| Arieru Ratoretto |
Author has written 3 stories for Crescent Moon, and Naruto. Hey, this is Arieru, but you can call me Arie. I'd like to work on my writing style and averything, maybe a bit of grammar, so any constructive criticism is very welcome. In fact, I encourage it! Please! But I would prefer if you gave a reason as to why you think something isn't good so that I can fix it. Not only in my writing style, but if there are certain problems with the plot, holes I overlooked, or maybe if something needed to be a bit more clear. Thank you, and I guess I'll just put down a few of my interests since that's what profiles seem to be about... I like too many anime/manga to list here. I'll but down my favorite characters and pairings for a few of them, though. Oh yeah, I use the word 'charie' as a short for character. Death Note: I don't like any pairings in this story, but Light is cool and L is also cool. I don't much care for Near or Mello. I haven't gotten to the part with the other guy who's into D N Angel: Riku X Satoshi, Not because they work together, but because they're my two favorite characters. (I HATE Dark and Risa, but Daisuke's okay) Fruits Basket: I like Kyou. He is the coolest. Rin is cool, too. I guess I'd like Kyou X Tohru, but only because Kyou deserves to be happy. Same with Rin X Haru Fullmetal Alchemist: Edward Rocks. Yes, with a capital 'r'. I don't really like any pairings in this particular story. It's good the way it is. Godchild: I hate pretty much all the characters, but I like it anyway... Strange... No pairings for this one either. Naruto: Hinata, Shikamaru, and Sasuke are my favorites. Even though Sasuke is SUCH an emo... I can realize that and like him anyway. Hinata is just wonderful. She is the only cool female character. The others are really hateful besides a few but they aren't likable either. Shikamaru is just a genius and he's amusing. I like NaruHina, but only because it would make Hinata happy and she deserves to be happy. I don't hate Naruto, but he's not my favorite. I like him as portrayed by oranges in the sun, though. I didn't like this at first because I didn't know it existed, but SasuHina is... SO cool. ShikaHina. They're my favorites, so yeah. And also GaaHina. Don't ask, it works. (Yay for crack pairings!) Oh! A little of my opinion... I think that Sasuke is an asexual. Some people are convinced he's gay, other's hope he's straight, some say bi. I say none. He just isn't interested, at least cannon he isn't. Oh, and I recently got into HidanXTemari... Because of Coffe Table Talk. LOOK AT IT! It's so awesome. _ Ouran High School Host Club: My favorite charies are Haruhi, Tamaki, Kyouya, Hikaru, and Kaoru. I like them all equal. I don't care about the pairings so much, but I like Haruhi X Tamaki and Hikaru X Haruhi, Haruhi X Kyouya, and I suppose any of the guys together would be funny, too. Tamaki is just too funny, so he's cool. Plus the whole bipolar thing works for him. Hikaru is cool in the same way that Kyou from Furuba is. Kaoru is cool because he just seems smart to me and same for Kyouya. I think Haruhi is either asexual or pansexual. (Don't know what that last one is? Basically gender doesn't matter. Unlike bi who like both, pan doesn't understand the concept of gender, or so wikipedia explained.) Ranma 1/2: Akane and Ryouga are my favorites. I don't much care for Ranma. I hate Shampoo, along with most of the other characters, but alas they are amusing. I guess you could say I like Akane X Ryouga, but I really think that's very far-fetched, so stories that just have him like her are funny enough. Ranma and Akane liking each other with Ryouga liking Akane is basically it, although that's cannon. Akane is cool because she's strong willed and she actually tries to save herself sometimes. Ryouga is just... I don't know why I like Ryouga. I just do. Slayers: Zelgadis. Is. The. Best. Lina is my favorite female character, since most of the others are... Whores. Or annoying. Or both. Gourry is okay, but he's stupid. Zelgadis is just cool all around.Lina is funny, and Zelgadis is smart. By now you probably know that I like smart charies. Vampire Game: Duzzel, of course. Ishtar and Darres, too. Pairings: I don't really care. I just like those characters. Darres a bit less since he can be dull, but I forgive him. Duzzel is the most because he's brilliant. I can't help it, I just respect smart charies more. HOLiC: I like it so much I don't even have a favorite character. I love them all. No pairings yet again, lol. I don't want to write down anymore, so... Stories in progress: Currently, both Naruto. I don't know why, but I'm going through a Naruto stage. Just got over my FMA stage, too... Oh well. Kasumi ni Kitsune, directly translated to Fox Spirit in the Mist. Why? Purely because it sounds cool. It has to do with fox spirits, but mist has nothing to do with anything besides the title. It's basically me thinking about how to extend the plot of Nartuo to include more about