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since: 04-12-05, id: 793702, Profile edited: 08-27-08
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Author has written 43 stories for Harry Potter, Avalon Web of Magic, Fruits Basket, Fairy Tales, Mulan, Beauty and the Beast, and Peter Pan.

Note: acc. name change from Aquiriis into Intricacy

Hi... welcome to my empty profile. (Well, it was empty.) Ehh...

I, Intricacy, do solemnly swear to review all the fics I enjoy, regardless of the number of reviews, its age, or anything else.

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Notes

I CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
If you give me constructive criticism, you are my new best friend.

Hi! I'm a Homo sapiens who enjoys writing. (No, seriously - how'd you know?! I find that I resemble a clementine.) I'm in ninth grade and I'm at the bottom of my classes (especially English, that's my worst class. And then it's band, however that works.), so my work (grammar and such) and knowledge in general might be lacking or inaccurate. If you catch any mistakes, please tell me by dropping it in a review or a private message.

If you don't, review anyways. I'm one of those annoying people who have way too much pride than their worth and need feedback to boost. Heh, heh. Yeah, and I tend to be pushed to updating faster with more reviews (updating, something that hasn't been flowing smoothly for me lately. Could be credited to my ADHD, but I personally blame this workload of homework. Ehh...). But on the reverse side, if you want me to review your story, I'd willingly do it when I get the time (and when I say free time, I mean over summer break, when sleep is once more a factor of my life).

Please excuse my sarcasm.

I try to update regularly, but with my short attention span, numerous stories have spawned--more than I can handle. So I try to update each story every month. Or I tried. Points finger of blame at biology teacher... and my great procrasination skills. Which reminds me that I should be doing homework instead of writing this profile.

Please note that I am not able to be a frequent updater. (I don't even do my homework frequently, let alone fanfiction. Hah, just kidding.) School is my life right now, and I have little time for much else. Sorry!

Oh, and note that all stories are liable to rating change, though it likely won't go above T. XD Enjoy!

Stories Currently Working On (listed in priorities):

Final Riddles (GWTR, HP Fanfic) - Under Rewrite!
Beautiful (Fairy Tale)
Fifty Years Ago (GWTR, HP Fanfic)
Wanted! (LJ, HP Fanfic)
Vital Choices (DHr, HP Fanfic)

I CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
No, seriously. It's so amazing, the heart needed a tail to convey it.

About Me

I am the result of a failed experiment conducted by genetic scientists, who tried to force orange rinds and onion skin together to reproduce, ignoring all that about somatic cells and germ cells and the whole "mechanical isolation" thing, as well as the other stuff I should've learned in biology class if only I paid attention and/or studied. The product? Funny you should ask. Turns out orange rinds and onion skins produce TI-89s that programs -- not only on batteries -- but on music, absolute junk food, and a shiny penny per minute.

However, this TI-89 seems to be faulty, since I happen to have failed at math and everything revolving around numbers. (I bet you haven't ever met a high school student who counted 1, 2, 3, 5, and couldn't figure out why she had six fingers on one hand. Well hi, now you've met me!)

...well, that was embarassing. I think I'll stop here now before I accidentally reveal my devastating secret about how I once forgot how to spell my name while I was taking a test...


News&Updates

June 27, 2008 - Story updates.
Well, I think I need a reason to explain my long absenses in several of my works in progress (tut tut, excuses, excuses!):

Vital Choices - I've drifted out of the DHr shipping fandom, and I can't write the chapters anymore without feeling... out of place? I really plan to finish it, I just feel really forced to write a chapter at this moment. Also, looking back, I didn't pull of Draco's and Hermione's characterization off very well and some of the Greek stuff was inaccurate, and it makes me feel disgusted looking at it. But I will NOT rewrite it. Not again. Egghh... (cries)

Wanted! - I thank one amazing reviewer who pointed out a major flaw in my writing. I always knew something was off, but I couldn't figure out what. My major problem right now is figuring out writing style.

Fifty Years Ago - In hiatus at the moment. My other TomGinny fanfic, Final Riddles, I find, is a better read and I will work on Fifty Years Ago after I finish Final Riddles.

