Paper is handed in. Working on Incursion because it's in desperate need of an update. AND because I really want to get somewhere on it.

New Year's Resolution: As there are no foreseeable school projects that will need as much work as that paper, I will work nonstop on Incursion to make up all that lost time. I've been working on it for FOUR years and only have 25 chapters up and last year I think I only wrote two. Also, Radio ZELDAthe real-life adaption of Majora's Mask is getting yet another overhaul in my head. This way, we get much more mystery as to what exactly is going on, and the few plot holes that would have been in the early chapters are skipped over by the several flashbacks there will be. Darkness Deeper... NaNoWriMo made me hit a snag in that, sorry. All other projects have been put to the back burner for now. Incursion is on the main one now.

Oh, sorry, most projects. There's one more that's been nagging me for a while, much longer than RZ. It's a Mario fanfiction, but concerns the exiled leader of Bowser's elite special forces after his 2nd in command stages a coup within the force and his, the captain's, struggle against his former Number 2 to preserve the Koopa crown. ...oh, did I mention I'm considering making it into an animation?

PenName: QuinKilo1055

Age: 18

Grade: 12th. Senior Year!

Interests: Videogames, programming, writing, and spriting.

Favorite Videogamge Characters: Miles "Tails" Prower and Linebeck (funniest Zelda character ever).

Favorite Games: Mario series, Sonic Series, Zelda series, Metroid Prime series, Super Smash Bro.'s series, Rayman 1, 3, The Conduit, Hotel Dusk, Okami, and Exite Truck.

Favoritre Shows (in random order): Monk, Psych, Eurika, Star Trek series, MythBusters, NCIS, NCIS:LA, The Mentalist, CSI, StarGate SG1 and Atlantis and Universe, Dr. Who, Warehouse 13, Flashpoint, The Coloney, Wipeout, and many shows on the Discovery Channel.

Anyway, I'm Quin (duh), and I've been writing fiction (both fan and original... mostly fan) since 4th grade and I've definately come a long way from the terrible, plotless, pointless little ditties I've written.

I deal mostly in Sci-Fi, due to growing up watching Star Trek, both the Original Series and The Next Generation, though I'm good in most of the generas... romance definately not being one of them. I feel extremely awkward when writing it, but force myself through the fluff scenes I've put in Incursion and so forth. I also view Fantasy being the flip side of Sci-Fi. Both, in my opinion, are the same thing, except Fantasy deals with the past and Sci-Fi with the future, but their roots are the same. And when combined the right way, things can get awesome, which is what I've been trying to do with Incursion from Chapter One.

But anyway, I live in the middle of nowhere somewhere in the US. Too hilly for biking, I'm not the one for being outside (I don't tan, I rust and burn), and all my friends live way far away for any real contact outside of school and that equals me retreating to my computer and to writing.

Like many other people, Tails is my favorite character because not only we are essentually the same in the ways we've been the target for bullies most of our lives and too smart for own our good and writing for him comes naturally, thus the reason why he's the main character in most of my stories, including the stupid ones I wrote when I was 12 that make no real sense. For the record, Linebeck's my secondary favorite character just because he's hilarious.

Anyway, I graduate from school this year (yay) and am planning to go to college for Game Design. Where... well. I've got two in mind and have applied to one of them.

I also plan on becoming an Author. I'm planning out the rewrite of Incursion, and now Darkness Deeper now that I'm confitent enough to know where I'm going in it, where I'm taking out all the Sonic elements and making the entire thing original. This allows me to do lots of things for them... but gets rid of some key plots while allowing me to do several new ones.

But in the meantime, I'm writing both Incursion and DD to their final closing sentences. After all, Incursion's been going on for almost four years now, there's no way I'm stopping now! And to think... another, I dunno, ten or eleven chapters and we're done with it. Provided my outline is good and doesn't get screwed up again. And it will.

Fics:

Main Projects:
Orpheus Incursion.
What if Shadow was an Android? What if he did kill Eggman? What if he did create the empire of Androids, with him as its leader and Omega as his Second in Command? What if in order to make the said Androids, he uses the living and robotitizes them? And lastly, what if, the only person that Shadow inexplicably fears... is not on Earth at all? It has been five years since Shadow's rise to power, five years with a growing hint of fear in the back of Sonic and the Crew's minds. Angel Isand has taken off towards sanctuary, and the Crew has been reduced to a hit-and-run resistance. Tails, under the guise of neutrality, is creating plasma weapons for the fragment of GUN left. However, a Shadroid raid warps Tails to another planet. With new lingo, a new appearance, new name, a bounty on his old one, new abilites, new friends, and a whole new, unknown world to traverse, he only has one goal in mind, survive this unwanted Orpheus Incursion and get home before it's too late.

