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since: 02-28-05, id: 767590, Profile Updated: 07-23-11
country: USA
Author has written 51 stories for Doctor Who, Highlander, Life on Mars, Ironman, Knight Rider, Psych, Stargate: SG-1, Sherlock, Danny Phantom, Harry Potter, Dead Zone, House, M.D., Torchwood, Supernatural, Mentalist, Merlin, and Misc. Tv Shows.

7/23/2011

Wanted: Beta Reader/Writers for The Temple of Blood.

I need someone with knowledge of Doctor Who up to the spoilers for season 3 - this is an AU verse from Doomsday onward. Martha comes from a different time and was met in a different way, though this isn't relevant to the story. Knowledge of the prior two stories in the Project Gallifrey series are also good to have. Would prefer someone with knowledge of the events of the Third Doctor's era, in particular The Green Death and The Planet of the Spiders. A brit-speech checker is also welcomed, as I tend to be very americanized in writing dialogue.

In particular, I need someone who can write really good bad guys. My baddies tend to be lacking, more like inhabiting a morally gray area than being any sort of real sinister element. I also need someone who can capture Ten's Oncoming Storm ultimatums very well. Whenever I try to write Ten being all doom-on-you, he comes out sounding more like Delgado's Master or something.

All of these qualities don't necessarily need to be combined into one person. I welcome multiple betas. Its an and/or situation.

When I first made this request out on Livejournal, I just needed the Ten-checker. But now I've found gaping plot holes that need filling. This story is eating my brain, and has been for over 3 years. IT NEEDS FINISHING.

Help is appreciated. Pleeeeez.

