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since: 04-12-05, id: 793702, Profile Updated: 07-29-11
country: USA
Author has written 40 stories for Harry Potter, Fairy Tales, Fruits Basket, Mulan, Beauty and the Beast, Peter Pan, and Sound of Music.

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Purging old and sucky fanfics. They'll be replicated on me homepage, mateys.

"Put your vocabulary on the top shelf of your toolbox, and don't make any conscious effort to improve it."

-- Stephen King in On Writing

My name is Cae; I'm 17; I'm an Asian American; I cannot be serious to save my life (lest you bribe me with steak); I am a self-proclaimed PDA police; English has consistently been one of my worst classes; I have a weakness for potatoes.

I hate when people talk about all their good traits on profiles. Dear narcissists, life is not a fanfic and you cannot be a Mary Sue.

To negate those profiles, here is a compiled list of my own flaws:

I have a severe procrastination problem, and I am way too easily distracted. As many readers may attest to.

I am a loud, obnoxious, proud, attention hog. And humble. Did I mention that?

I have no social life. Exception: school. Depressing, isn't it? Kind of makes you want to jump off a cliff. Not really. I'm not suicidal. (At least, not since fourth grade.)

I am ridikkulus-ly lazy. Srsly.

I have a really bad memory and tend to forget peoples' names or what I've said already, so I often say things multiple times.

I have a really bad memory and tend to forget peoples' names or what I've said already, so I often say things multiple times.

I am either apathetic or sadistic. This depends on A) my mood; B) whether or not you are my little sister

I will obsess over school for hours, and nothing you do or say can stop me. Muahaha. This is my form of cruel & unusual punishment.

I am not a superhero, even though I pretend to be.

I am really, really ticklish.

I sail the Draco/Hermione and Ginny/Tom Riddle ships. In fact, I'm a captain. You should join my crew. The USS Ginny/Tom is in dire need of recruits.

Pet Peeve of the Month:

Dysfunctional Malfoy family.

I think we can agree based on the seventh book, Lucius and Narcissa are totally capable of love when it comes to their son. Dear everyone, please stop writing about how abused Narcissa is, how victimized Draco is, how evil Lucius is. Stop making Narcissa/Lucius such straight-out villains, because that just means you're too lazy to give them character and deepen the plot. If you're too lazy on your story, I'll be too lazy to leave a nice review.

Status - You guys just had your chapter seven of FR, and guess who just finished the first draft of chapter eight? That's right. Me. Unfortunately I'll be out of town for a week, ie, next week, but definitely intending on publishing the next chapter the week after that! In the meantime, you should drop a review to let me know how awesome I am, mmmk? Last updated 29 July

Projects -

x Final Riddles
x Rewrite Wanted! and continue it
x Masquerade -- DHr fic I've had in mind for a while
x (Tentative) Swan Princess-esque fairy tale
x (One Shot) Locked - Rowena/Salazar fic