Chapter 25 Lingo:

Koi'po: 'I Not Think', translated literally. Its Viosh, the language of all Vions, bar Spine Vions.

Skaib: 'Skae-ibe', means strike fast. Viosh.

Yaisa: Means 'spine-clipped', a minor explicative in Viosh. Ai-yaisa is like 'oh, crap'.

Jus'Nane za: 'What is happening', not to be confused with:

Nane za: 'What is it.'

p'ait: one form of ain't the Krrlo use. (In J'roa's fake accent, he drops 'o's'). I goofed once with this word and spelt it 'p'ant'. Oops. Language is Krrlon.

ca y'ig: no direct translation from Krrlon, but it can be taken as 'a break' or something similar.

zos: Krrlon compound word of 'zo' and 's', the 's' being a downbeat and barely pronounced. 'Zo' is 'three-tailed', 's' means 'enemy of enemy'. So Zos actually means 'three-tailed, enemy of enemy'.

Eshnew: Actually means 'way of speak' and also used for 'grammer' on Orpheus, but is being used as 'accent' in this chapter.

Here's a few I forgot to put up for last chapter:

Iaha: E-aha, means ice. A commonly used Viosh term.

You p’ki’e ‘em, I r’mi’e ‘em: A rather famous phrase on Orpheus. P'ki'e and r'mi'e both mean the same thing, but in different languages. Both are verbs, and, loosely translated, mean: 'Sic one's element upon'. In Tails' and Kid's case, the phrase would mean, 'you zap them, I freeze them.' I acutally got the idea from Sins of a Solar Empire, one of the units/ships says, when you click on them, 'you pick 'em, I stick 'em'.

A Bit about Krrlo: Warning, Evolution theory ahead.
Krrlo live on on an area of Orpheus that experiances the highest winds. They have evolved to be as most areodynamic as they can be. They are symettrical down the middle, so they have no real front or back. Yes, that does mean that Kap actually has four arms, four eyes, and four mouths. Tails guessed right though, all mouths connect in the middle.

A Bit about Brakns: This is what J'roa is. Brakns live in the same area as Krrlo, but in the caves underneath the windswept deserts. No light's down there, so they have no pigmentation in their skin. They are extremely sensitive to light and can get sunburn from it quickly. They have no eyes, but have a Natural Sound element. Brakns and Krrlo live in tribes, and have frequent contact with one another.

Chapter 24 Lingo:

Zea and Momak: Dad and Mom, respectively. ...I used Zea as Myste's computer, didn't I? I knew it sounded familiar...

Retep: recover. It's all tenses. Future: will reptep. Present: retep. Past: has retep. Present Progressive: am retep.

Ail: Ouch, ow, etc. It's three syllables, Aie-EE-el.

Convae: theme. Could be used as topic of conversation in the right context.

Me-els: Not a original word of mine. It's how Serri says Myles. Here in case of any confusion.

Keka af'pa: This is Avaslane. Ke: "leave". ka: "alone". af: "Me". Pa: It's a negetory, in this case, "don't". All together, "Don't leave me alone."

Ash Mey Arkell: More Avasalane. Ash Mey is a phrase that usually not seen apart that says "Soul be with you." Usually used as a "goodbye", with Arkell at the end it becomes something around "May the Soul be with Arkell" depending on what else was in the sentence or is the topic of conversation. In this chapter, it means "May her Soul be with Arkell." A favorite prayer opening of Serri's.

Sai-Chai: We should already know that Chai means yes. Sai-Chai means "oh, yeah". Have fun.

Siset: Actually means "sister twin". Sister is "sizan"

Brother: while in the last chapter, and a real word, in our language it would translate to "brother twin". Brother itself is "therac" th-air-ac.

Ashiare: In our language, it means "I love you." It can't really be translated directly.

Vai: only used as the 'too' in phrases like "you too" "me too" ect.

K’ikiba: It's Fwal'cone! (PAWNCH!). Seriously, it means "And I still look better than you." Yes. Myles threw a cheap shot at Tails and he didn't realize it.

Vaibai: Prefer.

Nai-Oep: As Hib said, it essentually means "Hot Head." with Nai being "head" but Oep meaning "hazardous." But Oep is primarely afliffiated with fire.

