| AlysiaStorms |
Author has written 28 stories for Inuyasha, Gundam Seed, Naruto, Stargate: SG-1, Harry Potter, Final Fantasy VII, Dark-Hunter series, Final Fantasy X, and Carpathian Series. Sex: Female Age: A lady never tells but probably older then you think News as of October 18,2009 If I get kicked off because of petty individuals you can find me and my stories on mediaminer(dot)org under the name Simply a Lady. And also on adultfanfiction(dot)net under the same name Alysia Storms. Challenge: Having accepted this challenge from a loyal reader named CrazyRedHead we after a discussion have decided to offer it to others. Harry Potter/Naruto challenge In this challenge, all you have to do is make it unique. Which means this 1. You can not have Naruto or any Shinobi hired by the wizards to guard Harry, Dumbledore, Hogwarts, so forth and so forth. It's been done to death. 2. You can not have Harry just dropped in and raised by some long lost relative of the following clans and or people. a. Uchiha clan... Folks just because Harry has black hair does not have to mean he must be related to people with black hair. There is far to many of those all ready. b. Sakura Haruno... Been done to death as well because of the green eyes. Newsflash folks, same principle applies. Just because Harry has them doesn't mean his relative has to. c. Minato Namikaze... Okay just because he sacrificed his life for Naruto as Lily did for Harry does not mean they have to be related either folks! Give it a rest! d. Orichimaru... Same as Minato. Just because Harry can talk to snakes does not make him automatically related! 3. No wizard can be a ninja, no ninja can be a wizard. That's been done far to much already now. If they must learn anything it can be any kind of weapons discipline, Taijutsu, and potions and or healing skills that do not require magic or chakra can be exchanged. Any questions may be shot towards me for any finer details. But if anything considering I accepted it myself in the first place. you may use my story Parallel which is the response her challenge as an example of what you may do. RANT! People do us writers a favor and grow up. I am addressing this here and now and giving you seem keen incites into why some of your favorites don't write anymore. A. We write the story not bloody you. Here is a perfect example of someone who refuses to see it. Again, I am hating on the 'bash on Ginny' fest here. The fact is that Ginny joined the Death Eaters to try to kill Voldemort... how in the F can Harry blame her for that? It just doesn't make sense to me at all... it also didn't make sense to the other 30 people who I had read the story... it's like blaming a Army officer for joining a terrorist cell when he was order to or did so in order to protect his comrades... just doesn't make sense in the real world. It's about time for you to realize that you are enforcing the absolute WORSE traits of Harry in this story, not his best. And as to the 'outgrowing his saving people complex'... he never had one. Frankly, even if I DETESTED someone, I would try to save them as well... I wouldn't call that a 'saving people' complex In the case above I firmly believe this one does not check history as their are several hostage cases and infiltrated mafia cases where that situation did INDEED HAPPEN! The perfect example is Patty Hearst from the 1970's. She was a victim of a kidnapping who was with the group so long. She joined them! It's called STOCKHOLM SYNDROME! So don't complain about something you don't like. Because quite frankly we really don't give a damn and you will be surprised when we can disaprove it with actual historical fact. But if we hear your complaints constantly enough. Guess what. We are gonna quit eventually and take it elsewhere. I can tell of three writers in Inuyasha and Naruto whom I am huge fans of, who have done just that. Simply because people refuse to grow up and remember this is ONLY A STORY! B. Watch your reviews. You claim to be helping, but I will share something with you. This is not HELPING! You are an absolute . you. I should hunt you down ad kill you. This is just one example..Its not a review. Its a threat “Very good, but there is no way Sasuke, could ever be even touched by Bra’tac. Sasuke would have him down in less time then it would take him to blink. Sharingan can see everything. Nothing can get past it. Also Sasuke can move faster then the eye can see, Bra’tac wouldn’t stand a chance.” This is also not another example of helping and it also ties in to the first one. For we writers have our theories and to be told something can't happen, because so and so is all powerful? Makes us think...great we have someone who thinks they're