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since: 03-01-05, id: 768376, Profile Updated: 01-27-12
country: Canada
Author has written 72 stories for Star Wars, Thief: The Dark Project, Star Wars, and Dragon Age.

Name: Talhiri

Other sites: http://www.thepoetsanctuary.net/ (talhiri) http://www.fictionpress.com/~talhiriserrano

I haven't written on here for a while, I've been away on other projects and sites. I tend to focus in Science Fiction and Fantasy, and am going to start writting again, though slowly. Check out Fictionpress and Poet Scantuary for other stuff.

Generally my work is original except for things like fan stories for video games and so on. My poems are usually original while possibly influnced by whatever is around at the moment.

That's about it.


Note:

All ownership belongs the the company who makes the games, etc...When I am writting fanstories, I will follow as the information as closely as I can though certain facts may be altered or adjusted to fit what I am writting. I understand that while some readers don't mind that, that some do. For those that do please keep this in mind:

It is just a story being written for fun and practice. It somestimes feels to me that a character would be better as female or male rather than what is cannon. And in some cases, not everyone agrees but no one forces you to read or rag the point of the chosen sex of the character. If you don't like it, that is fine. Please just keep that note in mind and don't flame a piece of work because you don't like the choices of character gender, names, etc...

Currently working on Dragon Age 2, and Mass Effect 1-2

Splashes of Dragon Age 1 Expect spordiac updates at times due to Writer's block, or my attention focused on other stories.

Some stories may include character pairing F/F or F/M depends on the story and profile of the character(s) I am using though there will never be M/M
If you don't like it, just don't read it, I will mark it in the summary

Note* All previous stories ie Kotor/Star Wars have been abandoned until futher notice, though I may pick them up again/rewrite them at somepoint.