Elnixia Elfire: That is, Operation Elnixia Elfire. Both are actual words, Elnixia being SPOILER CENSOR and Elfire being a really strong Fire Elemental attack. Just so happened auto-spell-check kicked in and replaced what I had with Elfire.

A Bit About Vions: Warning. Evolution theory ahead. As Orpheus is not Earth, just take it with a grain of salt and don't flame me.

That "Fifth Set" the Beak Vion Kid was refering to was his Fifth Set of spines. Every few years, Vion shed their spines as new ones grow underneath them, kind of like us Humans and teeth. The first four sets of Vion spines, and this is true for all Vions (there's three subspecies of them, Vion, Beak Vion, and Spine/Arkell/Land Vion as well as the ArchVion, but they're extinct), are blunt and can be considered "Trainer Spines". The first set grows in from birth to about two years of age. The Second from two to five. Third from Five to Eight. Fourth from Eight to Eleven. These are just averages, and the Kid is still on his Third Set himself. The Fifth Set are the first of them that have a point on them.

From then, every year they molt their spines, getting longer and sharper and "fanned out" in the case of the armspines as time passes. The Nineth Set at age 11 is their first set of mature spines, as sharp as they're ever going to be. Molting continues every year, replacing the spines, until twenty-four, where it slows to every four years.

Spine Vions, however, have a seprate growth rate from Vion and Beak Vion. Their "Fifth Set" is actually their Fourth. And their "Nineth", their Thirteenth. They also shed spines in groups, as they have the greatest number of them of the Vion species. This is thought to be because they are primarely a Land Species with Aquatic adaptations, and their evolution selected those that could more easily defend themselves.

Also, Vion go through an average of seventeen "sets" of scales during their lives. These have no real average age groups, and are just defined as a molting of scales where the next layer under is a different color from the last. All Vion usually go through at least three, but it varies from Vion to Vion. It's thought to be an evolutionary camoflageing trait, and nothing else.

Yeah. I have fun doing these.

Chapter 23 Vocab:

Kihvet: It sorta means chaos, except it's an object/noun rather than a verb/adj.

Firetha: It's the name of a powerful Fire Elemental attack. In the context Raj uses it in, it means firestorm. NOTE: the little thingie is supposed to force a syllable. It doesn't mean its abbreveated.

Avrih: It basically means "recieve vengence".

Avrihance: Not to be confused with "Avrih". This one means goes around the lines of "glory from the defeated".

Alright... now for those two Orphean Swears...

This was extreamly hard for me to actually do, and I only did it reluctantly. I knew it was only time until I had to do it, but I figured that Tails' mental blocking would help me out in most situations. Being under the influence of Raj, Tails decides not to mentally block them and I'm stuck giveing them out...

You've all had to figure out by now that I do not like swearing, so this goes against all my codes. But I've realized that writers have to be hypocrites sometimes.

As stupid and silly as it sounds, I'm not listing them. You might take it with a grain of salt, but since I'm the one creating these words, they're sorta real to me-- I've caught myself actually using some. Usually Chai, ai, Deysu (all three forms), and a few I have yet use.

What everyone has to realize is that all words are made up. Someone had taken time to create all the words we use and define them into what they are.

I'm essentaully doing that. I'm creating Orphean words, defining them, and using them both in my story and in real life. I'm sure some of you have read the book Frindle, in which some kid decides to give the lowly pen a new name: Frindle. That's essentually what I'm doing, but on a bit more radicle scale.

So, where am I going with this? I'm trying to say that since I created those swear words, they might eventaully wander into the mainstream vocabulary. ...meaning the day could come where you call someone an elgettie and it will have it's full effect as a minor insult.

The D- and I- words are both adj., so they're describing something. As stated before in my notes, they can't be alluded to any of the wonderful words /epicsarcasm we have in real life, so they cannot be compaired. However, they aren't up there with the f-bomb and such. Meaning, if they could, you'd probably hear the D- and I- words on a rather mature TV show that's on at around 10-o'clock.

Just don't go using them...

Chapter 21/22 Vocab:

Supercalifragilisticexpiolodocious (sp) does NOT mean what Raj said. She misheard what Tails said. As to what it actually means... Good question, I just did it as a joke to get the point across that words on different planets can have different meanings. Now onto the real words... there's alot of them this time.

Elgette: Remember those birds that attacked Tails in the latter half of Pit Stops? Those were Elgettes, a severly annoying, shrill bird that many people hate. They're also rather dumb. The insult derives from any of its atributes depending on the situation. It's one of Leo's favorite insults to use. And now, I've given you all something to call people. ...Uh, oh.