On Hiatus -

x On One Hand
x Admonitions
x Beautiful

Truth be told, these are probably gonna end up being discontinued -

x Vital Choices
x Fifty Years Ago -- likely to be deleted entirely

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1. Final Riddles » reviews
When you cast an Unforgivable, you have to mean it. Feel it, breathe it... and Ginevra, I'm still alive. GWTR - A time travel story.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 9 - Words: 35,338 - Reviews: 385 - Updated: 9-6-11 - Published: 7-31-05 - Ginny W. & Tom R. Jr.
2. Blooming reviews
There's always a wish left unaccounted for, a wish that'll exploit you before you realize it. Once upon a time, even Lucifer fell.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,522 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-2-10 - Ginny W. & Tom R. Jr. - Complete
3. Plot Holes reviews
There's a new marriage law that no one likes. "The board has communed and has voiced a unanimous decision protesting this route, sir. If you proceed as planned, you will lose in the next election." In which there are 82 plot holes and a beta is needed.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,647 - Reviews: 29 - Published: 6-24-10 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
4. Bliss reviews
When you first see her, you know she will be a pain in your side.
Sound of Music - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 423 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-11-10 - Complete
5. White reviews
"Ginny poured out her soul to me... I grew stronger and stronger on a diet of her deepest fears, her darkest secrets." A diet on an eleven-year-old's fears cannot be healthy. It's got to have some side effects, right? TRGW
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,444 - Reviews: 23 - Published: 1-17-10 - Tom R. Jr. & Ginny W. - Complete
6. Art reviews
"Oh, so you're like a fairy now. Great. Malfoy the Fairy." In which Scorpius Malfoy is more than who you think he is. ...And, ah, no, he's not a fairy. Rose is just wrong. Short Story, WIP
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,872 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 12-22-09 - Scorpius M. & Rose W.
7. Scared reviews
Thursday announces a celebration for conclusion. Ginny writes a letter to the deceased Tom Riddle, and what she doesn't expect is a ready reply. Oneshot, TomGinny
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,031 - Reviews: 32 - Published: 4-24-09 - Tom R. Jr. & Ginny W. - Complete
8. Wallflower reviews
I'll make you write my name in blood. I'll make you tear open my heart with your bare fingers. I'll make you dig those six feet and throw yourself into the casket beside me. I'll do whatever it takes to make you remember me. DHr, Complete
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 676 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 3-20-09 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
9. On One Hand reviews
Full-fledged counterpart story to On the Other Hand. Yes, she hates him, but in order to win a bet to enrage her beloved father, Rose is going to need the cooperation of one Scorpius Malfoy. RoseScorpius
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 634 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 3-2-09 - Rose W. & Scorpius M.
10. Snapshots reviews
When Hermione is assigned to Draco Malfoy's impossible court case, her meticulously ordered life is about to swing sideways on a one-way ride. Not that her friends are any help. They think the change good for her. That, my friend, is pure BS. DHr
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,334 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-28-09 - Draco M. & Hermione G.
11. On the Other Hand reviews
Typical. Rose hates Scorpius. Scorpius hates Rose. But one day, Rose and Scorpius need to work together, and they fall in love. You know the story, but what does Ron Weasley have to say about it? He's not so pleased about chumming up with Draco Malfoy. OS
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,849 - Reviews: 45 - Published: 12-30-08 - Rose W. & Scorpius M. - Complete
12. Any Other Name reviews
ANALYSIS UP! Years later, she reflects on why she named her daughter Rose. Because she remembers. Because she doesn't want to forget. She had given his soul back with a kiss, for his soul was sin. Marlowe was right. slight RoseScorpius Oneshot
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,662 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 12-28-08 - Published: 5-31-08 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
13. Brave reviews
Of the strong, he was the strongest, but he'd give up his strength eternally for that one moment of bravery. Oneshot MulanShang. Rated for safety.
Mulan - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 10-15-08 - Complete
14. Ashes reviews
Sometimes things fall apart even more when you try to fix them. A twist on Cinderella.
Fairy Tales - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,920 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-18-08
15. Play on Words » reviews
It was supposed to be a school play. If I'd known that it meant being sent to an imaginary primitive world with Mudblood Granger, I wouldn't have signed up. Well, I only signed up to skip class, but that's not the point. AU Sent Diligio rewrite 2005
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,577 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-28-08 - Published: 3-11-08 - Draco M. & Hermione G.
16. Under Power reviews
Peter didn't create Neverland. He was simply king. When a new boy comes and threatens Peter's position, Peter won't go down without a fight. Flying to London to enlist the help of Wendy and the Lost Boys, he realizes, just maybe… PeterWendy
Peter Pan - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,735 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-21-08 - Peter Pan & Wendy D.
17. Sent Diligo » reviews
Please DO NOT READ. Going under REWRITE in a new story, titled Play On Words. Please review that one instead. Complete.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 59,713 - Reviews: 131 - Updated: 3-11-08 - Published: 5-28-05 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
18. Wanted! » reviews
When Lily fails to find a boyfriend by the end of her sixth year, her mother gets to action, and she'll stretch as far as Hogwarts to ensure that Lily will return with a boy by summer. Too bad James Potter seems to meet the qualifications. LJ
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 21,165 - Reviews: 190 - Updated: 2-11-08 - Published: 8-9-06 - Lily Evans P. & James P.
19. The Rest is History reviews
You won't know these secrets I bear, for there will never be evidence. And if any sort of proof is found, no one will know what to make of it. A museum tour a thousand years after the war's end reveals long lost secrets. Rated for mild language. Oneshot
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,468 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-1-08 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
20. Fifty Years Ago » reviews
She looked at him desperately, her wide eyes pleading. 'Stop it,' she begged. 'Please. There is hope yet' But he only turned away and shook his head. 'No,' he said finally. 'There is no hope. You have proven that to me, Ginny. There is no hope.' GWTR
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 17,794 - Reviews: 157 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 6-24-06 - Ginny W. & Tom R. Jr.
