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Eris Dea Disaccordo
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since: 03-23-05, id: 780694, Profile Updated: 09-26-09
country: Philippines
Author has written 15 stories for Danny Phantom, Teen Titans, Scooby Doo, Animorphs, and Supernatural.

Hi... I'm Eris, 25 and a Filipina.

Go ahead and enjoy the stories I've posted! Don't forget to review and tell me how I did. Any comments and suggestions are always taken into consideration as to improve my writing skills.

Thanks!
-Eris Dea Disaccordo

P.S. Any of my works here are all fan fictions only. Any characters you do not recognize are mine, as well as the plot, but characters and/or items and/or landmarks that you do recognize are obviously not mine. This message acts as my disclaimer for all my stories posted on fanfiction.net, so please do not say that I am stealing, because that is definitely not my intention. Thank you.

This is a review I received on 10-31-06

Okay sir... I know that you did warn us innocent readers about this scandalous story but... Danny Phantom is a childrens show. Why must you sexify it? Don't kids these days get enough of violence and sex in everyday doses? I understand that you're 22 and you want to make the idea for the story line more indepth and realistic but can't you find any other way to do it than this? Just thought from a young and innocent mind...

~sincerely,
Bi Polarbear

Now this is the reply I gave to the review above

Bi Polarbear,

I'm sure that you meant well in your review, but I must state that reviews are not for complaints. They are there to improve the writing style of a writer. I feel that I must urge you to use the Private Messaging system offered by FanFiction.net the next time you feel like writing something similar to what you said to me to another author.

As to the point you wish to make, yes, Danny Phantom is a children's show, but I have to point out that many writers, both here on FF.net and on other sites, are adults (or pretending to be anyway). It isn't our fault that we got attracted to the show, that we liked the show, and that we want more from the show. That is why we "sexify" it. That is why my story is rated M, where people who want more from the show get the piece of entertainment they want. Most people who read my type of work only want a picture on how Danny and Sam get together, and this is one way of enlightening them on how we writers see them admit their love and affection for each other.

You made it clear that you read my warning, and yet you chose to read, and then criticize my work in a review. I get very upset with readers who say, "0_O Ew... You have serious problems." -quoted from Black January. That is not what you should write in REVIEWS, because REVIEWS are where you must correct the mistakes the writer made in the chapter, be it grammar or spelling. Complaints you want to make known to the author are given through the Private Messaging service, as mentioned previously. You can find that on the author's profile, right underneath the writer's name.

You are probably wondering why I've said all this to you. You are probably wondering, "What gives Eris Dea Disaccordo the right to tell me all this?"

My answer?

I have never given a review that puts a writer down. I do not judge them, because I know what it is like to be judged. I will compliment their work, if only for the effort they put into writing them. I do not give them long winded speeches that basically say, "You suck." I give them my observations about the chapter in a review and try to be professional as I do it. And in turn, I ask only for CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISMS.

The next time you want to shoot someone down, be more considerate. Don't put it in a review where readers can see it and judge without bothering to read the story itself, because it disheartens us writers. Write it in a Private Message for us to read and take into consideration.

This message will be posted on my profile, to encourage other writers to take the advice I've written here. I do hope that you see the point I've tried to make, the way I saw yours.

-Eris

P.S. I'm a woman, so it's "Ma'am," not "Sir."

Now tell me, am I correct in saying all of this? It is far better for an author to see a negative comment in a Private Message (PM) rather than in a review. You see, whenever I want to read a story, I always refer to the reviews given to the story, no matter how many there are. If those review give a positive remark, then I try it out too, and leave a review afterwards. Granted, I don't leave a review in EVERY chapter, but I don't flame them or give unhelpful remarks about their fanfiction in a review. It puts a writer down to see bad comments about their stories, and soon, it'll make them want to stop writing altogether. Right? What do you think? PM me. Just click on the link below my name and send me your thoughts on this. Thanks!

