-25-07 - Published: 4-29-05
7. The Two Powers » reviews
Chris may have escaped back to the past, but Wyatt isn't giving up so easily. Takes place a month or so after Chris-Crossed
Charmed - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 8 - Words: 38,318 - Reviews: 281 - Updated: 2-2-04 - Published: 12-4-03
8. Connor's Return » reviews
An ancient prophecy about Connor turns up leading Angel to bring him home. Free from the lies of Sarjong and Jasmine, Connor's true destiny will finally be revealed. Disclaimer: I do not own Angel or any of it's characters. NOT related to my other story
Angel - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 27 - Words: 43,876 - Reviews: 68 - Updated: 10-26-03 - Published: 10-15-03
9. We all make mistakes » reviews
Alternate season 4 and 5. Similar enough to original to flow. Centers on Connor's relationship with his father. Really long, but worth it. Legal note: I don't own Angel or any of the characters etc used in this piece. Full credit to the shows creators.
Angel - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 22 - Words: 61,917 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 9-26-03 - Published: 9-26-03
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