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since: 06-01-04, id: 600645, Profile Updated: 12-23-10
country: USA
Author has written 53 stories for Jak and Daxter, Marching Band, Avatar: Last Airbender, Pokémon, Bleach, Death Note, Soul Eater, and Shugo Chara!.

I rarely write anymore, if at all, but I still lurk a heck of a lot. I check my fandom email only very occasionally, so there may be long stretches of not being able to reach me. Apologies.

I'm listed as an open beta reader, which is still true, because I love editing. However, it may take a while for me to get back to you if you PM me. Sorry. :(

BETA EXPERIENCE:

Purple Archer's "Three's a Crowd": http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5131719/1/Threes_a_Crowd

Arekisu's revised "Detours," which is no longer available. Arekisu was a BNF in the early days of Avatar fandom, though.

General copy-editing skills. I'm a journalism student, so I've got my copy of the AP Style Guide, don't you worry.

MY STORIES:

Here's a sampling of me at my best...amidst the 6 years of craptacular writing, stuff I consider worth reading.

Burning Sky - Avatar: The Last Airbender - A post-war Zutara piece. Possibly the best fanfic I've ever written. Chock full of pretty imagery and every sentence relevant to a central theme. If I could brag about any piece, it would be this one.

Topknot - Avatar: The Last Airbender - A Zuko one-shot, set in the early third season. Another piece that I am very proud of.

Rapture - Avatar: The Last Airbender - A post-war multi-chapter fic featuring Zutara later on. I still want to finish this piece, but I'm not sure when I will. Still, it's some really good writing, at least for the first 3-5 chapters.

Sinner and Martyr - Death Note - Set around the time of L's death. Sort of choppy and philosophical, but I like it that way.

Horseblinders - Bleach - An UlquiHime one-shot telling all of Orihime and Ulquiorra's interactions from Ulquiorra's point of view, sort of. I disliked it at first but the more I reread it the more I'm satisfied with it.

Sentimentality, Sunsets, and Saturday Evenings - Bleach - A HitsuKarin one-shot. Probably the cutest thing I've ever written.

Better - Pokemon - Set in the Crystal version game verse. Main Crystal girl and red-haired rival (Redemptionshipping I think is what it's called). I like this one.

Light - Avatar: The Last Airbender - A Zutara Christmas AU story. One of the rare decent fics from my early days.

