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since: 09-12-05, id: 896308, Profile edited: 05-24-08
Author has written 26 stories for Star Wars, Jedi Apprentice, Lord of the Rings, Eragon, and Stargate: SG-1.

Hi, How are you all going. Thanks for stopping over at my little corner of insanity.

My name is Erwesteth Carasiriel. For those of you who do not recognise the gender noun 'riel' I am female. I've just noticed that more and more people are calling me sir, or him. My brother thinks it's hilarious! Well I do too, but that's not the point. So just to clear up any shades of grey. I'm a female of the human race, and I come in peace... I think...

I am in year 12, living in Australia, and I want to go to university, get my PhD in Ancient Civilisations and go work in the Middle East (not a lot of archaeologists/cryptologists (the linguistal kind not the mathematical kind) are going over there at the moment...wonder why)

I'm 16, and I live with my mum and my younger brother, a one year old pup, and two fishy and a kitten. I am also fluent in three languages. English, Conversational Japanese and Music, and I'm learning Russian and Arabic

(((Music is a language. You can convey meanings, emotions and feelings as surely as words. Plus people all over the world can read it... except for percussion people, they read the braille form. (no offense if you are a percussionist - I know many of you can read music as well...just very few that I know.)))

One litte fact about me...: I have discovered that when my brother starts on his x-box (which we are only allowed to play in the holidays) he is so focused. He's in the zone and it once took me roaring at him like a commander or something to snap him out of it. And yes... I can roar, just ask Tortall Princess.. :-). Oh and I guess when I play I get into it too... but I more give the various characters encouragement or discover that I enjoy destroying and killing in KOTR or hacking heads of orcs and Uruk in LOTR. and Looting! who knew how much fun it could be?

What I'm currently annoyed at...: Inconsistencies with timelines and plots. Current one... the Darth Bane Duology - it starts out in the Old Republic with the first novel. The Second novel (which is directly after the first) has the beginnings of the Separatist movement with Chancellor Valorum mentioned... it is very confusing... especially when one takes into consideration that in The Phantom Menace, it was mentioned that the Sith had not been in the galaxy for a thousand years (from the battle where Bane destroys the Sith to the end of the second novel - 23 years), and it steps on Sidious's toes. CONSISTENCY OF CONTINUITY... it's very important.

A huge thanks (and a big hug!) to Lady Charity for putting me in her story: LoTR's Trip to Canada. It was an honour!

Tortall Princess... J made me do it! I swear! And no... it had nothing to do with the flag

Some Quotes:

"Where are the Australians? Can someone please tell me where all the Australians are?! I mean was it: "Oh look, we have a Stargate, let’s drop a few countries!" I’m not starting anything, I just want to know where all the Australian’s are." - My and some friends going on a movie rampage…

"Save your breath, all I listen to is the tide" - Spare car wheel protector.

"And QANTAS will be called the Asian Kangaroo." - to the tune of I still call Australia home - an ad on Australian Broadcasting Centre

"Hey! Take the disembowelment of the stuffed toys out side!" – Me to my dog.

"Not for puppy consumption." – Me to my dog.

"My Lords, my Ladies! And everyone else in between!" – The beginning of my speech.

5/4 people have problems with fractions.

Organised people are too lazy to look for things.

"Hey! No fighting in the school arena!" - Friend in Ancient History to two grade nine boys in trouble for fighting.

Is the subject or the observer the greater influence?

"Will you stop listening? This is a private conversation in a public place!" - my to one of my friends during English.

The mind commands the body, and immediately it obeys. The mind orders itself, and meets resistance.

In the desert, the line between life and death is sharp and quick.

Logic is blind, and often only knows its own past.

Every endevour is a game, is it not?

When humans created a computer with the ability to collect information and learn from it, they signed the death warrent of man kind.

The machine is an evil genie, escaped from its bottle.

Most histories are written by the winners of conflicts, but those written by the losers - if they survive - are often more interesting.

Any man who asks for greater authority does not deserve to have it.

Due to interest rises: answers are now 2.00
thoughtful answers are now 4.00
correct answers are now 5.00
a dumb face is still free! (HOD for Maths)

Some things you will never find in any of my stories! - SLASH! INCEST! ect!
My disclaimer for all my stories: I do not own any recognisable characters - they are the property of their respective owners - so does that mean we deal in slavery? hmm...

Copied and Pasted

If you don't watch Laguana Beach, OC or the Hills, never have, never will, and are proud of it, copy and paste this into your profile

98 percent of the popilation does or has tried smoking pot. If you are one of the two percent that hasn't...

If you ever wished you could talk to animals or be an animal...