Beautiful - Nothing. Just hit writer's block.

So yeah. I'm sorry about this. But I will update!! ..Eventually.

December 22, 2007 - Website updated.

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Quote of the Month

"Catherine, his happiest days were over when your days began. He cursed you, I dare say, for coming into the world (I did, at least).
And it would just do if he cursed you as he went out of it. I'd join him."
--Heathcliff, Wuthering Heights

ROFL.




1. Ashes reviews
Sometimes things fall apart even more when you try to fix them. A twist on Cinderella.
Fairy Tales - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,920 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-18-08 - Published: 8-18-08
2. Play on Words » reviews
It was supposed to be a school play. If I'd known that it meant being sent to an imaginary primitive world with Mudblood Granger, I wouldn't have signed up. Well, I only signed up to skip class, but that's not the point. AU Sent Diligio rewrite 2005
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,577 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-28-08 - Published: 3-11-08
3. Final Riddles » reviews
A Time-Turner, a quick wit, a fiery temper, a determined soul. Ginny Weasley plans to stop Voldemort from ever becoming, but does she have the willpower and cleverness to succeed? Ignoring the intervening schemes of power hungry people, of course. TRGW
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 7 - Words: 33,561 - Reviews: 137 - Updated: 7-14-08 - Published: 7-31-05
4. Any Other Name reviews
Years later, she reflects on why she named her daughter Rose. Because first loves die hard. Because she remembers. And maybe... a bittersweet regret? She had given his soul back with a kiss, for his soul was sin. Marlowe was right. DHr,slight RoseScorpius
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,357 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 5-31-08
5. Under Power reviews
Peter didn’t create Neverland. He was simply king. When a new boy comes and threatens Peter’s position, Peter won’t go down without a fight. Flying to London to enlist the help of Wendy and the Lost Boys, he realizes, just maybe… PeterWendy
Peter Pan - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,735 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
6. Sent Diligo » reviews
Please DO NOT READ. Going under REWRITE in a new story, titled Play On Words. Please review that one instead. Complete.
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 59,713 - Reviews: 131 - Updated: 3-11-08 - Published: 5-28-05
7. Wanted! » reviews
When Lily fails to find a boyfriend by the end of her sixth year, her mother gets to action, and she'll stretch as far as Hogwarts to ensure that Lily will return with a boy by summer. Too bad James Potter seems to meet the qualifications. LJ
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 21,165 - Reviews: 184 - Updated: 2-11-08 - Published: 8-9-06
8. The Rest is History reviews
You won’t know these secrets I bear, for there will never be evidence. And if any sort of proof is found, no one will know what to make of it. A museum tour a thousand years after the war’s end reveals long lost secrets. Rated for mild language. Oneshot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,468 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-1-08 - Published: 1-1-08
9. Fifty Years Ago » reviews
She looked at him desperately, her wide eyes pleading. 'Stop it,' she begged. 'Please. There is hope yet' But he only turned away and shook his head. 'No,' he said finally. 'There is no hope. You have proven that to me, Ginny. There is no hope.' GWTR
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 17,794 - Reviews: 140 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 6-24-06
10. Schadenfreude » reviews
For those timetraveling fics: How he fell in love before his mind caught up. Rated for safety. TomGinny Oneshot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,976 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 12-16-07 - Published: 10-28-07
11. Beautiful » reviews
She needed to redeem her father's mistake for her mother's dying wish. He needed to discover his true history behind the throne admist deceit. Dig deeper. Play the other character. Turn around, dance in the shadows. Maybe some riddles don't have answers.
Fairy Tales - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 22,911 - Reviews: 92 - Updated: 11-24-07 - Published: 1-24-07
12. Vital Choices » reviews
Trapped in a tradition now twisting away toward mystery, Draco must find a bride before he is killed, or before the Maidens themselves are dead. But should he choose the wrong one, he will find his demise unraveling. Everyone has their secrets. DHr. AntiD
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 10 - Words: 39,806 - Reviews: 456 - Updated: 10-18-07 - Published: 8-29-05
13. Midnight Meets reviews
He turned her sleep into nightmares every night, and she would stand for it no more, for tonight, she would turn revenge against him. She never accounted for something called jealousy. A turn on the TomGinny classic story. Rated for Language. Oneshot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,250 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 10-8-07 - Published: 10-8-07
14. Worthy » reviews
