I appreciate constructive criticism, comments, compliments, etc…Constructive criticism is most helpful to me though, so thanks. And more on comments about writing style (spelling, what you liked and didn‘t, grammar, character analysis, etc.), not so much on plot ideas (ie - you should make so-and-so fall in love) because, while I appreciate the interest, I usually don’t take it into consideration. Frankly, I don't care so much for spelling or grammar either unless my writing is completely atrocious. In which case, blast away.

My other stuff is up on fictionpress.net, so here’s the link:
http://www.fictionpress.com/~ivyether

Aug 25/2005 - Would it help if I said I'm working on the fourth and final chapter? Just give me time. I've had massive writer's block (for the past three years). I know: LAME! I've learned my lesson (hopefully): no more posting unfinished stuff on the net. If only I had known...