(These are from Lilagirl's profile)

Ok, I have to go before I spill national secrets. (Well I would spill them if I knew them... hmm...) Nela




1. The Sound of a Slamming Door » reviews
Estel is left behind by his brothers. Something Glorfindel said is remembered, and Elrond has a problem with it...
Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,874 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 12-29-07 - Published: 11-21-06
2. The Ninth Chevron reviews
No one actually knows what the ninth chevron on the gate does. One inquisitive linguistarchaeologist decides to make it her mission to find out. Rubbing Daniel's face in her success is just a bonus...
Stargate: SG-1 - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,093 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-20-07 - Published: 12-20-07
3. This Means War reviews
Gimli and Thranduil left alone. Never a good thing
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-20-07 - Published: 12-20-07
4. Sons of Gondor reviews
Faramir had a vision. Boromir knowingly went to his death. There is still one Son of Gondor left.
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,704 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-11-07 - Published: 11-11-07
5. Through Their Eyes » reviews
An event occurs. Valorum was shot, and taken to Coruscant Med. Something happened. An addition to the story Cloak of Deception.
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,563 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-3-07 - Published: 8-8-07
6. Rants Against reviews
A rant against gandalf, designed to be humorous some mentioned out of timeline... It was deliberate! It was deliberate....
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 713 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-2-07 - Published: 11-2-07
7. Astra Melady 2: In the Enemies fortress » reviews
A continuation of Astra Melady 1. Astra is awake, Obiwan learns of his Padawans disappearance... Who is this man who knows more than the average being? And what made Obiwan and Quigon finally talk properly again... to really forgive...
Star Wars - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 13,975 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 12-5-06
8. Issues of the Heart, Issues of the Mind » reviews
Obiwan and Anakin have some issues that need to be aired. The Council gives them a way to do it.
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,546 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 2-5-07 - Published: 1-20-07
9. Small Things Which Change the Fate of the Galaxy » reviews
Well I had this thought... maybe things don't go as planned... small things... friendships built and alliances shatterd, things like that... and what the consequenses of those actions would be. These are nonconsecutive, nonrelated stories!
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,987 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-14-07 - Published: 2-3-06
10. Broms Thoughts reviews
Seven paragraphs told from Brom's point of view as he travels with Eragon.
Complete - Eragon - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 749 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-17-06 - Published: 12-17-06
11. No Regrets, Merely Wishes reviews
Aragorn and Arwen have a discussion as they watch Faramir playing with the children.
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 484 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 12-4-06 - Published: 12-4-06
12. The Story reviews
Companion peice to Elves Rangers and Shire Border Patrol... suggested to read ERaSBP to understand some bits.
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,011 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-21-06 - Published: 11-21-06
13. Confidant, Friend, Brother reviews
Confidant...Friend...Brother... Aragorn...Faramir... Pain...Grief...Sorrow
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 366 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-06
14. Torture of a Different Kind reviews
As if we needed another reason to hate the Elves. Immortal, Wisest and Fairest of all beings... Well here it is....
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-06
15. Astra Melady 1: When trust is formed and shattered » reviews
Both Obiwan and Quigon survive TPM, It has been a while since they have spoken to each other, now Obiwan has his own apprentice who he has to teach to trust. Can he do that and find a killer at the same time?...
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 22,071 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-9-06 - Published: 2-5-06
16. Anakin and Sandry » reviews
Anakin hasn't turned to the darkside yet, he has a padawan... A Jedi game starts to get serious... Adi gets her revenge... Lunch is served...
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,702 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-15-06 - Published: 2-5-06
17. Elves, Rangers and Shire Border Patrol reviews
A host of Rangers get rather annoyed at some Elf Lords. If Elrond wasn't so scary when he was angry, it could have almost been hilarious.... I forgot to put this in the story, so I do not own LOTR, it all belongs to an Englishman
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,179 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-14-06 - Published: 8-14-06
18. A Healers Heart » reviews
In the mountains between Gondor and Rohan, a Rangers garrison has stopped sending reports. Two children lose all whom they can trust and a terrible truth is revealed
Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,221 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 2-5-06
19. The Hidden Room » reviews
Obiwan, after winning a tournament, goes on a walk. He, exploring the lower, unused, levels of the Temple, find something, and someone, in a room....
Jedi Apprentice - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,551 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 2-26-06
20. Two Birds Fly reviews
AU of Medstar... Anakin's fall comes earlier than expected and the destruction of the Jedi happens sooner than it should be... extended universe
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 547 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-24-06 - Published: 3-24-06
21. Quigon's Last Thought reviews
Quigon had one last, unsaid, thought
Complete - Star Wars - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-14-06 - Published: 3-14-06
22. A Sick Quigonnot so reviews
The Healers had ambushed Obiwan that afternoon and told him in no uncertain terms that if he didn't get Quigon into bed at a certain time each night, then his next trip to the healers would turn out poorly indeed. hidden joke try and find it
Complete - Jedi Apprentice - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 397 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-26-06 - Published: 2-26-06
23. Kara Jems'halie » reviews
Obiwan and his friends have to do a report on the SithJedi wars, they find something that challenged their views on the Jedi...
Complete - Jedi Apprentice - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,889 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-06 - Published: 2-13-06
24. The New Mandalorian » reviews
Obiwan didn't retain his memories....A slave finds him and takes him to her master...
Complete - Jedi Apprentice - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,240 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-14-06 - Published: 2-14-06
25. Ithreal reviews
MelidaDaan have finally joined the Republic and are now known as Melidaan. Obiwan never returned to the Jedi and the Jedi never came back for him.
Complete - Jedi Apprentice - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,251 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06
26. Lose the battle win the war reviews
Things don't exactly go as planned during the hearing. spoilers for JA special ed. 1
Complete - Jedi Apprentice - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,604 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-3-06 - Published: 2-3-06
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