right and we are wrong. And last but certainly not least. Although it is barely shy of tolerable this one is patronizing and NOT helpful. somewhat dissappointed if I'm very honest, there's nothing WRONG with your fic, but somehow it seems a bit wrong.. I don't think Naruto would be that angry, he would probably shut down or something instead of comprehending so quickly, besides he's actually quite forgiving as a person and wouldn't blame miroku so much because he would be used to being let down by now even if it will hurt, besides understanding would hurt miroku even more than anger, guilt trip mah. but anyways this is only my opinion and I guess everyone has their own interpretation of naruto Get the picture...those Bad. C... Some of us were not good writers in school. I especially failed my English course because of an inability to write good stories or poems in class. We have the ideas but not the skill to express ourselves. So we try and we ask for help. But when we don't get Betas or someone at least willing to aide us. DON'T COMPLAIN ABOUT it. Do something. Don't get on your high and mighty everything must be perfect horse. OFFER TO HELP! D... People another reason why some people will leave a site and take their stories with them is this. Yet another story that bashes on these people for calling for Naruto's death? Allow me to make a point: with all the 'Kill the DEMONS!" stuff that the various religions push today... what do you think would be done in real life if a child was found to have a demon sealed inside of them? OFF WITH THE HEAD! (sing this with me) So, don't blame this solely on these people or bash on them. Blame the people who cannot seem to realize that demon /= evil and cannot seem to understand that humans can do JUST AS MUCH HARM as any 'demon' can, if not more. This person is a close minded bigot against any story that does not conform to his wishes. You must remember we don't mind criticism, but we do get tired of preachy holier then thou attitudes when we write because WE ARE THE ONES WRITING! Not you...not him...we are. We normally do not mind people speaking up and saying something is wrong. But this person who is also responsible for Letter A can not seem to grasp that. So remember folks you don't like the way a story is being written. GO ELSEWHERE. Incomplete Harry Potter and the Ashes of Hope... (HP) Am Working on it Beginning of a New Time: First Year Hogwarts...(HP) Am Working on it Wild Magic...(HP/Wildside) Am working on it A Life for a life (Naruto) Am working on it Future heart... (Inuyasha) Am working on it Eternity.. (Naruto) Am working on it. Ultima: Cloud's Neverending Story (Final Fantasy7 & 10)... Am working on it Ramen Delights...(Naruto) Am working on it Big Trouble in Little Hogwarts.. (Harry Potter & Big Trouble in Little China) Am working on it Dark Alliance...(Harry Potter and Carpathian) Parallel (Harry Potter and Naruto) On hold Dark Hunters, Time Rips, Through the Gates of HeavenCompleted Two Dreams, Regret, Repent, Reborn, Noodle Delights, Common Sense, A Family, Correcting Time Choices..., Mistakes, What is this (Insert emotion), Icha Research?, Against All Odds Missing Precious Moments | |||||||||||
1. Eternity » reviewsDefeating Pein, the gods convene and realize Naruto is to weak to take on Madara alone as fate would have it now. One was supposed to aide him, but now will be to late with redemption to do so in time. So they send him the one ally who can... His father.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 19 - Words: 34,566 - Reviews: 187 - Updated: 10-16-09 - Published: 4-7-09 - Minato N. & Naruto U.2. Parallel » reviewsChallenge: Related because of their mothers, Harry and Naruto share similiar fates but in two differant parts of the world. Through Fate, they will be united. Two worlds, Two like destinies perhaps the clue to save one has always been with the other.Crossover - Harry Potter & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 58,358 - Reviews: 289 - Updated: 9-23-09 - Published: 5-5-09 - Harry P. & Naruto U.3. Dark Alliance » reviewsLeft as an orphan this time once again with his cousin Dudley. What the wizarding world failed to do was notice there was another who could protect them. How will the wizards react to a Carpathian raised Harry Potter and Dudley Dursley?Crossover - Harry Potter & Carpathian Series - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 15,061 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 8-7-09 - Published: 5-5-09 - Harry P.4. Wild Magic » reviewsThe Evans Family had a magical secret. One that even they themselves may not know about. Harry was about to find out at 17 when he not only inherits James's legacy. But Lily's as well. HP/Wildside CrossoverHarry Potter - Rated: M - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 18 - Words: 45,841 - Reviews: 149 - Updated: 7-31-09 - Published: 3-15-09 - Harry P. & Daphne G.5. Second Chance, Second Life, Second Path » reviewsSequel to Regret, Repent, Reborn. Minato and Kushina both have grown envious of those who spend time with their son. Hence they are allowed a second chance to raise him. Now history is beginning to change... Question is this. Will it be for the better?Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 17,729 - Reviews: 43 - Updated: 7-26-09 - Published: 7-3-09 - Minato N. & Naruto U.6. Harry Potter and the Ashes of Hope » reviewsHarry Potter has been sentenced and kissed for crimes he did not commit. When the Order discovers his innocence far to late to save him, how will the wizarding world fare without their hero? Continued with permission, explanation inside Chapter 1.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 79 - Words: 128,891 - Reviews: 1531 - Updated: 7-18-09 - Published: 8-25-07 - Harry P. & Remus L.7. Ultima: Cloud's Never Ending Story » reviewsChallenge Response: Because of events beyond his control, Cloud has lived far to long and has watched many go on without him save one. Stepping away from humanity he is once again brought back in as his world is faced with the menace that is SinCrossover - Final Fantasy VII & Final Fantasy X - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 37,286 - Reviews: 115 - Updated: 7-15-09 - Published: 1-17-09 - Cloud S. & Tidus8. A Life for a Life » reviewsEnergy meeting one another at a moment in time years apart. The same kind of seals at the exact same moment. Death allows one to live in exchange for another...the Third is gone...the Fourth has returned... May contain some spoilers to ShippuudeenNaruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 88 - Words: 139,319 - Reviews: 655 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 3-17-07 - Minato N. & Naruto U.9. Regret, Repent, Reborn » reviewsWatched by those who have gone, the story of Kakashi and Naruto's desire to prove himself to his Sensei whom he looks to like a father unfolds as incidents start to happen that has the potential to destroy all.Naruto - Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 65 - Words: 63,483 - Reviews: 451 - Updated: 7-8-09 - Published: 7-31-07 - Naruto U. & Kakashi H. - Complete10. Big Trouble in Little Hogwarts! » reviews1 year old Harry is given by Petunia to a cousin of the Evans family and his friends. Watch as those who have beaten the Sorcereor of the East Lo Pan, raise a young Harry to face his destiny. Because unlike others...they have experience! Crossover!Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 33 - Words: 58,306 - Reviews: 258 - Updated: 7-1-09 - Published: 10-16-08 - Harry P.11. Ramen Delights » reviewsThe Fox has decided to take a hand in Naruto's love life. Whether he wants to or not... How will Hinata react as she deals with a certain vessel and vice versa? Nar/Hin, Neji/Ten, Shika/Tema. Other pairings to come depending on right flavor.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 30,514 - Reviews: 108 - Updated: 6-10-09 - Published: 2-14-09 - Naruto U. & Hinata H.12. Beginning of a New Time: First year Hogwarts » reviewsSequel to correcting time. Harry and Alex have been raised together with their family and friends. Now Hogwarts is here. What changes will they make together against Voldemort despite the belief of many that Alex and not Harry is the Savior?Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 21,736 - Reviews: 122 - Updated: 2-24-09 - Published: 6-12-08 - Harry P. & James P.13. Through the Gates of Heaven » reviewsWho knew that following that teme would end up dragging himself and Sasuke all over the Universe, just to find a way home? NarutoSG1 CrossoverCrossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 24 - Words: 39,506 - Reviews: 322 - Updated: 2-8-09 - Published: 4-30-07 - Naruto U.14. Future Heart, Future Pain, Future Hope » reviewsInuyasha has finally succumbed to Kagome and as a result the two have now mated. But this sets off a chain of events that could destroy them all... Rated for mature content and adult concepts and themes and I dont own squat!Inuyasha - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 56 - Words: 74,966 - Reviews: 325 - Updated: 1-27-09 - Published: 6-27-05 - Inuyasha & Kagome15. Against all Odds reviewsONE SHOT! The last day when the Kyuubi attacks and Naruto is being born. What is really truly going on in Minato's mind?Naruto - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,795 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-10-09 - Minato N. & Kushina U. - Complete16. Time Rips and Soul's hope » reviewsHermione had pointed something out, that involved a connection between himself, the Horcruxes and Voldemort. Because of this, Harry finds himself taken to another timeline against his will to find new problems awaits him... AU My theory to Book 7Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 13 - Words: 28,612 - Reviews: 57 - Updated: 11-9-08 - Published: 6-10-07 - Harry P. & James P.17. Missing Precious moments reviewsSet between the two part short story Happiness in the What is this emotion series. James is deep thought as he views memories reluctantly given by the Weaselys of Harry's life. And he sees what he could have been apart of.Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,801 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-1-08 - Harry P. & James P. - Complete18. Through the Ashes: Companion to Ashes of Hope reviewsLittle one shot views of various characters and more of their stories from various characters in Harry Potter and the Ashes of Hope.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 846 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-20-08 - Harry P.19. Dark Hunters in Hogwarts » reviewsFrank Longbottom and James Potter, despite what they wish come up with the idea to give up their children for adoption to protect them. 5 years later Harry and Neville are adopted by Archeron. Crossover with Dark Hunter... REVAMP!Crossover - Harry Potter & Dark-Hunter series - Rated: M - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 9 - Words: 29,731 - Reviews: 76 - Updated: 10-11-08 - Published: 5-16-07 - Harry P.20. Icha Research! reviewsEver wonder how Jiraya writes his books when he keeps getting banned from hot spring to hot spring? Here's my theory.... ONE SHOTNaruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 10-9-08 - Jiraiya & Kakashi H. - Complete21. Correcting Time » reviewsTwins, One chosen one forgotten. Albus made a mistake that night and now the one he chose must go back to fix it or else Voldemort wins. He must save the true Savior...his brother Harry.Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 14 - Words: 22,326 - Reviews: 149 - Updated: 6-12-08 - Published: 5-30-08 - Harry P. & James P. - Complete22. Two Dreams » reviewsSasuke once had two dreams, one grows stronger but the other lingersNaruto - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,833 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-22-08 - Published: 1-22-08 - Sasuke U. & Naruto U. - Complete23. Mistakes reviewsONE SHOT! Sometimes a wrong decision made to leave a child so that another will be protected will come back and hurt you where it counts.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,319 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-8-07 - James P. & Lily Evans P. - Complete24. Common Sense reviewsONE SHOT! Ayame watches as a little boy that she adores once again gets beaten for what was inside him. Blowing her top, what does she say to get it through the villagers that its wrong?Naruto - Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 609 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-10-07 - Naruto U. - Complete25. What is This Emotion? A series of Onetwo shots » reviewsWhat does it mean to be happy? What does it mean to love...to hate? Find out in a series of one and two shots....Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 7 - Words: 19,469 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 7-30-07 - Published: 7-12-07 - Harry P. & James P. - Complete26. Noodle Delights! » reviewsKagome is trying her hand at Noodle making for various reasons. MOstly to keep a certain hanyou happy....when he comes from the well to see what she is doing...whats going to happen? Series of one shots.... RATED FOR ADULT CONCEPTS AND THEMESInuyasha - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 16,579 - Reviews: 184 - Updated: 7-7-07 - Published: 3-4-07 - Inuyasha & Kagome - Complete27. A Family reviewsIt has been thirty years, since Sasuke has stepped foot in Konoha. He has finally accomplished his dream and wishes to tell his closest friend Naruto the news...but what he finds is more shocking then anything else....Naruto - Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,285 - Reviews: 29 - Published: 3-15-07 - Sasuke U. & Naruto U. - Complete28. Choices that we live with reviewsCagalli reflects on a choice she made years ago, after recieving an invitation to a wedding that isn't hers. But his....Gundam Seed - Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,036 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 3-1-07 - Cagalli Y. A. & Athrun Z. - Complete