| Hajnalmadar |
Author has written 2 stories for Naruto. Adult Fanfiction.net Profile My Dear Readers, I'm a 25 yrs old philosophy student from Hungary. I don't have too much time since I work as well, but hopefully I'll be able to finish Blindfolded soon (well.. that 'soon' is 'during next year'.) mistressofmischeif drew an amazingly cute Itachi cat from chapter 6: deviantart To tell the truth right now I'm more immersed in Harry Potter. I'm also beta editing (plot-wise) for three amazingly talented writers in the Tomione fandom: Mattie, Serpent in Red and LJLupinFan. Please check out their stories, you definitely won't regret it!:-) I'm not fan of harsh criticism, and when I write one I do it out of good will, because I believe that the author has the ability to improve (I never review lost cases). However at times I receive replies accusing me of flaming, so now I'd like to borrow Nibbles the Chicken's words whose sense of criticism I admire (I just wish you would have answered me.. we could have had great discussions..): When a person posts something to FF.net, I assume a number of things: Number one-- That you are at least 13 years of age, and that you have at least a 7th grade education. Number two-- That you want me (a complete stranger) to review your story, and to tell the truth. So no 'I just wrote this for my friends and family' bull excuse. You put it on a public site, expect public reviews. You should put it on your Livejournal if you don't want me to read it. Number three-- That you actually read the terms of service for this site. They do actually want you to use spell-check, and beta your work. Extreme illiteracy is not allowed. Number four-- That you actually tried to write a decent story. I do not appreciate half-arsedness. If you did try, and you still failed? Well, how are you supposed to do better if no one tells you anything? Number five-- Finally, I assume you actually wish to write better than you do now. That you are actually here to improve, and not to stroke your ego. Favourite pairings: DragonBall Z: Bulma & Vegeta Inuyasha: Kagome & Sesshoumaru-sama (I consider olderRin & Sesshoumaru pairing The best, but I've never read a really good fic with them) Slayers: Xellos & Filia Naruto: Sakura & Itachi ; Hinata & Neji ; Sakura & Kakashi -contains the best make-out ever, but I only liked the fic till Chapter 6) ; The Fortune of Mrs Sakura Witch Hunter Robin: Amon & Robin Gokusen: Shin & Kumiko Cowboy Beebop: Spike & Fay Hana Yori Dango: Tsukushi & Tsukasa Bleach: Byakuya & Rukia ; Grimmjow & Orihime ; Ulquiorra & Orihime + The Best Bleach Fics from lunatrick: Problems in Hueco Mundo ; Misunderstood ; Accident Samurai Champoo: Fuu & Jin Saiunkoku Monogatari: Sa Sakujun & Shuurei Final Fantasy VIII: Quists & Seifer ; Zell & Quists Harry Potter: Hermione & Draco ; Hermione & Tom Ayashi no Ceres: Check out LOKI's beautiful writings! Get Backers: Himiko & Kagami Pairing I HATE: Neji & Tenten ; Pairing I dislike: Naruto & Hinata Favorite Manga: Unbalance x Unbalance ; Kaze Hikaru ; Penguin Revolution ; Sensei! ; Blue Ramun ; My Barbaric Girlfriend ; Gendenki Daisy ; Half Ouji ; Some thoughts About genre: romance vs. drama: there is a great distinction between the two, yet many mix them; so let me share my secret jutsu: how to tell the difference. Romance is intended to fulfill, therefore after reading it, the reader feels emotionally satisfied. About drama: I'm sure many of you read stories where the two characters hate each other at the beginning, then approach each other, but then take a step backwards. Then something happens and it seems like they're getting close, but no.. and this continues over and over, just dragging in the realm of uncertainty, insecurity and unfulfillment over many-many chapters like a never ending story, showing so many almost situations, but at the end we reach nothing because one of the characters is emotionally not there yet (and never will be usually). These stories are -unlike how their writers state- not a romance. So the conclusion is: romance is where the two characters are on (or reach) the same level emotionally, while drama is where they are not on the same level emotionally. General disclaimer and claimer to my works: I don't own Naruto or it's characters, however I own the characters I created. (Not that I'm afraid that anybody would steal Yamaji, for instance;) But just to make it clear: you can use any idea, place or character that I've created under one condition: you have to make it better. I'm deadly serious about this one though, only development is acceptable. And of course let me know so I can enjoy your work, too:) Sziasztok mindenkinek! Elvakultan - uh hamarosan. Ezt a fejezetet félig magyarul, félig angolul írtam - így jött ki. Úgyhogy nincs más hátra, minthogy a maradékot lefordítsam magyarra. Azt hiszem az angol verzió előbb lesz kint, de a magyar is jön hamarosan... Itt a térkép, ami fontos, hogy az ötödik fejezetet megértsd. Ötletes, mi:)) Tehát fentről kezdve és balról jobbra haladva az országok a következők: Föld országa, Vízesés országa, Rizs országa, Hang országa Zöldség országa, Méz országa, Eső országa, Fű országa, Tűz országa Szél országa, Folyó országa | |||||||||
1. Blindfolded » reviewsWhen he took off her blindfold their love and hate clashed together, and the sharp line between trust and betrayal blurred; because trust is a double-edged sword, and sometimes betrayal is the only option that can change the world. ItaSakuNaruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 77,870 - Reviews: 130 - Updated: 11-30-08 - Published: 7-27-07 - Itachi U. & Sakura H.2. Elvakultan » reviewsMert hitted, hogy te vagy a jó, hogy veled van az igazság ó de mennyire elvakult voltál! Még akkor is amikor már láttad, hogy nem volt más választás azon gondolkodtál hogy lehetsz képes szeretni valakit akit egész életedben gyűlöltél ItaSakuNaruto - Rated: T - Hungarian - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 54,404 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-26-07 - Published: 6-13-07 - Sakura H. & Itachi U.