~Kesomon

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1. Tales of a Hogwarts OC »
A collection of short fictions surrounding my Hogwarts OCs: the werewolf Shaletar Nickolas and American transfer Bobby Sutter, both of Hufflepuff. Little to no recognizable characters appear in these fics, but they're still fun to read.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,034 - Published: 2-3-12 - OC
2. TAPS Investigation: Fentonworks House, 3:36am reviews
The TAPS team investigates the old Fentonworks House in Amity Park, rumored to be haunted by the ghost of a young boy with silver hair. Ghost Hunters/Danny Phantom. ADOPTABLE - PM for further plot hashing.
Crossover - Danny Phantom & Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 397 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-9-11 - Danny F. - Complete
3. Shockwave reviews
The immediate aftermath, John's POV. SPOILERS LIEK WOAH for the finale of S1Ep03 - The Great Game. You've been warned.
Sherlock - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 423 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 8-8-10 - Sherlock H. & John W. - Complete
4. Symbiosis reviews
Eleven/TARDIS, Spoilers for 5.01. She has always been his constant companion. A look at the bond between TARDIS and Time Lord on the trail end of rebirth.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 634 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 4-5-10 - 11th Doctor & TARDIS - Complete
5. A Shift in Reality » reviews
AU, postHumanNature if the show were exactly like the book. Since Farrinham, the Doctor's been restless. Splitting headaches, blackouts, and the same phantom memory, speaking the same unfinished request. Just what is going on?
Doctor Who - Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,916 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 2-3-09 - Published: 5-17-07
6. A Different Sort of Quest's End reviews
Stargate SG-1 crossover with BBC's Merlin. SG-1 finds a different sort of sorcerer encased in the ice during Quest pt. 2. ADOPTABLE - PM for further plot details.
Crossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Merlin - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 867 - Reviews: 23 - Published: 12-21-08 - Merlin - Complete
7. Red Sky At Morning reviews
Six years to the day since his best friend was murdered, Patrick Jane, formerly Shawn Spencer, walks into the Santa Barbara PD. mildly AU Psych/Mentalist crossover. Posted to Mentalist catagory cuz it needs love. ADOPTABLE - PM for further plot details.
Crossover - Psych & Mentalist - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 742 - Reviews: 75 - Published: 11-12-08 - Carlton L. & Patrick J. - Complete
8. Knight Rebuilt reviews
Parallel events in the lives of two men create a crossroads, where those they left behind are united. Supernatural/Knight Rider crossover, AU from Goliath p.1 and Devil's Trap. Rated for language. ADOPTABLE.
Crossover - Knight Rider & Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,631 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 9-8-08 - KITT & Dean W. - Complete
9. The Knight Before Christmas reviews
Kitt picks up a prowler around the Foundation mansion on Christmas Eve. Poemfic, set to "The Night Before Christmas." My first Knight Rider fanfic.
Knight Rider - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 590 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-16-08 - Complete
10. Fly Away Home reviews
Movieverse, scene, Tony POV. Between the crash landing and the rescue. TonyRhodey friendship. Spoilers. First IM fic.
Ironman - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 501 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-27-08 - Complete
11. Five Times Methos Met the Doctor reviews
And one time that has yet to occur. When a man bound to the slow path is the oldest of humankind, it's only natural he should run into a man who can travel anywhere, anywhen. HighlanderXDoctorWho *He Is The Highlander'verse*
Crossover - Doctor Who & Highlander - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,410 - Reviews: 23 - Published: 4-13-08 - Methos - Complete
12. Bottle of Red reviews
A bottle of red and an empty glass. They never found Sam's body. He's probably still lurking around, somewhere. Ashes to Ashes Ep1 tag.
Life on Mars - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 322 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-14-08 - Complete
13. Four ways Methos never died reviews
and one way he lived. The smallest decisions can effect all of Time. What if history didn't happen as it was written? Char. Death
Highlander - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,328 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-13-08
14. Silver Bells reviews
The date was December 24th, 1870. Jack finds himself in the South come Christmas time, searching for a new life after Ellis Island. What he finds is a guide and much-needed answers. TorchwoodXHighlander *He Is The Highlander'verse*
Crossover - Highlander & Torchwood - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,572 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-31-08 - Methos & Jack H. - Complete
15. A Holiday for Every Occassion reviews
Written for the HLHshortcuts holiday ficathon 2007. Just a few random holidays with a few of our Highlander scoobies. Crossovers with: Torchwood, Doctor Who, Ocean's 11, Firefly, Stargate Atlantis.
Highlander - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,826 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-23-07 - Complete
16. A Hair Short reviews
Fun misdirectional fluff, set anytime after the introduction of Methos. First HL fic. Renamed.
Highlander - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 358 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-07 - Complete
17. The Martians stole my peaches! reviews
Or, how Donna saved the world, completely unintentionally. It all began with a recipe for peach cobbler. 710MarthaAceDonna
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 454 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-26-07 - Complete
18. Prejudiced reviews
Missing Scene tag to the engine room talk in Utopia. Minor Spoilers. Refs to 8thDoc Era
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-18-07 - Complete
19. The Sweetest Fruit reviews
Massive Major Spoilers for the end of Utopia. Revenge is the sweetest fruit of all.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-16-07 - Complete
20. Lessons Learned in the Flow of NTime reviews
Spoilers for Blink. Missing moments in which the Doctor and Martha try to get back home.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 389 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-10-07 - Complete
21. Purpose reviews
Anyone who had chosen to stop and listen, to say a few words, to step inside his frankly magnificent time ship, had been there for a reason, even if they, or he, or anyone else had yet to discover what that reason was. post Smith&Jones
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 555 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-9-07 - Complete
22. Redux: Key of Time 02: The Relic of Niveus Astrum » reviews
A message left behind, an old friend's last words. A powerful secret is hidden on Niveus Astrum. But with history written, how can the Doctor change what is inevitable to come? Beta'd by Emery Board. COMPLETE 5.10.2007 -Formerly Project Gallifrey-
Doctor Who - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 47,126 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 4-25-07 - 10th Doctor & Iris W. - Complete
23. Birthdays reviews
A short bit of introspection from the Doctor's point of view on a little human concept called the Birthday. Features Jack and Martha TV version, not mine.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 414 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-9-07 - Complete
24. In Which Ace and Hex Done Sex
Pure and utter fluffy crack. This is REVENGE for the lack of Relic reviews or bribery. It depends on your level of enjoymentbrain meltage.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Published: 5-1-07 - Complete
25. The NotQuite Drabblefic Collection » reviews
I can never get the hang of writing EXACTLY 100 words, so this is the NotQuite Drabblefic collection. Doctor Who shorts on various subjects. Latest: Relief poem, unspecified Doctor and Companion and Why? poem, spoilers for Evolution of the Daleks
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 897 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 4-29-07 - Published: 4-1-07
26. To be Human Again reviews