Gra’vreni and stai’ing: Both mean stalling in their basic senses. They're from seperate languages. If its not clear by now, the languages of Orpheus have been mixed together-- many use words from a different one they normally speak for a change of pace.

Wivl: As noted by Tails, its a writing utencle. Raj notes that its more commenly called a Willib, after its inventor. It's a thing that hooks onto either the claw or finger of an Orphean so they can just trace the word/image they want to draw/write with their finger.

Seo: Dormitory.

Tias: Parents. Note: Not Spanish.

Terracies: Terrace or balcony. Bet you didn't catch this one.

Orphae: The term for people. Its plural for Orphean.

Dey'su: Depending on the stress of the syllables, its either a pondering word (DEY-sue), an exclamation (DEY-SUE), or "come on." (dey-SUE). Of course, most Orphae sneeze in the way it sounds, so confusion is sometimes caused.

Raon ea poai: RAO-n ei powai. This phrase is actually retorical. It means "burrow in the sky." The phrase is Fwa’pawnch, a dialect from the country, Fwal’cone. Fwa'pawnch and Fwal'cone are the Easter Egg words I mentioned. Take away the "Fwa" on "Fwa'pawnch" and put it after "Fwal'cone". Now yell it out loud. Get it?

Chapter 20 Vocab:

I'esy Pronoun. It's the 'we' the Rajani fractures use when talking about all of them. They refer to themselves as I, however, as well as using 'I' to refer to the state when they're all one again and out in the real world (or Vinive Plane at leas

Esy -- Pronoun. The 'she' and 'her' form and basic name of the Rajani fractures. They all know which one they're talking about, but since Tails doesn't, he gives 'em nicknames barring Yellow and Blue.

Es'eray -- noun. It's the focused personality traits that each Esy have. Though all Esy have full personalities, only Anti, for example, are hypersensitive to hate and laughing traits and draws energy from them, no matter whoever it comes from.

Chai -- It's basically a yes/yeah/affirmitive in a different language. Used often to change the pace of things.

Novian -- Remember Chris and Sappho? They're one.

Trasen -- It's actually first used by Chanda in the Knothole Chapter. If anyone got the context, it's their word for barrel. "A trasen of fun?

Chapter 19 Vocab

Gibbs-slap-- Verb. From the show NCIS, taken from the back-of-the-head slap Gibbs does to his team, usually DiNozzo. Though he has done it to his other teammates (excluding Ducky, and Abby) and has done it to himself once. For those who don't watch the show, here's a how-to. Get a vict-- I mean a volunteer (or do it to yourself), position hand at the top of the back of the head angled slightly. Bonk the person/youself as hard or soft as you want, moving the hand horizontally and having it bounce off the head. Note: I am not responsible for any harm done by this stunt. : )

Shwaze -- Verb. Old DupliShadian for 'into the haze'. If used correctly, can be uses as disappear, to fade, to vanish, and to retreat among others.

Andiano Verb. From a language I have to make up. It literally means 'here then, gone now.' Its used as disappear only the object disappears in a short period of time. Otherwise, it's Andia, which is just to disappear.

Poofla -- Adj. Old DupliShadian for 'into darkness' if translated literally. Only used as disappear and vanish if the object vanishes in darkness. It also means death, die, and, of course, poof.

Wa’nane -- Verb. From a different language than Andiano. Means 'to nothing.' If it's Vm'nane (vem nane), it's 'from nothing'. 'Nane' by itself stands for an unknown object. The language's replacement for 'it', 'thing', and the question 'What?'

Chapters 1-4 Vocab

Skia: Said by Leo in the NEW Chapter 4. This is actually a sort of "god" on Orpheus that Leo beleives in. It's not nessessarly a religon, but is based upon the thought that the Orphean Sky is a living thing and they named it Skia. It's thought that those who disappear and are never found were enveloped by Skia. Several factions think that Skia eats them, while others think it takes them to a higher plane of existance. The first factions of that short list also think that entire cities can be "digested" by Skia.
Bonus Commentary: The entire Skia concept actually came from a song on a bonus CD my brother got. Lunch For The Sky by Socratic is also Leo's Theme Song, and the song also inspired me to bring him back into the story and give him more background. It is a weird song, though.
End Bonus Commentary.

Trink: This is the shortened version of Traveler's Quink. I realized that one of the benifits of having "short" units of measurement has the benifit of quickly conveying information. Traveler's Quink and that really huge long one are still used, but Trink is slang. Expect slang for other terms.

