My old name here was jacked, but it's the same old Mr. E from about five years ago, continuing to hone my skills on one story in particular now that the ban on content has been loosened. I'm open to constructive criticism, which means tearing down of work AND leaving materials in place to rebuild (e.g. Character A sucks because of Thing B, so add Thing C to fix it). Questions that you want answered should be sent to redknight2k@hotmail.com.