-Eris

To my readers,

I'm sorry for not posting anything for a few years now, but I'm super busy and really swamped with homework and projects. As of now, I have no plans on writing or continuing any of my unposted work, so I have nothing to feed your insatiable appetite for reading. All my posted work are and will remain one-shots. I don't intend on making any of them a multichapter story. If I ever post a long story, I will indicate that on the summary section.

Thanks for reading my long-winded rant, and reading my work. :P I absolutely love that you guys like my stories! Good luck to my fellow writers and happy reading!

-Eris

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1. Happy Birthday, Sammy reviews
Why Dean wants pie...
Supernatural - Rated: K - English - General/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 837 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-1-09 - Dean W. & Sam W. - Complete
2. Special reviews
She follows him when he sneaks away and offers him the one thing they shouldn't share.
Animorphs - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,495 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-18-08 - Jake & Rachel - Complete
3. A Double Life reviews
What if she wasn't just a Titan? Oneshot, no sexual situations. Robin and Raven friendship.
Teen Titans - Rated: T - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,592 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-26-07 - Raven & Robin - Complete
4. You Have To Stop Doing That reviews
Guess the couple. WARNING: If you don't like smut, do not read. This is your only warning. Oneshot!
Scooby Doo - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,254 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-8-07 - Complete
5. And He Held Her As She Cried reviews
Danny sees something in the park, and he learns of a horrible event that brought Dash and Sam close. Mentions rape. Angst. DashSamfriendship. DannySam.
Danny Phantom - Rated: M - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,660 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11-10-06 - Danny F. & Sam M. - Complete
6. Come What May reviews
He'd never heard her sing before. And maybe... No one was really supposed to.
Teen Titans - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 696 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 10-7-06 - Robin & Raven - Complete
7. Push! reviews
The birds didn't plan for them, but they happened anyway...Smut inside...Fluffy scenes included...
Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,015 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 7-31-06 - Robin & Raven - Complete
8. I Love You reviews
Her cheeks were flushed, lips slightly parted, her breathing heavy, and eyes darkened with desire.“I need you.” His mind raced. Those were three very, very dangerous words.
Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,899 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 7-21-06 - Robin & Raven - Complete
9. We've Got Each Other reviews
They say betrayal leads to something worse...Then why do Robin and Raven end up together in this? LOL... Smuty, as always OneShot
Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,997 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 7-14-06 - Robin & Raven - Complete
10. Forever reviews
Slade had struck once again, only this time, he’d completely ignored Robin and had gone straight for Raven.
Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,368 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 7-5-06 - Robin & Raven - Complete
11. Only Yours reviews
Reposted! Demons thrived on pain. The more she experienced, the better her release. She had her limits, of course, but even those could be stretched... Oneshot smut! WARNING! Very graphic...
Teen Titans - Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,547 - Reviews: 39 - Published: 6-2-06 - Robin & Raven - Complete
12. Make Me reviews
Corrected once more, and reposted! It's the night of their last high school dance, and Sam's mother finally does something good for her only daughter. DS Fluff and highly specific Smut! Don't read if you don't like graphic scenes! Be warned!
Danny Phantom - Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,118 - Reviews: 53 - Published: 4-19-06 - Danny F. & Sam M. - Complete
13. That I Can Do reviews
Danny sees Sam in the bathroom...What happens? This has a Rating for a reason. OneShot DxS [Smut]
Danny Phantom - Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,435 - Reviews: 89 - Published: 4-20-05 - Dan Phantom & Sam M. - Complete
14. Homeboy reviews
What happens when your childhood friend decides that he wants you as his girlfriend? Find out. DXS ONE-SHOT!
Danny Phantom - Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,742 - Reviews: 43 - Published: 4-13-05 - Danny F. & Sam M. - Complete
15. You Were A Good Boy reviews
Danny watches his friend... Who is it though? OneShot
Danny Phantom - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 736 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 4-9-05 - Danny F. & Sam M. - Complete
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