'lev: This is actually slang for the Orphean number eleven. Eelev is the full name.

Ai: It has two forms. Either a word of discovery (see Kazin's last line in the NEW Chapter 3) or an exclamation (See Siren/Angel just after she comes in in Chap 9 Part III).

Blade: Now you're asking, "why in the world is this one in here? The Context says it's what it is! A blade/sword!" Ah, but the truth is the word "sword" now doesn't exist on Orpheus (so whenever you see 'sword' in the unmodified chapters, mentally change it and don't yell at me). That said, blades are swords in our sense and are one of the five Blelee weapons. Blades are always nonElemental weapons.

Bonus Stuff:
Blelee Weapons: Blelee Weapons are a group of five close combat weapons that all start with the letters "B" and "L". They are: blades, blunts, blates, bluzas or blanks. See above for Blades.
Blunt: A blunt is essentually a blunt object. Staffs, police nightsticks, and anything unsharpened would fall into this catagory. Blunts must be nonElemental as well. Normally used for crowd control.
Blate: A blate is a blade energized with Elemental Energy.
Bluz: A bluz is a blunt energized with Elemental Energy. Plural form is bluzas.
Blanks: A blank is a short, six-inch Elemental Weapon that heavily concentrates any nearby Elemental Energy into its five-inch long but tenth-inch wide front peice for a massively critical attack. Blanks have a long recharge rate and can draw EE from anyone in a ten-foot radius. Of course, the farther away the person is, the less the drain would be. There are specialized Blanks just for draining a target's Elemental Aura of their EE.
You see, I've really got this worked out. More than you could imagine.
End Bonus Stuff.

Hai'umb: A swap-out for Minimum. Maximum would simply be "umb". The "Hai" is a prefix for "opposite" or "un", etc.

Ay'yopp: One word for "magic", though magic is used in its proper definition. Ay'yopp, however, is used for a bit more comedic magic while magic is used for deeper, more serious things. Kazin uses it in arguement with Leo in Chapter 4 before Tails heads off to get the Boom'Bade outta Clyde.

Boom-o and Explode-o: These words are actually DupliShadian. They mean exactly what they do without the "o" on the end. If its not obvious by the latest chapter, the DupliShads are slightly... different from the rest of the species.
Bonus Commentary:Their "AntiClamactic" moments are actually genetic-- they can't help but set up immense tenstion and kick out the supporting beams. It's the way their minds work and they don't realize it, not even other DupliShads. (or at least they won't when I reveiw everything) And its why many go to great lengths to try to avoid such set-ups with them.
End Bonus Commentary.

No, you're not reading the last part of chap 19 wrong. I am seriously thinking of completely re-writing Incursion into a completely original work. Not everything's going to be changed, of course. Most of the OC's (Kazin, Ricky, Raj, etc) will stay the same, just changed appearances and slight tweaks to their personalities. As for Tails, he's going to be swapped in for a human going through a similar AHW mutation, but not ending up as a fox. In fact, Kazin will be less resemblant to a fox than she is now (though I technically labled her an Orphean Fox), and more of an original species. I'm going to continue this line of thought on my blog (as this isn't exactly the best place to do this), link's at the bottom of this thing.

Oh, three more things, if I actually do this, nearly every single species in the book will be original to get away from the 'furry' line and fully into the Sci-fi.

Two: I'M NOT STOPPING THIS FIC! As I mentioned in the after-notes, I'm going to finish this, though its just the introductory storyline. Its still got a good amount of chapters to write, they're not getting out of the Jabril Mansion anytime soon, and then there's the after-adventure part and the big-ol' ending.

Three: The human? Well, he's got this fear of humanoid aliens. It's going to be lotsa fun.

Legend Without Zelda: Rebuke Thy Protector
From 11/16/07 Update News ('cuz I'm lazy)
Alright here's the deal of what's going on. I've started a new fic, a Legend of Zelda one this time. Unlike Incursion, there will be no mass amounts of OCs, no new lingo, and no new planet to traverse. ...Alright, that last one isn't exactly the truth, but for one of the main characters (who is a Zelda character, btw) it is. That should give you enough hints for you guys to guess who it is. Another thing: Expect NO LINK and NO ZELDA. That's right, its a Legend without Zelda thing. No relation to the flash movie, of course. Who are the main characters then? Well... one of the heroes is going to be Komali as well as the forementioned character and a few others I have yet to work in. The villain is, of course, an OC, but a very smart one, though. There's also a huge twist in it, one that I'm very proud of myself to work out. Want to know more? Well, look for Legend Without Zelda: Rebuke Thy Protector in the Zelda section later this year as soon as I got a 2.5-chapter buffer going. (FYI, I'm really debating whether to keep the "LWZ" in the title, but it's just there for now. Chastise me if you want, you have my premission).