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1. The Trainer of Legend, or, The Loser » reviews
A girl in Blackthorn's Dragon User Clan captures mighty Suicune with a less than mighty Magikarp and a shiny red Horsea. Now it's a race against time, her cousin Clair, and her sanity to meet with Ho-oh in Tin Tower and save the world. Or something.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Parody/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,064 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-1-11 - Published: 6-28-11 - Suicune/Suikun
2. Horseblinders reviews
If he could feel, he might have loved her. Ulquihime
Bleach - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,523 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-20-10 - Ulquiorra & Orihime I. - Complete
3. Rapture » reviews
The twists and tangles of love in a fragmented, postwar world. She's not ready for lifelong commitment, and he's not exactly beloved in his new role as Fire Lord. They'll cope, though. They have to. Picks up where 321 left off. Zutara. Some Kataang/Maiko
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,000 - Reviews: 57 - Updated: 8-5-09 - Published: 12-30-08 - Katara & Zuko
4. I Don't Miss You! reviews
Post ch 43, spoilers. Amu realizes things are changing for her, but no, no matter WHAT, she DOESN'T miss Ikuto. Yeah right...
Shugo Chara! - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,655 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-4-09 - Amu H. & Ikuto T. - Complete
5. He Likes reviews
He'll never show it, but Soul likes a lot of things about Maka. SoulxMaka drabble.
Soul Eater - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 434 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 7-11-09 - Soul & Maka - Complete
6. Seeing Red reviews
/Spoilers for TSR/ She'd never thought about killing someone before. She was mature, yes, and she knew the nature of war, yes of course, but being a killer even during war was something she never, never would manage. And yet poetic justice tempts...
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 849 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-16-08 - Katara & Zuko - Complete
7. Burning Sky reviews
The pregnant night will give birth to the bloody morning, and they will shed their childhood in favor of more adult clothing, like the Fire Nation crown, the armor of a Southern Tribe warrior, the solemn clothing of a monk. /PostWar, Zutara, Sp. to 3x13/
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,341 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 5-11-08 - Complete
8. Rain » reviews
The war has ended. The Avatar has died, nature weeps at its Spirit's breaking, and rain falls endlessly. And despite that all, it's not the end, but rather the beginning. Complete! Prequel to Broken Spirit. Drabble Series. ZxK, SxS, SxTL
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 54 - Words: 13,503 - Reviews: 55 - Updated: 3-4-08 - Published: 5-14-06 - Complete
9. Sinner and Martyr reviews
Inspired by ep 25 and 26. Who was teacher and who was student, who was hunter and who was hunted, who was God and who was disciple, who was sinner and who was martyr? The tragedy of a relationship that defies definition and the winner who didn't win.
Death Note - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 710 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-19-08 - Light Y. & L - Complete
10. Open Wounds reviews
POSTWESTERN AIR TEMPLE, ZUTARA, ONESHOT Katara is selfish in her hatred ...How can you ever appease your sworn enemy so easily, but be so hated by the one that you spilled your heart to?
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,831 - Reviews: 27 - Published: 12-15-07 - Katara & Zuko - Complete
11. Topknot reviews
Inspired by The Headband, beware of spoilers, anti Maikoness You tie your hair back in the topknot that you are finally able to wear again because you have restored your honor, but you let your hair down, free and scruffy like a wild beast, at night.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 896 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 9-29-07 - Zuko & Iroh - Complete
12. Parallel reviews
The tragedy of it all is that their paths are parallel—nearly the same but never touching A different take on Aang and Zuko's relationship, discussing their immense similarities, their stark separation, and the tragedy of the gray space in between.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 717 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-21-07 - Aang & Zuko - Complete
13. When the Rain Falls, Children Hide Away Indoors » reviews
As conniving and powerhungry as her father, Rayn will stop at nothing to bring Haven City under her violenceenforced reign. The Havenites have a hero, though. Except the real problem lies within the hero, for he wonders if he really is a hero after all.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,853 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-4-07 - Published: 7-2-07 - Jak M.
14. Sentimentality, Sunsets, and Saturday Evenings reviews
Karin's never really been the sentimental type. Toshiro doesn't strike her as the sentimental type, either. And yet, he comes to the same spot atop the hill every day and she comes too, if only to be with him. HitsuKarin, One Shot
Bleach - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 776 - Reviews: 27 - Published: 7-12-07 - Karin K. & T. Hitsugaya - Complete
15. Of Misconceptions and Misnomers reviews
He bows his head, now indifferent to the rough wind rippling his royal clothing and headpiece, not comforted by the soft snores of the young teenagers, worried for but not entirely consumed by the fate of the half dazed, half dead Avatar, wondering why.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 619 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-11-07 - Complete
16. Imprisonment » reviews
The war is over, but it is a hollow victory. Everyone is gone, and she feels she has no one left. That is, except for one she'd trusted, once. Zutara, Post Season Finale, Post War, SPOILERS
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,643 - Reviews: 55 - Updated: 2-8-07 - Published: 12-6-06 - Zuko & Katara
17. The Full Bred Phony » reviews