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1. The Aftermess » reviews
Set after Kirkwall falls, Hawke and her friends leave the city to escape and start over. Will contain more explict content in later chapters.
Dragon Age - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,722 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-5-12 - Published: 11-6-11 - Hawke & Fenris
2. A decade in the making
An overview of Hawke's journy from the start to the end, and maybe a reason why Hawke left. Minor vague spoilers if you haven't played the game.
Dragon Age - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Published: 11-6-11 - Hawke - Complete
3. She's the daughter
I remember those nights when I held her in my arms and played with her. It's just not right, even though she's the daughter, I strived to find after all these years of abandoning them... Poem about Bobba Fett and his family!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Published: 9-24-06 - Complete
4. He was my father, but I never knew him
And yet there was something special something that was in those stories that made him, my father...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Published: 9-24-06 - Luke S. & Darth Vader - Complete
5. Waking up alone reviews
Carth wakes up to find Revan gone... Dramatic and tearful.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-22-06 - Complete
6. Standing besides you reviews
A poem from Malak to Revan before the Great Wars... If they hadn't turned into enemies, where would they have gone?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 417 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-27-06 - Complete
7. Scared
Ever wonder what's out in the dark? Or what chases Revan in hisher dreams?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Published: 6-27-06 - Complete
8. His name » reviews
His name was Trevor. He wasn't pale but he was an outsider, quiet and lonely to say the least. Trevor didn't really talk much, he was always angry, always destroying things, whether they were his or not. In the end it all comes down to his name, Trevor...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,140 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-22-06 - Published: 3-9-06 - Complete
9. Satisfaction reviews
A thief is stealing agian, but what happens when he finds a servant girl hiding behind the pillar? Does he have to kill her to keep her quiet?
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-17-06 - Complete
10. Asking
A padawan asking her Master, if there is any reason to keep hiding from the galaxy and training to become a Jedi after the Jedi Civil War resulting from Revan's disappearance and the Mandalorian Wars. Who wants to be hated for something they are?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Published: 2-13-06 - Complete
11. Living dead reviews
I'll jump or I won't. The Exile's taking the War more seriously now and is doubting his Leader, Revan as his old friend leads them into more and more battles, will the killing stop? The Exile can't find this answer as he stands above the wreckage of a rec
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-13-06 - Complete
12. Something missing reviews
A what if idea that had happeend because Garrett had left the money for the Widow, after the Seaside Mannor? Now he's rotting away in jail, finally captured by the City Watch.
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-1-06 - Complete
13. The darker verison of life
A cold look on how different Revan is towards the Jedi now when he finds out that they'll refuse to fight the Mandalorians and he's questioning them as he learns more and more of the Ancient Dark Arts of the Force.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Published: 1-29-06 - Complete
14. When everything is wrong
A poem from Dustil's point of view after Telos is destroyed and then when his father comes, Dustil is gone, away to join the Sith...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 1-29-06 - Complete
15. Wishing that you where here again reviews
Another poem about Carth and Revan and how Carth's dealing with Revan gone. After all the years that she has been gone and left him thier son to raise, Carth realizes just how much he depended on his wife and how lonely he is now... The forgiveness she on
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-29-06 - Complete
16. Too cherish all
Learning from the Jedi Holocrons isn't boring, especially when its telling you the tale of many brave Jedi men and women from eons ago, who fought and lived.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Published: 1-28-06 - Complete
17. The Last
A darkside Revan, the moment before his mind is nearly destroyed after Malak's betrayal he questions the Jedi Masters briefly... anything related to them, he hurls this emotion at Bastila, and the bond is forged.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Published: 1-28-06 - Complete
18. Experience reviews
Revan's waiting for the Exile to find her in the Unknown Regions. Will the Exile suceed in battle against Sion and Kreia or will he give up? Is Revan waiting for support, or to be disappointed if the Exile fails? Thier love was strong then, what it is now
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-06 - Complete
19. Blood Room
The StarForge has been destroyed and Revan has left for the unknown Regions, but does Revan watch over the Exile as he battles Sion and Kreia...? Who is that dark figure watching without emotion, silent as the grave, standing in the background of the batt
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Published: 1-28-06 - Complete
20. Look at me
A poem about the Exile as a child, hiding his Force powers away from his family of AntiJedi or anything remotely related towards the Jedi Order.
Star Wars - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Published: 1-28-06 - Complete
21. Double or nothing
A poem from the view of Mission as Revan fights against Malak and Bastila on the StarForge, while she is hiding out in the Ebon Hawk, waiting for Revan to return to them with Bastila in tow, and the galaxy to be saved.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Published: 1-28-06 - Complete
22. Green Grace reviews
Vrook's getting old in his age, but his mind's still as sharp as ever and the knowlege he knows hasn't faded. What were his last thoughts before he died? The last time when he saw the Exile and her new 'Master?
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-15-06 - Complete
23. Three in One reviews
If the Darkside of the Force had a voice and was following people in theier nightmares, what would it whisper in thier ears? What voices would clamber about in thier heads...?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-14-06 - Complete
24. Lover's kiss reviews
