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since: 07-11-05, id: 852820, Profile Updated: 03-30-09
country: United States
Author has written 22 stories for Serial Experiments Lain, Warhammer, Gunslinger Girl, Halo, Batman Beyond, Star Wars, and Ace Combat.

There is always something to be learned. Nobody is perfect. As we feel that we are supposed to get wiser, somehow, some way, we feel less so. The vast amounts of knowledge contained in this world cannot be held by any one person and never will be. This applies to the arts. One of those arts is writing.

I will say up front if you have visited this page from a review I have given... I am a very tough critic. You might know that from the difference in my review against the good "pat-on-the-head" reviews you may have. You might have read a story of mine passing through, and just got curious. In any case, I will tell you, I don't really like the single-lined review. It does nothing for my improvement or the better to my writing or life. It might encourage, but it does not help.

Telling a commander that the battle is going well because you do not want to report the fact that the left flank has a gap that the enemy found and is utilizing to win is a sentence of certain doom. I don't just want an honest answer. I want to know everything of every detail. Tell me everything that is wrong or even possibly wrong. I want all the facts you know and all the opinions you have. Every word counts. Hold me to high standards.

And hold yourself to high standards.

As far as I'm concerned, I have failed. I have failed my fans. I have failed my friends, and I have failed my writing passion. I seek my old victories, and I seek new ones. But for now, I am a failure until further notice.

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1. Ace Combat XXIII: Another War reviews
Can you guess the plot for this story?
Ace Combat - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 368 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-28-09 - Complete
2. Fleet of the New Kingdom » reviews
The Emperor's Wrath warp storm spins a massive expeditionary force of the Imperium into other sci-fi worlds. Believing to be in a time before the Emperor, the New Kingdom Fleet will cleanse the galaxy and pave the way for the Imperium...
Crossover - Star Wars & Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,961 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-4-09 - Published: 5-3-09
3. Vinita the Next Generation » reviews
Vinita, an American savant, is transformed when the Agency rescues and makes her a non-combatant Fourth Generation cyborg to help the dwindling intelligence and office staff. Pricilla is chosen to be her handler.
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,599 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 4-23-09 - Published: 11-6-08
4. Power » reviews
The real, first-multi chapter story I posted on the website, with only tiny modifications. Some of you might remember this titled "Firepower". It concerns the abusive Carol-Gino and Terra-Lucas fratello teams.
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,801 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-09 - Published: 3-24-09
5. The Run to Drive, the Drive to Run
Terra's mindset while self-training. This was my first GSG story on , and I never realized how good it was.
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,023 - Published: 4-23-09 - Complete
6. Do's and Dont's reviews
Seven simple rules to follow for your Federal law-breaking business in Rome.
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,158 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-22-09 - Complete
7. Pinking reviews
Summer vacation, but Terry doesn't get off light. But when Bruce gives Terry the next night off, a freak accident turns a new Joker into a goop of pink, sticky, toxic, expansive, and explosive slime. Why is this new villain targeting the T gang?
Batman Beyond - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,518 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-25-09
8. The Tribe of Ugh reviews
A series of short stories about two Orks arguing.
Warhammer - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-30-07
9. Liora's Tail's Tale » reviews
Little stories about Claes' little white fluffball. Inspired by Sintendo's Lighter Side
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 8 - Words: 2,160 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 3-20-07 - Published: 11-1-06
10. Valentine Gift » reviews
What do the girls get for Valentines Day?
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 708 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-14-07 - Published: 2-12-07
11. Table for Two reviews
What happens when Angelica wants to help her handler only to have a cure be found?
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 698 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-1-07 - Complete
12. Predator reviews
What happens when a sexual predator considers one of the girls? English version
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 826 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-1-07 - Complete
13. A Trial Gamer's Story » reviews
A story about the mysterious 0Ghosthelm0... how does he win those games with no video card, ball mouse, and moderate internet speed?
Halo - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,923 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-1-07 - Published: 12-12-06
14. Jose Jitters » reviews
The story, I felt, wasn't going in the right mood, so the next chapters will undergo revision.
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,647 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-1-07 - Published: 10-31-06
15. Predatore reviews
Che cosa accade quando un pedophile segue Claes all'aeroporto?
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - Italian - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,012 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-16-06 - Complete
16. Fate of Tau Chronicles » reviews
REVISED! One player sees the Tau with potential in a world where everyone looks down on them... A new chapter!
Warhammer - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 9,991 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-31-06
17. In Early Times » reviews
A fantasy Gunslinger Girls... crossbows, swords, daggers, and all our favorite characters!
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,006 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-31-06
18. The Prince of the Pasta Kingdom reviews
Angie's Favorite story!
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 906 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-31-06 - Complete
19. No Longer Alone reviews
REVISED! Lain feels lonely and finds a way to bring Alice into the Wired! But she finds out she's not alone after all...
Serial Experiments Lain - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,044 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-31-06
20. Escort reviews
A brood of the Genestealer Cult try to get their Magus off a planet invaded by Tyranids.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,083 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-31-06
21. Rebirth reviews
Jose picks Henrietta... but was what he did with her ok?
Gunslinger Girl - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-31-06 - Complete
22. Layer: Alternate Ending reviews
For those of us who didn't like the ending...
Serial Experiments Lain - Rated: K+ - English - General/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,169 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-31-06 - Complete
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