Hoenn, Johto, and Kanto have been discovered some 500 miles southeast of Japan in the near future. Pokemon can't be caught, but are only sold. When one girl can't get a Pokemon because she can't afford one, she uses the next best thing: her dog.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,532 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-9-06 - Published: 7-30-05
18. Better reviews
Entering Victory Road, she'd been prideful. Leaving it, she'd been humbled and awed. A chance meeting at the end of a long tunnel with a familiar face, and the fate that ensues for them both. CrystalRivalShipping, CrystalxSilver, TwoShot
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,760 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-20-06
19. Contemplation: A Drabble Collection » reviews
A collection of my drabbles. Current Drabble: One Hundred Years and Two Wars, there are really two wars that rage, the one between the Nations and the one inside your mind. COMPLETE! 100 drabbles!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 100 - Words: 27,483 - Reviews: 438 - Updated: 11-10-06 - Published: 10-14-05 - Complete
20. A Destiny Not My Own reviews
All that I've learned from the visions is that I'm not supposed to exist. But I exist anyway, and it scares me. The worst part is neither the memories nor even the visions. It's the dreams that scare me the most. SemiAU, Katara's PoV, Zutara later
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,382 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-9-06 - Katara
21. Utopian Walls reviews
Ba Sing Se's walls are impenetrable. They keep out countless unspoken enemies from creating anarchy. The walls are the things holding the city together, the things tearing the city apart. OneShot, Spoilers
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 654 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-24-06 - Aang - Complete
22. Nightmares reviews
Postwar, somewhat Zutara, mild Kataang, OneShot Why didn't you wait for me? I tried to come as fast as I could, but you were impatient and you married...Have you already forgotten and forsaken me?
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,151 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-23-06 - Katara
23. Never Forget » reviews
In this world, there are many who trick the world into thinking they're someone else. But they learn that sooner or later, the mask has to be removed, or they'll never be their true selves. Oneshots, character vignettes
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,362 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-15-06 - Published: 5-21-06
24. Soul reviews
The Avatar is selfish within his grief, for he mourns only for one. OneShot, AangxToph
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,031 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 5-12-06 - Aang - Complete
25. Glow reviews
Reflection and reminiscing leads to turning back, taking action, and giving hope. OneShot, Zukocentric, Post Zuko Alone, Beware of spoilers
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 655 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-12-06 - Zuko - Complete
26. Entente Cordiale » reviews
This journey's greater than it seems. It's not just about the end result. It's about coming of age, knowing the truth. It's about learning to see things differently. It's about finding yourself on that long, twisting road. Zutara. Formerly Understanding.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,386 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 5-3-06 - Published: 3-18-06 - Katara & Zuko
27. Endless reviews
Two lovers, separated by great mountains and a terrible war... Their love would never be hindered. Zutara, OneShot, Based on the Legend of Two Lovers, BIG SPOILER WARNING
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,988 - Reviews: 24 - Published: 3-25-06 - Katara & Zuko - Complete
28. The Engagement Necklace » reviews
What begins as an escape from an oppressive homeland evolves into a fight between life and death as Kana tries to realize and make happen her dreams of freedom. Chapter 8 of 8 up, Home. COMPLETE, BABY! PakuKana, PakuYogota, a little IrohKana
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 17,525 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 3-7-06 - Published: 11-22-05 - Iroh - Complete
29. Broken Spirit reviews
The Great War had ended, the Avatar had died in the Last Battle, and people speculated that the Avatar Cycle had finally broken. They were right, to a point... One Shot, Theory fic, Sequel to Rain
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,216 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-2-06 - Complete
30. Vengeance reviews
In honor of V's Day. A nanny tells a story of the legendary lovers to two young children and an older boy, who is much more than what he seems... OneShot, Zutara, onesided Kataang, Dark
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,504 - Reviews: 26 - Published: 2-14-06 - Complete
31. Light reviews
Delivering presents to the neighbors. The one thing that Katara hates the most about the holiday season. It's getting dark, and there's no light to guide her... AU, Zutara, probably a OneShot
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,567 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 12-29-05 - Katara & Zuko
32. Making a Deal reviews
So now, I'm fighting with him, protecting Aang and wondering where the heck Sokka ran off to. He better come back. ZxK, OneShot, Holiday and Thankyou gift for Dracori
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 898 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 12-24-05 - Katara & Zuko - Complete
33. Avarice reviews
Tension is mounting in the Fire Lord's court. The commoners are starving, taxes are high, and the Generals are power hungry. And Princess Zula is getting bolder in her actions by the moment. In 1st person pov.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,710 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-2-05 - Complete
34. Essence of Life reviews
Water. The Giver of Life. The Essence of Life. It will always be there... That is what they told her. That is what she believed. Very slight ZxK, OneShot, Drabble, Rated just in case
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-30-05 - Katara & Zuko - Complete
35. Somewhere Else reviews
Dark contemplates naming and labeling, what he is, who Jak is. Set at the beginning of Jak 3. A Dark Jak OneShot. Very slight DJ angst.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 8-30-05 - Jak M. - Complete
