| Arethusa Fellini |
Author has written 8 stories for Ragnarok Online, and Naruto. contact me deviantArt 03.01.2008 Yeah, I know it's March. I said I'll post in January though it seemed that didn't work out, either. I'm here 'cause I had the measles. And my doctor made me promise not to go to work for a time of two weeks. Nice. When I get to work on Monday I'll have my salary without even lifting a finger. I even got promoted while I was away. Ohoho~ Expect more from me real soon. = Scratch Board = Naruto: One World A six-part AU romance series set in the world of the wealthy and in the competitive world of journalism. Genre: Drama/Romance/Humor/Alternate Reality Yours for the Taking Acceptance Au Contraire, Mon Chéri Never-ever Land Lady Honey Pot The Money Game Note: This AU series will most probably be the last of my Naruto fan fictions. The Ninja Game Second Best Attention: I'm offering comprehensive reviews for completed works. It can be your choice whether I private message this review to you or submit it as a review to the story link. However, due to the length of the review, I have to warn you that it might get cut off by FF.net's system. I have the authority to accept or reject a story that was requested to be reviewed. I'm a nice person so most of the time it would get accepted. If it didn't then it only means this: your work sucked. You didn't give enough effort on writing that piece of fiction. Why should I give you a fully worked on comprehensive review when I would have obviously done more work than you did? Still interested? So what does this comprehensive crap contain? • My opinion on the introduction, middle part, and ending of the story So I guess you're asking now, 'What are you, an expert?' Well, no. But I know my capabilities and I can tell you what I think without you worrying if I was sucking up to you. So if you are still willing for me to chop up your work of fiction into tiny little pieces then drop me a message. my animé/asian drama watch list my manga read list Note: users in my favorite authors list are friends, not favorite author per se. | |||||||
1. Yours for the Taking » reviews[AU] Hinata is a painter who lives with her cousin, Neji. Sasuke has more than enough money to last him three lifetimes. They acknowledge their attraction to each other. Yet what's stopping Hinata? SasuHina. NejiTen side story.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 24,446 - Reviews: 168 - Updated: 5-18-07 - Published: 3-6-07 - Hinata H. & Sasuke U.2. Second Best » reviewsChapter IV: Awakening. Finally, Naruto has awakened. But he wasn't the only one that was brought into an awakening. Feelings, good or bad, unwanted or not, surface with uncontrolled vehemence. And it doesn't necessarily have to be connected to Naruto.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,325 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 2-4-07 - Sasuke U. & Hinata H.3. The Ninja Game » reviews[AU] The cast of Naruto are in senior high school and have suddenly taken an interest in an online game, Ninja. Strong bonds are broken in favor of new ones... for the better, perhaps?Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 17,744 - Reviews: 130 - Updated: 2-23-07 - Published: 10-23-06 - Hinata H. & Sasuke U.4. Reliance reviewsThis is what bonds them. This is what breaks them. A Neji x Tenten drabble.Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 396 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-13-07 - Published: 1-10-07 - Neji H. & Tenten - Complete5. Deteriora Sequor » reviewsWhat if the dark side is your only choice? A story about friendship, love, betrayal, and righteousness. [discontinued]Ragnarok Online - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,612 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-2-04 - Published: 6-30-04 - Complete6. The Roundabout Way » reviewsA thief changes his path by attempting to become a knight. An elderly knight, with a dark past, helps him. [on hold]Ragnarok Online - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,670 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-29-04 - Published: 4-26-047. Jealousy reviewsLeticia Chilcott is useless but has everything. Invidia Shadowmoon is known to be the best in Geffen Academy but no one acknowledges her. Invidia is jealous of Leticia's easy life... and she'll do anything to get what she wants.Ragnarok Online - Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 926 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-5-04 - Complete8. A Poring's Tale reviewsA short story of a poring's journey of the hardknocked life. 'The Pink Blob' is a small poring that grew in South Prontera. Read as the pink poring experiences friendship, love, and finally... death.Ragnarok Online - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,047 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 4-16-04 - Complete