21. Schadenfreude » reviews
For those timetraveling fics: How he fell in love before his mind caught up. Rated for safety. TomGinny Oneshot
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,976 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 12-16-07 - Published: 10-28-07 - Ginny W. & Tom R. Jr. - Complete
22. Beautiful » reviews
She needed to redeem her father's mistake for her mother's dying wish. He needed to discover his true history behind the throne admist deceit. Dig deeper. Play the other character. Turn around, dance in the shadows. Maybe some riddles don't have answers.
Fairy Tales - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 22,911 - Reviews: 94 - Updated: 11-24-07 - Published: 1-24-07
23. Vital Choices » reviews
Trapped in a tradition now twisting away toward mystery, Draco must find a bride before he is killed, or before the Maidens themselves are dead. But should he choose the wrong one, he will find his demise unraveling. Everyone has their secrets. DHr. AntiD
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 10 - Words: 39,806 - Reviews: 464 - Updated: 10-18-07 - Published: 8-29-05 - Draco M. & Hermione G.
24. Midnight Meets reviews
He turned her sleep into nightmares every night, and she would stand for it no more, for tonight, she would turn revenge against him. She never accounted for something called jealousy. A turn on the TomGinny classic story. Rated for Language. Oneshot
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,250 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 10-8-07 - Tom R. Jr. & Ginny W. - Complete
25. Worthy » reviews
I hate you. I hate you with all my being, that you have put me to shame. You were my best friend's. You were my worst enemy's. But you were never mine. And I hate you for that. LJ Two Parter. Works also as Oneshot
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,737 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 8-23-07 - Published: 8-20-07 - James P. & Lily Evans P. - Complete
26. Just a Nightmare reviews
Pop Goes the Weasel. An innocent song, you say? You're wrong.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-9-07 - Ron W. - Complete
27. Sunshine, Daisies, Butter Mellow reviews
True, it took a while to activate, but that spell used by Ron in first year is a real one. Its use? Its function? Its unexpected result? We invite you to embark on a dangerous journey to find the real source behind butter. Caution the Remnants of Ron!
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,120 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-25-07 - Complete
28. A Liar's Love reviews
I lied to him. Told him everything I could think of just to avoid him. Before, I could easily express my hate toward him. So why was I creating all these excuses? Did I really think it would console a broken heart? His... or mine? LJ OneShot
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,626 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 2-16-07 - Lily Evans P. & James P. - Complete
29. Meant to Die reviews
Superstition holds your life. Born in July, you are told by Professor Trelawney that you will die an early and quick death. Apparently, the Avada Kedavra fits that description quite well. Oneshot.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,261 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-1-07 - Harry P. - Complete
30. Mornings reviews
Draco Malfoy hates mornings with a passion and this is why. DHr, Oneshot.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,550 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-21-06 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
31. Deep Pools of Chocolate Sauce reviews
In which the title has nothing to do with the story. Chip has a problem, and it will take all the wits he has to solve it. Funny OneShot.
Beauty and the Beast - Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 563 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-13-06 - Complete
32. Admonitions » reviews
He left and wished to put her behind, but she refused to be forgotten. One year later, he returns only to find that she is already embarking on a dangerous journey without him. She's off to see the matchmaker... but why does it hurt so much? MS
Mulan - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,379 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 11-8-06 - Published: 11-2-06
33. Anonymous reviews
Misconceptions. Lily finally begins to return James's feelings, but it seems as though it's too late. But things aren't always what they seem at first, and sometimes it's too late to fix things. LJ, Rated for Optional Ending
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,285 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 10-11-06 - Lily Evans P. & James P. - Complete
34. Love in Past Tense reviews
He loved her, and she loved him. But neither recognized the other's feelings until it was almost too late. LJ OneShot, Rated for Language
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,570 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-3-06 - Lily Evans P. & James P. - Complete
35. According to Legend reviews
His fault was pride. Her weakness was love. When the burden of war was lifted from their shoulders, they shared a love that, to the rest of the world, never existed and would forever remain unspoken. Until now. DHr, Oneshot. Rated for safety
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,497 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-16-06 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
36. Only Fate reviews
It was a sad story, to be honest, a disappointing truth of the swirls of emotions and confessions. It was Akito's story. Oneshot
Fruits Basket - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,289 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-8-06 - Akito S. - Complete
37. Don't Let My Tears Be Wasted reviews
There's many things in this world that we will never understand,' he told her, his voice tender. 'I didn't mean to fall in love with you.' DHr, One Shot
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,130 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 7-6-06 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
38. My Daughter, Rapunzel reviews
A retelling of Rapunzel from the witch's point of view, a story of grief, disappointment, overwhelming sadness, and her beautiful daughter, Rapunzel.
Fairy Tales - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,938 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6-25-06 - Complete
39. Lace » reviews
So fragile, it is, how beautiful and cruel it can be to bind the dead in lace, but there is nothing beautiful about a throne being overthrown with betrayals, trickery, and deceit. Here lies the tale that was never blessd with its happily ever after.
Fairy Tales - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 7 - Words: 18,640 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 6-19-06 - Published: 1-6-06 - Complete
40. Wand Point reviews
The smooth wood of the wand was thrust toward her chest. She choked, tears blurring her vision. 'I kill you,' he whispered, 'I kill you—for one reason, and not on his orders, but for that you could never return what belongs to me.' DHr ONESHOT
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,106 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 2-25-06 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete
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