Kyuubi and fox spirits in general. The whole reason I picked up Naruto to begin with was because it said fox on the back, lol. The story is about how Kyuubi had a daughter and she was kidnapped by a konoha ninja and that's why she attacked everyone. The story is told from an omniscient narrator, and sometimes each individual p.o.v. for effect and what not. It's mostly about the daughter of Kyuubi, though, because I couldn't get the image of a girl calling Naruto 'mother'. Hee hee hee. The original concept was from an Rp character I made in a role play with a friend over hotmail. This plot concept is (c) ME! Thankyouverymuch. I'm working on it, but sadly I must sort out which scenes come and in what order because I tend to make an elaborate background story, a couple of good scenes, and have no way to connect them... I'm still working on that... I just started on a fic about Hinata. In this fic she's asexual, but hetero-romantic. (She hates sex/anything of the sort but falls in love with boys) It starts out with her in a bad relationship with a very pushy Kiba (FORGIVE ME FOR MAKING HIM SUCH A JERK, I HAD TO FOR THE SAKE OF THE STORY! T_T). Her father finds out about it and decided she needs to get married. Since I don't think he's completely evil (check out how he treats Neji after the chuunin exam), he tells her that she has until her 18th birthday to get engaged or he'll find her a husband. It's a SasuHina, but Sasuke doesn't show up until a few chapters in. This was originally going to be the SasuHina below but I was inspired to do something different. The one below will probably end up being my doujinshii instead of a fanfic. I'm going to start a new Naruto fanfic, too! This one is about the Sharingan and the Byakugan. It's a SasuHina, but I won't post it until I have a lot written, because I know otherwise I will forget to update and people will hate me. I'm going to have a prelude, but I'm actually writing the middle first. That's because the middle has the most content. It will have three parts to it. The first is about how Sasuke and Hinata met, and eventually get married. (Yeah, it's gunna be as in character as I can get it. This means HINATA likes NARUTO and she will CONTINUE to like him for a LONG time because I don't think she's the kind of person to get over something like that quickly. Sasuke will STAY an ass, but I won't over do it. He will NOT be overly horny because he ISN'T. He will be what I see when I watch/read the actual Naruto story. Please LET ME KNOW if I get OOC when I finally post it, I don't want to be a bad portrayer of character.) The second arc is about they're marriage up until they're first child is born. Yup, they have children. Lots of them. I mean lots, too. The third will be about when their children are older and how they raise them. A little bit about the children themselves, but one in particular. I actually wrote out a ton of Punnett Squares to show how the inheritance of the Byakugan and Sharingan would work. This is basically how the genetics would work out. The genetics of things is kind of important, but you don't really need to know anything about genetics to enjoy the story or even understand it. I'm just a science geek and like explaining things like that. _ So, those are my ideas, I am working them out as we speak. And by we, I mean I. And by speak, I mean type. I have a bunch of pictures that I'm gunna upload for both stories as soon as I can scan them. I don't completely suck, but I'm not saying that I'm the best either. I'll try to learn to ink and color on the computer better, I can do it okay, but not 'well'. Till then I will have them in the awesome new inking pens I got from Kinokuniya. I'll put up a link for my deviant art account when I get them up, thanks for your time. DEVIANT ART: My username is daikiraikimi. The link: http://daikiraikimi.deviantart.com/ | |||||||||
1. A series of Dark Poetry » reviewsThese are a group of poems that were not originally written for Cresent Moon, but kind of fit into the Light vs Dark theme.Crescent Moon - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 9 - Words: 1,435 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 9-29-07 - Published: 12-22-05 - Complete2. It's not Denial » reviewsMost girls experience sexual attraction in their teens,but not Hinata.She's had crushes but never wished to act upon them.She has a bad first relationship with a pushy boyfriend and her father finds out. UPDATE: Chapter 5 is up, sorry for the wait!Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,806 - Reviews: 37 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 6-19-07 - Hinata H. & Sasuke U.3. Kasumi ni Kitsune Fox in the Mist » reviewsThe nine tailed fox demon left Konoha ravaged, but why? Gai sensei reveals the shameful mistake of his youth, and a strange girl calls Naruto mother. Back up, Plot Bunnies be gone!Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,230 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-13-07