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Author has written 20 stories for Kim Possible, Justice League, StarTrek: The Next Generation, Misc. Comics, and Star Wars. I've wanted to be a writer for as long as I can remember. I never did anything with it, though, until I found this place. Now that I have a forum to show my work and get feedback on it I'm much more prolific. I have lots of stories to share, and look forward to reading yours. As far as reviews go, I like all of them (I do have an ego after all :)), but I especially like in depth, critical reviews. You know, comments on technique, pointing out bad characterization, gaping plot holes, etc. Advice and tips are always welcome. Some things I've got planned for the future (or at least am thinking about). A humorous story ( to see if I can even do it). A series of one-shots that expand on scenes from various episodes of the show. A sequel to 'Moods 2', although it will be an action/adventure type story. And, of course, my own take on the end and aftermath of 'So the Drama'. Pet peeve: Writers who announce their pairings in their summary. If your story is good, I'll read it no matter who ends up with who. If it isn't good, telling me it's (for example) a Kim/Ron fic won't get me to read more than the first few paragraphs. Tip: A summary needs to pique the reader's curiousity without giving away too much of the plot. It also needs to be short, since FF.net cuts them off at a certain length. A method I find that works is to use the premise that gets the story going. Say that your story is about Kim and Ron joining forces with the Go Team to fight a new villain. If the first chapter has Kim and Ron traveling to Go City to visit the Go Team, use that as the summary: "While in Go City, Kim and Ron must join forces with the Go Team to defeat a terrible new villain." It's short, simple, and gives away almost nothing of the plot. As an added bonus, it won't discourage anyone who dislikes particular kinds of stories or certain pairings from reading it. Classic Cowboy and I are teaming up on a crossover between his Ron as Batman story and my Kim as Superwoman story. It's called Worlds Finest, and you can find it here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2797772/1/ | |||||||
1. Scenes from KP: the Last, Kim Possible Returns reviewsI may never finish it, but I want to share some of the scenes I envisioned when I concieved it.Kim Possible - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 802 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-6-082. Kim Possible: The Last: Kim Possible Returns » reviewsAfter an absence of more than a year, Kim Possible returns to Earth. Contains spoliers. Ongoing.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,721 - Reviews: 66 - Updated: 3-24-07 - Published: 7-6-063. Kim's Got a Boyfriend » reviewsKim has a new boyfriend: Ron Stoppable! How will their friends and families react?Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,736 - Reviews: 62 - Updated: 3-10-07 - Published: 3-3-07 - Kim P. & Ron S.4. Unfinished Business » reviewsElisa Cameron wakes up in a restroom after an experience that will change her life forever. Slightly AU.Misc. Comics - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,779 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 2-19-07 - Published: 4-7-055. Points of View » reviewsThe United Federation of Planets and its Star Fleet, seen from a different point of view.StarTrek: The Next Generation - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 25,776 - Reviews: 68 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 3-5-056. The Most Toys » reviewsKim, Ron and Supergirl team up against the Toyman and his robotic allies.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,368 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 1-8-06 - Published: 12-31-057. Getting Blooded reviewsIn the early days of the Rebellion, a new pilot has his first taste of combat.Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,441 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-29-05 - Complete8. Kim Possible: The Last » reviews[Complete]Experimenting with a new kind of story, for me anyway: a Kim PossibleSuperman fusion. Rated 'T' for violence and some suggestive language.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 15 - Words: 50,025 - Reviews: 262 - Updated: 11-13-05 - Published: 7-2-05 - Complete9. Battered, but Unbroken reviewsShego and Drakken, after their latest run in with Team Possible. One shot.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,435 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 9-25-05 - Complete10. Smallville, the Next Generation » reviewsSupergirl, as seen through the eyes of her friend Susan Ross. Rerated for strong language, including one use of the 'f' word.Justice League - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 16,789 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 6-27-05 - Published: 3-5-0511. Test of Strength » reviews[Complete]Supergirl and Team Possible face their deadliest foes yet, as an old enemy returns from the grave in search of vengeance.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 16 - Words: 47,378 - Reviews: 63 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete12. Snowbound » reviews[Complete]Kim and Ron are trapped by a winter storm. Rated 'M' for language, sexual references and sexual situations.Kim Possible - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 19,312 - Reviews: 350 - Updated: 5-15-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete13. Kim and Kara » reviews[Complete]When Drakken's tactics turn deadly, Kim and Ron get a new partner. But who, and what, is she?Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 16,227 - Reviews: 40 - Updated: 3-15-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete14. Moods 2 » reviews[Complete]Sequal to 'Moods'. Rated 'M' for sexual references and sexual situations.Kim Possible - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 17,716 - Reviews: 107 - Updated: 3-15-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete15. Monkeys Amok » reviews[Complete]Kim and Ron head to Smallville, Kansas, where they run into Monkey Fist (which they expect) and Supergirl (which is a complete surprise). Rated 'R' for language, violence, sexual references and sexual situations.Kim Possible - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 12 - Words: 28,779 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 3-14-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete16. Killigan's Folly » reviews[Complete]A well earned vacation is interrupted when Kim and Ron stumble across Duff Killigan's latest scheme.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 10 - Words: 18,691 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 3-13-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete17. Moods » reviews[Complete]Set after 'Emotion Sickness'. My first try at romance.Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,037 - Reviews: 85 - Updated: 3-10-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete18. Sweet Sixteen » reviews[Complete]Kim's sixteenth birthday is fast approaching. Will Ron find the right gift in time?Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,397 - Reviews: 37 - Updated: 3-8-05 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete19. Fearful Symmetry Redux reviewsRewrite of the episode with the glaring weaknesses removed. Conspiracy stories should never be definative. One shot.Justice League - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,030 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete20. Zen and the Art of Ass Whupping reviewsAn alternate version of the encounter between Brick and Hirotaka in 'Exchange'. Rated 'R' for language. One shot.Kim Possible - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 680 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 3-5-05 - Complete
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