I hate you. I hate you with all my being, that you have put me to shame. You were my best friend’s. You were my worst enemy’s. But you were never mine. And I hate you for that. LJ Two Parter. Works also as Oneshot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,737 - Reviews: 37 - Updated: 8-23-07 - Published: 8-20-07
15. Just a Nightmare reviews
Pop Goes the Weasel. An innocent song, you say? You’re wrong.
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-9-07 - Published: 4-9-07
16. Sunshine, Daisies, Butter Mellow reviews
True, it took a while to activate, but that spell used by Ron in first year is a real one. Its use? Its function? Its unexpected result? We invite you to embark on a dangerous journey to find the real source behind butter. Caution the Remnants of Ron!
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,120 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-25-07 - Published: 2-25-07
17. A Liar's Love reviews
I lied to him. Told him everything I could think of just to avoid him. Before, I could easily express my hate toward him. So why was I creating all these excuses? Did I really think it would console a broken heart? His... or mine? LJ OneShot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,626 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 2-16-07 - Published: 2-16-07
18. Meant to Die reviews
Superstition holds your life. Born in July, you are told by Professor Trelawney that you will die an early and quick death. Apparently, the Avada Kedavra fits that description quite well. Oneshot.
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,261 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-1-07 - Published: 2-1-07
19. Mornings reviews
Draco Malfoy hates mornings with a passion and this is why. DHr, Oneshot.
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,550 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-21-06 - Published: 12-21-06
20. Deep Pools of Chocolate Sauce reviews
In which the title has nothing to do with the story. Chip has a problem, and it will take all the wits he has to solve it. Funny OneShot.
Complete - Beauty and the Beast - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 563 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-13-06 - Published: 11-13-06
21. Maybe This is Destiny » reviews
AU to Mulan II. Shang leaves, matters undiscussed. After one year's worth of waiting, Mulan is finally engaged to someone else, but it's then that Shang suddenly reappears in her life. MS. Previously 'One Years Chance'
Mulan - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,379 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 11-8-06 - Published: 11-2-06
22. Anonymous reviews
Misconceptions. Lily finally begins to return James's feelings, but it seems as though it's too late. But things aren't always what they seem at first, and sometimes it's too late to fix things. LJ, Rated for Optional Ending
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,285 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 10-11-06 - Published: 10-11-06
23. Love in Past Tense reviews
He loved her, and she loved him. But neither recognized the other's feelings until it was almost too late. LJ OneShot, Rated for Language
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,570 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 9-3-06 - Published: 9-3-06
24. According to Legend reviews
His fault was pride. Her weakness was love. When the burden of war was lifted from their shoulders, they shared a love that, to the rest of the world, never existed and would forever remain unspoken. Until now. DHr, Oneshot. Rated for safety
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,497 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-16-06 - Published: 8-16-06
25. Only Fate reviews
It was a sad story, to be honest, a disappointing truth of the swirls of emotions and confessions. It was Akito's story. Oneshot
Complete - Fruits Basket - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,289 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-8-06 - Published: 7-8-06
26. Don't Let My Tears Be Wasted reviews
There's many things in this world that we will never understand,' he told her, his voice tender. 'I didn't mean to fall in love with you.' DHr, One Shot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,130 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06
27. My Daughter, Rapunzel reviews
A retelling of Rapunzel from the witch's point of view, a story of grief, disappointment, overwhelming sadness, and her beautiful daughter, Rapunzel.
Complete - Fairy Tales - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,938 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
28. Lace » reviews
So fragile, it is, how beautiful and cruel it can be to bind the dead in lace, but there is nothing beautiful about a throne being overthrown with betrayals, trickery, and deceit. Here lies the tale that was never blessd with its happily ever after.
Complete - Fairy Tales - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 7 - Words: 18,640 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 6-19-06 - Published: 1-6-06
29. Reflected Away reviews
