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since: 10-06-03, id: 465790, Profile Updated: 12-04-08
country: Hong Kong
Author has written 19 stories for Command & Conquer, Final Fantasy VIII, Starship Troopers, Max Payne, Harry Potter, Matrix, Diablo, Aliens/Predator, Neverwinter Nights, StarCraft, Misc. Movies, Dungeon Keeper, and Warhammer.

To anybody whose actually reading this introductory rant about me: Welcome!

I write what I want to write and what I like to read. I admit that I'm not the most up-to-the-moment and up-to-date person in the world and you'll find that I write about movies, games and books long after they have come in to being. What I write about is what I enjoy, and frankly it won't appeal to everybody. but there is truth in the adage that "if you try to please everybody, then you end up pleasing nobody."

By all means, criticize, so long as your criticism can be backed up or justified. Feel free to suggest possible improvements. I review and comment too, and I try to justify myself wherever I can because i hate three word reviews that state, "This is shit" or "this is crap." You don't help me, and you don't help anyone else. Don't get me wrong. Good reviews, positive comments and remarks I do like - face it folks, who does not like to have their ego stroked once in a while? but if you're going to comment, be constructive about it too!

If you want to read one of my works then I ask that as a reader you also read whatever "author's notes" and the story summaries as well before you start reading. Things in the realm of fan fiction will rarely follow the canon plot and storylines, matching all the data and data subsets and facts that exist in a given setting with 100 percent accuracy. I try to but that does not always work. I get creative, its fan fiction. Get used to it. It is a a thing that has come to my attention in recent days when looking through certain stories and some of the reviews that I have received is that people are nitpicking over minor details that do not fit with the canon, or are a little "too creative" and "too impossible to happen." My guess is that they do not read the summaries at the outset of the story that may include a warning or skip the chapter titled "authors notes" or that whole section where things are explained by the author for doing what they have done. For god's sake people, you want to read it, then read everything, especially if you're going to rip it apart in a review. If you are anally retentive to minor details in the canon then you might not want to read my work. If you read my work, its my opinion and intepretation of facts and events. If you don't have a justifable or defendable opinion or don't like my work for whatever personal reason you may have. I have a request of you: Save EVERYONE aggravation, and go read someone else’s work.

27/06/2007: In light of a recent tragedy that has stuck my circle of friends and a cirlce of my extended family in Hong Kong. I have written something in conjunction with several others who wanted to remain nameless to honor a fallen friend. He always was a staunch supporter of the Imperium, and of the role played by the Imperial Guard. When Halloween came around last year, he said he would have gone to the Fancy Dress Party as an Imperial Guard Commissar - if he could get the costume together. I'm no seamstress, but I present to you: "Defiant to the End." This piece is in memoriam to a close friend and a member of the aforementioned family, who has been taken before his time. Rest in Peace Andrew. You'll be missed and you won't be forgotten.

13/07/2007: The rewrite is complete and Keeper's Saga is finally finished. There was a lot more interest in this particular fan fic when I first published over three and a half years ago... I'm guessing too many people got fed up of waiting for me to repost or something as I've received pathetically few reviews for it... at current count 27 or 28... The original had almost 50 when it was half done. No matter. It’s done and I'm proud of it, so by all means, please read and review.

08/09/2007: The novelization of Command and Conquer III Tiberium Wars SUCKS. I have a very long rant on this subject that I wrote... and I've not yet posted it. I don't want to piss too many people off just yet... maybe I'll start a face book group on the topic. But yet to find one. Never mind... if I ever get round to writing an actual novelization of a great game... I'll post my rant before I start the fic...

24/05/08: I've been relatively absent over the past five months or so... gone but not exactly forgotten hopefully. I've been working on something for warhammer on and off for the past three months when I can find the time. Finally managed to finish a version that I am relatively satisfied with. Its loaded and ready so read, enjoy and review.Keep writing, keep reviewing and I'll see my fellow readers and writers within the ether - or the void- from which inspiration comes.

30/11/08: I know I've been gone for months... and I'm going to be gone for a while. No ideas or inspirations for fanfiction because I'm currently working on a novel that I hope to get published. That's taking up most of my time so all the fanfiction projects are going on the backburner until further notice.

