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Author has written 9 stories for Naruto, Kingdom Hearts, Air Gear, Chronicles of Narnia, Code Lyoko, and Criminal Minds. Hello =) Snakes is on HIATUS This should pretty much describe my current mood and writing style. It's a review that I submitted about a...well, a ridiculous piece of...stuff. I can't even think of a word to describe it. kind of made me want to light my eyes on fire. Or go cuddle my copy of Watchmen and cry. Umm, well. Your writing does need some work. Your grammar is a bit shabby, and your spelling is pretty bad. As well as your plot. And your overall idea. Massages temples Just keep practicing and you'll get better, dear. I'm sorry if some of us come off as mean. It's just that some people care about timeless works like Watchmen and don't want to see it's characters, who are filled with complexities and beautiful character traits, end up in a rather poorly written Mary-Sue fanfiction. You don't have to reply to this, even though I doubt you will. I'm just another meanie bashing on a young writer. Even though I doubt I'm that much older than you. It's almost 2 in the morning, and when I spy...something like this, I tend to become overwhelmed by the need to explain myself. Watchmen fans are very...ehm...specific about what happens to this work on FF.net. I know I speak for mostly all of the Watchmen fans on here when I say that you're gonna need to get out of the Mary-Sue rut and start writing properly. And keep in mind the characters when you write them. And the plot. And the fact that you should probably consider getting a beta reader for your fics. Or you might want to consider actually reading through them before you submit them. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are all key things in a writing. Yeah, I'm a horrible person. And I'm sorry if I come off as mean. Hell, I AM being mean. But you need to consider these things, dear. Have fun on Quizilla. ~Aniu “Thar be more treasure in books than in all the pirate’s loot on Treasure Island, though most a the exploration required to find it on this site sickens me to the gills.” -Pirate Bob | |||||||||
1. I Should Have NoticedI really should have. And I'm ashamed that I didn't sooner.Code Lyoko - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,529 - Published: 11-8-09 - Ulrich S. - Complete2. A Day in the Life » reviewsA series of one-shots pertaining to the team and their troubles, their contemplations, and their lives. Mainly Reid-centric. Drama/angst galor.Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,638 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-28-09 - Published: 9-20-09 - S. Reid3. The Western Wolves » reviewsEdmund goes with Phillip to a secluded part of the woods to let his mind wander, but instead meets an unexpected ally. What will he do when he learns that Narnia's creatures are in danger? Rated T for mild violence and mild language.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,969 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 5-4-09 - Published: 1-30-09 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie4. Locked Away reviewsRoxas and Axel get locked in a janitor's closet. Mischief and drama ensues. Just a typical little yaoi ficlet. I was bored and felt like writing a yaoi one-shot. Hope you enjoy.Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,340 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-4-08 - Axel & Roxas - Complete5. What do I want? reviewsAxel contemplates Roxas' departure and his own willingness to go on without him. Angst. Dark-ish.Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 747 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-08 - Axel & Roxas - Complete6. It Hurts reviewsAgito expresses his true fears, and Akito is determined to remind is other self just who he really is. One-shot.Air Gear - Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,375 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-1-08 - Complete7. Distractions reviewsIn high school, drama is a necessity that Riku could certainly live without. Unfortunately, drama seems to stick to him like glue. Friendship, sadness, and love are all reoccurring factors in his life, it seems. Soriku, Akuroku, and CloudLeon.Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,042 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-6-08 - Riku & Sora8. Ice Ice Baby reviewsWhile on his way to school, Riku saves a little girl from falling into a frozen pond and winds up falling in himself. Axel sees this and decides he can't just sit by and do nothing. Not really AkuRiku. Maybe implied. Maybe. One-shot.Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,554 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-1-08 - Riku & Axel - Complete9. Why is it Always Snakes? » reviewsSasuke and Naruto, the highest ranking ANBU in the village of Kohona, are assigned a new mission. Where to you ask? Britain! NarHP crossover. If you don't like crossovers then this fic's not for you. Okies! Have a nice day!Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,509 - Reviews: 39 - Updated: 10-27-07 - Published: 4-3-07 - Sasuke U. & Naruto U.
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