When I leave reviews, I try my best to be helpful. I may not be the best writer, but I certainly do know what I like as a reader. It doesn't mean you have to take my suggestions; I'm not forcing my opinions on anybody. Also, don't be offended if I'm nitpicking--I'm just pointing out stuff I'd like other people to tell me if I was being reviewed.
So a little about my writing...writing is such a painful process for me. Yet I find myself always scrambling for lines, jotting them down randomly at the strangest moments anywhere I go. Hell, I even scribbled some illegible things in the dark while drunk one time. I know my biggest weakness in writing is constructing sentences. They tend to come out awkward, passive, or without variation. Sometimes the fluidity is lacking, there is a disconnected flow...But I will keep trying, hoping to someday create something that would move the world.
Regarding my Updates:
I wish I can dedicate more time to writing. The reality is I have a lot of other priorities right now. I do intend to finish these fics, I just have no idea when.
Incomplete & on hiatus:
1. While the Blade Rusts (Bleach)
1.Tale of the Philandering Prince Hao (Shaman King)
2. The Weight of Happiness (Rurouni Kenshin)