She could cry, but it would not save her life, for even if he knew she was there, he would not believe it, for in his eyes, he had killed her, but the only thing he killed was his heart. DHr, Oneshot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 756 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-9-06 - Published: 6-9-06
30. Eight Year Hate reviews
Bitter woman,' the Muggle children called her. 'She hardly ever comes outside her house, and her stern face never smiles.' They, however, didn't know what had caused that bitterness compressed inside the woman's heart. DHr, Title may change
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,792 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-5-06 - Published: 3-5-06
31. Erasers reviews
Those diary entries that she had written in her first year did her heart no good no matter how hard she tried to, she could never erase away the words of the book and the scars in her heart. GWTR OneShot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,031 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-28-06 - Published: 2-28-06
32. Wand Point reviews
The smooth wood of the wand was thrust toward her chest. She choked, tears blurring her vision. ‘I kill you,’ he whispered, ‘I kill you—for one reason, and not on his orders, but for that you could never return what belongs to me.’ DHr ONESHOT
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,106 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 2-25-06 - Published: 2-25-06
33. Amateurs reviews
A mishap in Potions on December 1st not only messes with time, but messes with the mind. NOW who’s the better amateur? Slight GWTR
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,182 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-06
34. Lie Your Last Time reviews
Lies slipped out of their mouths so easily, it destroyed and marked their entire relationship. And now, he’s lied one too many times. DHr, Oneshot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,335 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-26-05 - Published: 12-26-05
35. Period reviews
Sequel to Colon, NOT Slash. Periods end everything and they can never be changed. Life can try, but some things must remain as they are as they happened. DHr. OneShot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,312 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-10-05 - Published: 12-10-05
36. To Tell a Tale to Cry reviews
“Daddy,” she said, a smile on her face, “tell me a story!” She didn’t know how much pain she had brought her father with those few words, and those few words alone created her a storya story of a love that could never be true. OneShot DHr
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,322 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-9-05 - Published: 12-9-05
37. Colon reviews
Sequel to Comma. Colon: they offer a new explanation, a chance to see through the other’s eyes. Would hate or love or isolation conquer? HGDM. OneShot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,115 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-2-05 - Published: 12-2-05
38. Comma reviews
Sequel to SemiColon. Commas never end a sentence, but for better or for worse? HGDM. OneShot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 931 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-27-05 - Published: 10-27-05
39. SemiColon reviews
Possibly first in oneshot series. The semicolon ends an idea but starts a new one, and love can possibly comply. But how great is the semicolen, when things only go from bad to worse? HGDM. OneShot
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 776 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-21-05 - Published: 10-21-05
40. Life As We Know It: If Only You Knew » reviews
The Aftermath Series, full sum. inside After the war, Hermione's lost everything that kept her alive, and the one thing she's trusted betrays her. With a new turn in her life, can she save herself and everyone else from despair and death? COMPLETE
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 13 - Words: 29,517 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-31-05 - Published: 5-17-05
41. How to Gaurantee Your Death In Ten Seconds Or Less reviews
Learn about 100 ways, or perhaps only 5, of how Harry's meeting with Lord Voldemort can go wrong as the Teletubies guide you through it all. It's harder than it looks.
Complete - Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,341 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 6-22-05 - Published: 6-22-05
42. We Were Never Meant to Be reviews
Three years out of school, Kyou and Tohru are engaged. The night before the wedding, Tohru reveals a secret she's kept for years. Would it ruin the wedding, their lives, their hopes, their souls, even? Would they survive? Bittersweet ending (one-shot)
Complete - Fruits Basket - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,302 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-1-05 - Published: 6-1-05
43. HEARTACHE: false betrayal reviews
Emily's gone through things that neither Kara nor Adrianne can imagine. Sworn to secrecy, her friends feel betrayed. When they leave her, Emily's world falls apart. Can she be saved be saved before she hits the end of black? oneshot
Complete - Avalon Web of Magic - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,870 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-29-05 - Published: 5-29-05
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