A Darkness Deeper Than Black.
Takes place about 1.75 years before Incursion starts up. Shadow's army has dug up Eggman's hidden secret-- one that even the crazed Doctor had deemed unsuitable and had hid it away with only the following information on it: "DON'T." Whatever those words ment had died with the one who wrote them. However, the meaning of that word has become clear to Shadow, he has accidentally released this horror upon the world.
It takes no allies, only those it creates from the dead.
It has no sympathy, just the craving for blood.
The Tails Doll, one of the most overused and cliched horror objects in the Sonic universe, is now the deadliest.
(And it's basically been confirmed by everyone who reviewed, by the way.)

Here's the banner-type deal for DD:

A Darkness Deeper Than Black Banner

For the record, if you ignore the title, that is how I envisioned the Tails Doll making its TV announcement.

And for your reference:

Red Shirt Mission: If there's anything we've learned from the Original Series of Star Trek, the guy in the red shirt always gets it. From poisoned flower barbs to getting blasted to getting atomized. It's always the Red Shirt. Even in Star Trek Voyager: Elite Force Multiplayer, there's an award called the "Red Shirt" award given to the guy who dies the most. "Going Red Shirt" or "Red Shirt Mission" simply means a suicidal mission, or one with little chance for survival. I actually use the term for things that will end up with people getting injured.

Guess what? Here's some info on the rewrite of Darkness Deeper.
First off, the title will be nearly the same. The one's I'm thinking of are 'Of A Darkness Deeper', 'The Darkness Deeper', 'A Darkness Deeper', and, quite simply, 'Darkness Deeper'. Obviously, I like my oritinal title for once. It'll be explained in the story, both forms.

Secondly, the actual plot could be called a PirateNinjaZombie Plot-- it's has atributes of nearly all of the generas, but focuses primarly in few. Like, in the latest chapter of Darkness Deeper, there's a bit of fluff/romance. That's going to continue.
The Doll and its actual physical appearance not be known for much of the story. This gives it a bit of mystery. Reread the story, but skip The Doll chapter (technically, its the second. First with prologue). That's what its going to be like.
The Doll's not going to be the only horror of the story, just the greator. Shadow's replacement (hereafter referred to NewShad) and his reign of terror, not to mention his footsoldiers, are going to be the first of the double wammies (the second being the Doll).
Setting-wise, essentually, the end of the world has come and gone. FOUR TIMES. NewShad being the fourth. The Doll will be the fifth. Cue Wild Mass Guessing on what the first three are.

Thirdly, the story will mainly be told from The Commander's view (those who read should know. I'm not going to spoil it here to those who haven't read it.) Still in third person, but, since the world is now as alien to us as it is to her, she and her possee (which will be a platoon, not just three of them) be our traveling buddy(/ies). The viewpoint will shift from the new main scouting squad of the Resistance, to a limited one of NewShad.

Fourthly. The Doll will not be as nice as it is/will be in this story. Granted, now that I know I'm going to rewrite this, I'll try to write as close as I want to the real deal now.

Fiftly. There will be no huge figher battle with Tails' replacement. Meaning the Fifth Chapter (Fourth W/ Prolouge) doesn't exist in the rewrite. Instead, the battle roars overhead as a town is being evacuated by Shadow when the Doll Attacks it.

Sixthly. You will not know who the main characters are until several chapters into the story. Those who you think are main can be killed off. Those that you think are minor might become main.

Lastly. There are scenes in the rewrite that I can't write in this version because its a Sonic Fanficiton. Not that they're too mature (well, the bloody bits probably are), this is a Sonic fanfiction and I have to keep to it being in the realm of Sonic.

And so, in the End. It never does. (Note: This line will be major later on in the story when another character comes into play)

Misc Things.

www.behindthename.com/random

This is the random name genorator I use for the names of my characters. Though you won't find Kazin or Myste in there (I checked), you can find the names for most OC's. I tend to stick to the Sonic nameing process that says the name is related to abilities. If it wasn't for this site, Chapter 4 PT VII would of taken longer than it had. Praise the name genorator! (bows)

http://tvtropes.org

Oh, dear lord. TvTropes. This will ruin your life. Once you enter, you'll never return.