Was Revan and Malak's love really worth a war and the betrayal? Did all of this happen because of two lovers caught within thier own personal war, while killing the Mandalorians in the Outer battle?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-14-06 - Complete
25. It reviews
Before they were called the Sith, before they came to the known galaxy and civilation they wre a different race, one that was more wraith and hateful than the Sith, impossible though it may seem...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-14-06 - Complete
26. Past beyond reviews
What happened when all those Jedi were turned away from the Light side of the Force towards the Dark side of the Force while Revan was battling the war? What exactly was thier choice given to them once they past through those dark doors?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-14-06 - Complete
27. Outcast reviews
What happens when the son of Garrett, the Master Thief and a Pagan Priestess is forced to leave the City, his only home because of a prohpecy and the call of the Wild, with his faithful catfriend Rumour?
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-14-06 - Complete
28. On the Edge again
A poem focusing on a third person view of the Wars and the breaking and hardening resolve of the people affected by it and the idleness of the Jedi Council.
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Published: 12-30-05 - Complete
29. Gone reviews
From the Exile to Revan when they are fighting the war, near the end of the Mandalorian Wars. As a lover and a friend, who wins here and who loses more I can not say.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-22-05 - Complete
30. Back there, where we never went reviews
A poem for Revan and Malak, atfer they fought and betrayed each other. You pick the person you think wrote it.
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-16-05 - Complete
31. A Change reviews
A change is about to be made to the lives of the Ebon Hawk's crew and thier leader, Revan... but is this good or bad?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 614 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-05 - Complete
32. Should I have? reviews
A short poem about Carth who's slowly sinking into depression from revan leaving him behind.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-10-05 - Complete
33. Shattered, why isn't love fair? Revised Verison reviews
Why isn't love fair? This poem questions that fact, from the ones who loved Revanthe Exile while they are away and takes a darker path than the orignal poem.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 434 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-05 - Complete
34. Shattered, why isn't love fair? reviews
Why isn't love fair? This poem questions that fact, from the ones who loved Revanthe Exile while they are away.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-10-05 - Complete
35. I can't do this anymore reviews
A tale of a sadden Revan who's left Bastila and is reliving his departure from the woman he loved as he goes out to destroy the darkness that threatens the Galaxy once again...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-8-05 - Complete
36. Training reviews
Garret's training an apprentice. Will this girl live up to the rough life as a Thief? Can she survive his training?
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 424 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-30-05 - Complete
37. Shivers reviews
Something's lurking in the City, but what is it? All you young keepers listen to my words and learn.
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-30-05 - Complete
38. A Battle of Cultures » reviews
The reasons as to why Mandalore declared war on the Republic didn't rise because of a fued clan or the need to test themselves. No, it started because one Jedi and her daughter...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,421 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-26-05 - Published: 8-21-05 - Complete
39. Paralysis reviews
A what if poem with Garret being in love with a noble's daughter who's house is being robbed by his work.
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-25-05 - Complete
40. Fear reviews
A poem about the Master Thief, Garret after the end of the Dark Project.
Thief: The Dark Project - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-23-05 - Complete
41. Triss » reviews
The Daughter of Bastila and Revan, she needs to find who she is after her fatehr leaves and her mother turns from the loving woman she knew into a dark, rageful woman with no ties to Bastila Shan.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 5,943 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 9-14-05 - Published: 8-21-05
42. I watched her from afar reviews
Exile and Visas Marr poem from Exile's view. His love for her and feelings described...
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-5-05 - Complete
43. Foolish, is it not? reviews
A first attempt at Visas' character, after she realizes that the Exile does not love her but the Handmaiden. Bitter at first and then sadden, here is her tale for you to read.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-3-05 - Complete
44. A Journal by Thomas Ordainas » reviews
A journal hidden from the past has surfaced and carries memories, recordings of people who knew Revan before the Mandalorian Wars... even before Revan came to live at the Jedi Enclave on Dantoonie...
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,017 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-28-05 - Complete
45. Burning Heart reviews
Redeemed and finally having returned with Revan from the Unknown Regoings, a lightside Male Exile returns to find his wife dead and his home burning he reflects on promises he made her.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-23-05 - Complete
46. The last time I ever saw him reviews
A recounting from a survivor of the Mandalorian Wars about, Revan as he changed and the love they shared.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 410 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-21-05 - Complete
47. Following the footsteps » reviews
The Star Forge has been destroyed but for the Ebon Hawk and her crew relanships have taken a turn for the worse! Umm, anyone else but me, think Revan finally snapped after all this? Mission's eyes were wide as she stared at the mess, around them. R&R
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,844 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 8-20-05 - Published: 4-20-05
48. The fragile balance of the heart and soul » reviews
Revan's leaving for the Unknown regions has left Bastila in an unstable state. "What's happening to her" Carth exclaimed as the woman covulsed and arched in pain in his arms. "I don't know, Carth, but we gotta get out of here, Mission sounded scared."