The Doctor's musings, set directly postThe Enemy Within, otherwise known as the 1996 TV Movie. A short story written whoknowswhen that I found on my hard drive.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 584 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-1-07 - Complete
27. She Smiled Back reviews
Season 3, Ten and Martha. Missing Scene from Ep1 Smith and Jones. DO NOT READ if you haven't seen the episode yet, MAJOR SPOILERS.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 724 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 3-31-07 - Complete
28. The Lesser of Evils » reviews
It wasn't the first time he'd gone mad from the change. Rose learns she's not the first, and that things could've been worse when the cloister bells started tolling. PostTCI. Now extended due to popular demand to detail all the companions I consider canon
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,407 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 3-23-07 - Published: 2-16-07
29. Waiting on Season 3 reviews
Waiting for season 3 is an EVIL EVIL EVIL test of patience and blood pressure. lol. A really long poem I wrote at 11:48pm. Possible spoilers if you haven't heard all the circulating rumours.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-22-07 - Complete
30. More Than Just Another Time Lord reviews
He'd said before he was more than just another Time Lord. Before that moment, she realized that she hadn't truly understood what that meant. Ace's thoughts during The Curse of Fenric.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 674 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-11-07 - Complete
31. Vestigium Memoria, Traces of Memory reviews
"Sometimes those traces of memory are all we have of those we've lost." The Brigadier is hunting for coffee, while the Doctor's nursing wounds. Written for bibliophile1887 in the UNITfamily LJ ficathon. 3rd Doc era, postSpearhead from Space
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,781 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-8-07 - Complete
32. Sonic Dreams reviews
After the Doctor was forced into regeneration and exile, he built a new sonic screwdriver at UNIT. What ever happened to the original? Zoe Heriot, postWar Games.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 816 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-6-07 - Complete
33. Snowfall reviews
Peri's a California girl, and the Doctor needs to say sorry. What better then a rare snowfall? In commemeration of today, when it snowed in my backyard, something UNHEARD of.
Doctor Who - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 325 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-12-07 - Complete
34. 5 Destinations The Doctor Won't Visit Anymore reviews
Title pretty much sums it up. 10MarthaJack fic, post season 3 AU.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 671 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-30-06 - Complete
35. Redux: Key of Time 01: Glitz and Glamour » reviews
A chance reunion on Nebati 16 with Mel and Glitz throws the Doctor, Martha, and Jack into a whirlwind of adventure, danger, and mystery. MUCH LOVE AND THANKS to Emery Board for Betaing! R&R please! COMPLETE! -Formerly Project Gallifrey-
Doctor Who - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 24,487 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-14-06 - Published: 10-29-06 - 10th Doctor & Melanie B. - Complete
36. Twice Remembered, Once Forgotten reviews
AU Vignette Jack Harkness has met the Doctor before. It's too bad he can't remember. Refs to The Talons of WengChiang, Battlefield, The Doctor Dances, and the fanfic Facets.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 619 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-7-06 - Complete
37. Pathways in Time » reviews
A 5 part drabble collection spanning the bridge between the end of Doomsday and the start of Glitz and Glamour. Read and Review or yew shall be Ex.TERM.in.ate.ed!
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,536 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-7-06 - Published: 11-6-06 - Complete
38. Queen of Hearts reviews
will be rewritten to include in Project Gallifrey. The Tenth Doctor, Jack, and Martha the same pairing from Glitz and Glamour find Peri years after he was taken away in his sixth life. Ignoring the events of Bad Therapy. I like happy endings to things.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,457 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-2-06 - Complete
39. Imitation reviews
Between TCI and New Earth, the Doctor rests and practices an old talent while clearing his head. An ordinary night in Jackie's flat, and no one can sleep.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,071 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-25-06 - Complete
40. Diagnosis Doctor reviews
A House MD,Doctor Who crossover. Set some short time after the one episode with the alienabducted kid. Six and House in a room alone, who'll win? OMG it's horrible, R&R please.
Crossover - Doctor Who & House, M.D. - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,267 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-19-06 - 6th Doctor & G. House - Complete
41. Laugh reviews
As the 10th Doctor reaches his 10th regeneration, the TARDIS reflects. Short drabblefic written after I heard Peter Davidson's laugh in the audio No Place Like Home.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 683 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-16-06 - Complete
42. Borrowed reviews
Because if you were stranded for a lifetime in the seventies, you'd steal..er..borrow from UNIT too. Drabble that came to me during Terror of the Autons. Ten, Martha, UNIT in mention.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-14-06 - Complete
43. Familiarity reviews
Coffee and carbon copies. A House MD and Doctor Who crossover. Anyone else notice the resemblence between Five and Chase? I did. Tegan, Ten, and Chase of course.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,585 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-9-06 - Complete
44. Crackaboom reviews
Crossover of SG1 and Doctor Who, Seventh's era, featuring Seven and Ace. It was supposed to be a routine mission...
Crossover - Doctor Who & Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-4-06 - 7th Doctor - Complete
45. Never Again reviews
A Doomsday addon. The Doctor's thoughts in the moments before he sends Rose through to Pete's World. Only slightly angsty, sorry.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-31-06 - Complete
46. The Gate of Orion reviews
Crossover between Doctor Who and Stargate SG1. The team's quest for the Sangrall takes them to an ancient world, but it's not as abandoned as they thought.
Crossover - Doctor Who & Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,532 - Reviews: 24 - Published: 8-9-06 - 10th Doctor & D. Jackson - Complete
47. Hope Springs Eternal reviews
Rose bids a final farewell to the Doctor on Bad Wolf Bay. Immediately PostDoomsday. A change of pace from DepressedDocRose and Defylawsoftimestupidly fics that is well needed.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 442 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-24-06 - Complete
48. Ode to the Fandom reviews
A poem in which nothing rhymes, makes sense, or follows proper rules, yet still pays homage to my Fandom: Science Fiction. DocWho is first, hence catagory
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 410 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-2-06 - Complete
49. Past Regotten reviews
A Tenth Doctor shortfic, in which there is no danger, but much musing on life, the universe, and everything. Rose sortof meets Susan. Set after Fear Her.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,744 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-2-06 - Complete
50. Lonely Angel reviews
A short missing scene between the events of Girl in the Fireplace and Rise of the Cybermen. Rose's PoV, watching from the shadows. R&R, much love.
Doctor Who - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 639 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-7-06 - Complete
51. A Little Bit Off reviews
A chance encounter between psychic schoolteacher and wandering Timelord in a small Maine diner, and a glimpse into a fascinating world. My very first fanfiction written and posted successfully, please Read & Review! Crossover with The Dead Zone
Crossover - Doctor Who & Dead Zone - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,868 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 6-3-06 - 10th Doctor - Complete
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