MORE ANGRINESS!

Dear Annoyed,

In regards to the review I recieved telling me on no uncertain terms to take down the essay: I thank you very much for reminding me of the rules. I acted rashly and I have deleted. It will however remain in my bio.

In regards to trying to get my one story "Alright It's Your Turn" story deleted and having me suspended I have to say F YOU. My story is completely in the guidelines. It is short, to the point and not overly graphic. If you believe that my story, in fanfiction.net is graphic than you really need to read a whole lot more stories. I've made sure to only post rated M and below stories on fanfiction.net. I've got other stories rated higher than M on different sites. This story however is just simply rated M and not higher.

My email address is callmefreakishlyweird@gmail.com if you would like to leave a review that way.

In response to a recent reviewer I have a couple of things to say if you feel the need to review my stories.

I do not get offended by constructive critiscm. If there is something wrong with my story and you feel you can help me make it better please tell me about it.

I DO get offended by short snappy, two or three word disses of my stories. "This is bad, this is crap" Things like that piss me off.

I will be writing a story in response to Dragon-Fire 4343 . Not all of this person's reviews on my stories were bad. Short, snappy disses of my story make me angry.

EDIT: I had a moment of stupidity. I did post the essay, but I deleted it after recieving a review telling me that it was against fanfiction.net's policy. I knew this. Hence the moment of stupidity.

I am not taking down "Alright it's your turn. It is rated M. Fanfiction.net DOES state that I am allowed to have this story as long as it is rated appropriatley. I have other smutlets that I feel are too racy to be on this site. That is all, no stupidity on my part with that particular story.

Writing A Decent Review

Constructive criticism; some people know how to do this, others don’t, and others are just lazy. If you know how to write constructive criticism then this story is just a review to you. If you don’t, I highly suggest you read this. Not only does it make you a better writer but it makes you look a lot smarter when you leave a review. This helps the author make his or her story better; which in turn helps you.

I’m sure a lot of people on fanfiction.net know what a ‘flame’ is. I’ll explain what it is anyway. A flame is a nasty review that lacks any purpose other than to make the author feel bad about themselves and their story. Many authors simply give up posting their stories online and stop bettering themselves simply because they got a flame. Here is an example I’ve made up to show you exactly what a flame is. Whether it’s short or not depends on the author, but mine will be short.

“This story sucks. You suck at writing, don’t quit your day job.”

The list of examples could go on and on. To put it simply this is not constructive criticism. You are only making yourself look bad when you flame an author. Other people read the reviews of a story and see your review. Your review is written poorly, perhaps even poorer than the story you reviewed. What does that say to the author when you diss their story for poor grammar but do not even take enough time to make sure your review is exactly perfect?

If you read a story and you feel that it is poorly written and definitely needs improvement do not simply tell them that their story is bad. Tell them the exact parts of their story that need improvement. Tell them how to improve it even. If you say it needs to improve, obviously you can see it and help them fix it. Do the people that flame even know how frustrating it is to get a flame that does not help them improve their story at all?

Every one loves getting positive reviews that mean nothing except that their story is awesome, perfect and a great read. Other people are looking deeper into writing and want desperately to improve. I do want to improve my stories a great deal. I would rather have 5 pages worth of constructive criticism than get a stupid flame or nice ego inflator. Ego inflator’s are nice. Often they are the inspiration to write more chapters, for more of those nice reviews. I do like these, they brighten my day. Constructive criticism doesn’t exactly brighten my day but it makes me work harder to make my story absolutely perfect. Also when reviewing, try to avoid snappy three sentence reviews unless they are simply to say how great the story is.

All in all reviewer’s; make your review into something that will either brighten the author’s day or something to help further better their writing techniques. It does neither you nor the writer any good to simply diss their story and not say anything else. I bid you all well and I hope that if people read this essay they will take it to heart.

~bigreader~

A/N: This is in response to a recent reviewer (Dragon-Fire 4343) I’ve had to my stories. I don’t feel that any of my stories are particularly bad, but I do agree that a lot of them are indeed poorly written. I have not re-visited my stories to better them in a couple of years. My writing has definitely improved since I wrote the stories. I hope every one has enjoyed reading my essay. Most of all, definitelyfeel free to give me a constructive criticism review on this essay. I daresay it can definitely be improved.

Real Name: Danni

Grade: Freshman in College

Age: 18

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