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,305 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 8-19-05 - Published: 4-25-05
49. Pain reviews
After all she's done, Revan is finally dying on her deathbed, from old age. AS she lays there dying, her daughter thinks back to the years past and all that has happened since her mother left for the Unknown Regions and when she returned.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 560 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-17-05 - Complete
50. Hiding reviews
A sequel to He wandered far and wide, the Exile is wandering in the Unkown Reaches of the galaxy, searching, always searching. Please Read and Review!
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-8-05 - Complete
51. He wandered far and wide reviews
A poem about Atton Rand while the Exile is away in the Unknown Reaches. His search for her... Read and Review pelase!
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-1-05 - Complete
52. Falling away reviews
Short oneshot chapter with a female Revan lightside and the rest of the gang, from the crew about Revan leaving. Please read and review!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,690 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-4-05 - Complete
53. I just wish somewhere along this broken path reviews
A male Revan is remembering his life back before everything went wrong and he's asking if it would be just too much to fix the world again, while he walks along the broken path of his life. Set just before Kotor: Sith Lords and the Exile's appearance.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 386 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-30-05 - Complete
54. The Laws of the Lady Revan reviews
This is a funny parody of my penname's character that I wrote out of pure boredom for the heck of it, enjoy!
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 608 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-16-05
55. Punishment » reviews
This story is a Exile based after Kotor 2 and the Shades, are out for blood. Jedi blood and the General Kestrel ortherise known as the Exile in paticuliar. May contain some grapic scenes or vivdly described scenes regarding wounds.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,800 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-1-05
56. Result of Mandalore's death reviews
One shot chapter written ages ago - Revan's killed Mandalore and now she's having a well deserved break from the responsibilities of a war hero. What's cheeky Revan going to do now?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,026 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-13-05 - Complete
57. Dark Changes reviews
One chapter attempt at showing how Revan could have started killing people and fallen in love with Malak.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 657 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-12-05 - Complete
58. Remember reviews
Revan's leaving Carth and their little daughter what's she going to do and where's she going? When will she come back into her daughter's life?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-10-05 - Complete
59. Look away reviews
Carth's hurting when Revan leaves him. His thoughts... what would they be after he knows she's not comming back ...ever, possibly?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-8-05 - Complete
60. What have they done? reviews
Malak's wondering who he and Revan really are now, that they've dallen to the dark side, or at least started down the path...
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-8-05 - Complete
61. You are what they will never understand reviews
A terrible mistake has been made. What would the Exile have done if she could have changed it? What would she have done...? R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 655 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-19-05 - Complete
62. Once long ago reviews
A look from Bastila's point of view of after the Star Forge. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-12-05 - Complete
63. Chanting times four reviews
A view on the Exile preceeding her return to the Jedi Council... R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-12-05 - Complete
64. Alone, I stand reviews
A confession and an ultimatum from a lightside female Revan about her past and what is to become of the future. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-8-05 - Complete
65. All that I am for you reviews
A view of Carth's feelings for the lightside female Revan, as a way of trying to persaude her not to leave, by telling her, all that he is for her... R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-8-05 - Complete
66. Every ending has to start somewhere reviews
A confession and an ultimatum from a female light side Revan. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 296 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-8-05 - Complete
67. Revan reviews
A poem based on the prophecy of the Force and the grandmother, for the girl who grows up to become Revan. This poem is set before the game Knights of the Old Republic and the Mandalorian Wars. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-26-05 - Complete
68. The Dark Side's call reviews
A small short poem about the dark side's call based as a first person view from the dark side itself as a real character or person. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-26-05 - Complete
69. How it hurts me, to see it, through their eyes reviews
A recollection of Taris and its ruined planet after the War, through the eyes of the very empathic and sensitive Revan's eyes as a female character. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 477 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-26-05 - Complete
70. Revan's poem reviews
This poem is based on the game Knights of the Old Republic and the author's thoughts on the character as she struggles to find her indenity after the Star Forge has been destoryed. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-26-05 - Complete
71. Blocked reviews
This poem is based on the Knights of the Old Knights of the Republic and in this poem, Carth Onasi is talking in an enclosed room to a Jedi Council Member unknown to him that he is part of their ploy to sway the light side Revan away from him. R&R, pleas
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 529 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-26-05 - Complete
72. I wonder reviews
This poem was based on the game – Revan and his love, Bastila now have broken up after a fight and now Revan is trying to figure out what went wrong and complating all the past memories they've shared. R&R, please!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-26-05 - Complete
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