36. Dreaming of You reviews
But we'll get through this, And it'll be alright. Thinking of you by day, Dreaming of you by night. ZxK, OneShot, SongficPoemfic, with the song by me!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,716 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 8-20-05 - Katara & Zuko - Complete
37. The Balance reviews
Zuko has an insightful discussion with his uncle. Very slight, implied ZukoxKatara. Oneshot.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 649 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 8-13-05 - Zuko & Iroh - Complete
38. Ownership of the Heart reviews
He means nothing to me compared to my brother, my People, even the Prince who has been through so, so much, and weathered all the pain. In the pov of Katara. A drabbly oneshot. ZukoxKatara.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 577 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 8-9-05 - Katara - Complete
39. Floating Away reviews
The Avatar had spoken to him, spoken of a long forgotten time when the world was at peace. The Airbender had had a friend, a friend of the Fire Nation. ...More importantly, the Avatar had offered Zuko friendship. Oneshot, post Blue Spirit.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,274 - Reviews: 57 - Updated: 8-6-05 - Published: 6-17-05 - Zuko - Complete
40. The Rejected » reviews
Jak, Daxter, Tess, and Ashelin left 3 years ago to explore the universe with the Precursors. Left behind in Haven City, Dark Jak, Light Jak, Torn and Keira are miserable. Strangely, Jak comes back. Why has he returned so suddenly? DOUBLE UPDATE!
Jak and Daxter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,623 - Reviews: 64 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 12-29-04
41. To Be A Being » reviews
Sequel to To Be Loved. Dark Jak aids Light Jak in his growth to becoming his own person rather than a voice in the corner of Jak's mind. Told in Light Jak's point of view. Details of my fic challenges for peoples inside.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,913 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 4-22-05 - Jak M.
42. Bending: A Poetic Analysis » reviews
A series of four poems that detail the different kinds of bending. First poem, Glowing Embers, and second poem, By the River's Mouth, are up!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 506 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-19-05
43. The Art of Waterbending: Attack of the Tribes » reviews
The Fire Nation is following Aang and the gang to the North Pole, where he and Katara will learn Waterbending. The villages of the North Pole are scared for the future, but make a brave stand to willingly fight against the Firebenders. HIATUS.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,158 - Reviews: 59 - Updated: 5-7-05 - Published: 2-24-05
44. A Notable Loss reviews
Daxter's lost something very valuble and thinks Jak stole it. But did Jak really do so? An example of one of my own fic challenges. Rated for language. Oneshot.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,687 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 4-24-05 - Jak M. & Daxter - Complete
45. Mary Porter and the Musician's Metronome » reviews
Mary Porter attends her first year at Boneslides School of Music and Marching. Probably the wierdest thing I've ever written on fanfiction. Harry Potter Parody Chappie 7 up: Percussion and Drillogy Classes
Marching Band - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 11,120 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 4-9-05 - Published: 12-5-04
46. Watching From a Ten Yard Distance reviews
A little girl watches as Warriors from her village and a Waterbender known as the Mother fight back Enemy troops. Rated just in case for violence.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,177 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 3-12-05 - Katara - Complete
47. Survivor: Spargus » reviews
HUGE SPOILER WARNING Jak and Daxter Survivor! 18 of the Cast of the Jak Series go on the t.v show Survivor. Who will be the sole Survivor? On hold.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,994 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 2-20-05 - Published: 11-28-04
48. Balancing the Spirit » reviews
Seem, exiled to the Wasteland at 12 years old, is found by the Priestess of the Temple. Before she knows it, Seem, the new Priestess, must fix something that has tainted the Temple for ages… and manage to keep the fate of the world in the balance.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,626 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 2-8-05 - Published: 1-31-05 - Seem - Complete
49. A Memorable Moment reviews
A true story. Skit Night at Band Camp. Take a look at my cabin's skit through my eyes: Mary Hotter and the Mummy of Doom. My original inspiration for Mary Porter. Oneshot.
Marching Band - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,432 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-16-05 - Complete
50. Adventure in the Wasteland » reviews
By Ekobean, Shadowsister and I. Three fanfiction authors get sucked into Jak 3 via a green vortex. What will happen to the unfortunate authors in the Wasteland? Put on hold due to Shady's malfunctioning Word program.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 28,713 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 1-7-05 - Published: 9-5-04
51. But in Reality, There are Three reviews
First fanfic-poem. "The people thought there was only one, But in reality, there were three." One-shot.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-6-05 - Jak M. - Complete
52. Guilt reviews
It's a poemfic! My original idea! Take a poem, and put the lines in with a story! It's like a songfic, but only with a poem. And I wrote the poem myself. I'm so proud! It actually rhymes! One-shot.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 821 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 9-18-04 - Jak M. & Keira - Complete
53. To Be Loved reviews
See the Monster. See through his eyes, how he sees life, and find out what it is like To Be Loved. Dark Jak fic. One-shot.
Jak and Daxter - Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,951 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 9-7-04 - Jak M. - Complete
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