Eristarisis

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1. Healers of the Imperial Guard reviews
The 41st Millinieum where warfare and darkness, where tales of courage and sacrifice in the service of the God Emperor of Man are commonplace. Peer in to the lives of the Medicae who fight for the wounded and dying of the Imperial Guard.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,573 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-24-08 - Complete
2. Keeper Saga: The Rise of a Demon Prince » reviews
RATED MATURE! Well. it was hurricane season in Hong Kong. It was a freak lightning bolt. It sent me somewhere. I became a Dungeon Keeper. and then something else. Now I'm home, and I tell you my story, and my story shall spell your doom and er is your dom
Dungeon Keeper - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Horror - Chapters: 24 - Words: 89,971 - Reviews: 37 - Updated: 7-8-07 - Published: 4-27-07 - Complete
3. Defiant to the End reviews
IN MEMORIAM of Andrew Benjamin Ferguson. Bravo Company of the 777th Regiment and its Commissar. One mountain pass. Beyond it is a City of civillians and before the pass and the stalwart Imperial Guard who do their duty, come the hordes of Chaos.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,297 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-26-07 - Complete
4. A Lieutenant Commander’s Farewell reviews
Star Terk: Nemesis. This is what you'd call a deleted scene, where Data in his quest to become more human, had left something behind, found after his sacrifice aboard the Scimitar. He says good bye to his friends, the six people that he was closest too.
Misc. Movies - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,913 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-4-06 - Complete
5. Dead Heart of a Survivor reviews
He lost everything the day the Light won. He walks alone because of a Prophecy that bound him and the one he loved. What happenend that fareful day, was what broke a survivor of the last great war between Light and Dark. A companion piece to In The End.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,889 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-10-06 - Neville L. & Luna L. - Complete
6. Twelve Strokes of Midnight reviews
What happens when Snape is finally caught in the act of betraying Lord Voldemort, and pays the ultimate price for betraying the Dark Lord he swore to serve. But at least in death, Severus Snape is given something he never expected. POST OOTP
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,891 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-3-06 - Severus S. & Voldemort - Complete
7. New Gettysburg: Death of Ghost, Birth of a Queen » reviews
A detailed but fictional account of what we don't see, of how the SoK forces were overrun on New Grttysburg, and how the Zerg came to capture and mutate a Ghost Lieutenant in to the Queen of the Zerg.
StarCraft - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,902 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6-14-06 - Sarah K. & James R. - Complete
8. Paladin's Last Wish » reviews
Aribeth surrendered before the fall of Morag and Maugrim. she knows what fate has in store for her: Death, in three days. But at the persuasion of Darius, she is given three days in protective custody.
Neverwinter Nights - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,396 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-16-06 - Published: 2-2-06 - Complete
9. The Mob's Justice » reviews
Fenthwick Moss. He was no traitor, yet he was tried, sentenced and executed as once. But at least in Death, he was granted some measure of peace. A three chapter ficlet that shows in detail how Fenthwick met his untimely end at the hands of the mob.
Neverwinter Nights - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,167 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-24-05 - Complete
10. Aliens Versus Predators: Whoever Wins, We Lose » reviews
Novelization of the 2004 Movie AVP told from the viewpoint of one of the three Yautja. Not a word of original dialogue, and the plot is not mine. I don't own anything herein apart from the characters of the Yautja.
Aliens/Predator - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 26,174 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 12-16-05 - Published: 11-12-05 - Complete
11. Breaking the Siege reviews
A short tale, of four heroes, and the barbarian hordes, to break the siege upon Horragath. a one shot, updated, reworked and finally completed!
Diablo - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,493 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-10-05 - Complete
12. Taint reviews
Morbid one shot: Remus Lupin is granted the power to change at will, and in exchange for this gift, he pledges to serve Lord Voldemort, taking the Dark Mark. A look at what he would become, and the carnage that he would wreck, carnage that would never die
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,344 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-10-05 - Remus L. & Ginny W. - Complete
13. The Battle for Zion reviews
The APUs, The pilots, The Sentinels. the battle for Zion through the eyes of one of Zions APU Pilots. Reworked, and corrected. Not a word of original dialogue, I don't own the matrix.
Matrix - Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,900 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-10-05 - Complete
14. In The End reviews
In The End, the war is over, Light triumphed over Dark, but what of the price that had to be paid. The toll exacted by the Forces of Dark,makes one of the Survivors wonder whether their victory was worth the price paid. A series of one shots.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,384 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 7-7-05 - Neville L. & Minerva M. - Complete
15. The Morning After reviews
Femslash, Ginny W. and Hermione G. show a start to something new? You never know and secrets do emerge from the most bizzare places. A one shot, no more will be written on this one. I don't characters etc..... RATING M!
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,941 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 6-28-05 - Ginny W. & Hermione G. - Complete
16. Starship Troopers The Saga of the Flaming Furies » reviews
The second generation of the Mobile Infantry, The Furies, based on what was in the movie ONLY as a basic reference point. I don't own the Bugs or the idea of the MI. everything else is original.
Starship Troopers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 6 - Words: 24,556 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 5-16-05 - Published: 4-6-05 - Complete
17. Max Payne Final Moments at the Beginning reviews
A Max Payne style ficlet, the end, or the beginning of a series of events? The truth is lost and may never be recovered.
Max Payne - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,417 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-21-05 - Complete
18. Fragments of memory reviews
Fragments of memories from Selphie, involving herself, Zell Dincht and another. A curse of sorts? A wish of something that can never be? Who knows what exactly she is thinking? A one shot what if fic.
Final Fantasy VIII - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,767 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-30-04 - Complete
19. Unknown Sniper reviews
one man, one rifle, one tale of life, its pain, and its end. Read and review, my first fic ever. Constructive criticism always appreciated. I don't own C&C or any of the units described herein but the character is my own.
Command & Conquer - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,596 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8-25-04 - Complete
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