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since: 10-06-07, id: 1391828, Profile Updated: 02-08-10
country: Sweden
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Author has written 2 stories for Naruto.

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PLEASE NOTE:

If you find one of my fics – that is not written by MrsHellman – on FanFiction.Net, FictionPress.Com, FanWorks.Org, SkyeHawk.Com, FicWad.Com, AdultFanFiction.Net, FanDomination.Net, MediaMiner.Org or FanLob.Com (or posted on these sites under a different name), the story has been stolen! Please tell me if you find them! I really hate to put this note out, but it's necessary.


Something that I want to tell everyone that are reading this; people that have got accounts and are logged it, people that have accounts but are not logged in, people that do not have accounts, and people that do not have accounts but usually leave anonymous reviews.

I read every review I get and it makes me so happy to read them, and I have got to say a huge thank you to those who actually take their time leaving a review with constructive criticism or critique in any form, because that is what I am after. I do not really care if the review is full of smilies or not, because it has got a content of importance.

To those who read and review; THANK YOU, for the rest of you however, there is no way that people like a fiction that much that they would come back to read the same thing over and over and over again, no matter how well-written it is. I know that, so that is why I want to know; why cannot you bother with a review containing your thoughts and opinions for something you probably will not ever read again?

Why cannot you people take a second of your life, to at least write something akin to: “More chapters please! And could you write longer chapters as well?” That is constructive criticism, even though it seems to be so little. Why cannot you write this for one chapter in an entire story when the authors and authoress put extremely much effort into their stories. You just read and throw away, at least, that’s the way it feels. We authors are spending hours each day or week (I don't know if it's less or more than that) to write these fictions for your enjoyment as well as our own, but you seem to be ungrateful brats who want everything served on a silver plate without giving something in return.

Why do you think it is so strange that your favourite authors and authoresses abandon their fictions? They are not getting any feedback, but they can see that people are reading thanks to the ‘story stats’ on this site. I know that not all authors and authoresses write for reviews – no one would ever throw away the chance of getting reviews though – but some do, and they write for reviews since they want to hear peoples’ thoughts concerning their stories and abilities when it comes to writing.

"So review for these authors if you like their stuff or I can assure you that, eventually, there will never be anything for you to read." --Reaper Nanashi

If you don not care about reviewing and/or giving feedback, why should the authors and authoresses care about updating or even writing stories? If you cannot leave an anonymous review for a story (the author/authoress might have removed that option) that is one thing, but at least you have tried (you might not be a member of this site, but anyone can leave anonymous reviews) but if you are signed in, there is no excuse whatsoever . . . you have got a responsibility as a member of this site as well. If no one would ever leave a review, it would be really hard for all the authors and authoresses to know whether or not people like what they write or not, because hits cannot tell that as well as reviews.

If you write your own stories, you know that you want to receive in reviews, so why are you then ignoring to leave reviews on other peoples’ stories? That is nothing but laziness, no excuses whatsoever, so do not even think about trying to come up with an excuse. How many reviews I do or do not receive do not matter all that much, sure . . . if I have written a story with over 200k words, I would like to get some feedback, because there is a lot of work behind it all, but I think you get my point; I want the criticism and the advices.

--I was inspired to write this note thaks to Reaper Nanashi here on FanFiction.Net, and I used a note written by her as the base to this note, so all the credit goes to her. The note I'm talking about can be found in her story "Door Number Two" in chapter five. You can use this link to get there.


~~Unnecessary Information About Me~~

AGES:
Beginning: 11 years of age – I found this site and started to read stories.
After reading too damn much: 13 years of age – Published my first story in English, and then it’s just escalated from there.
Now: I’m old enough to know what I do can be seen as absurd as well as crazy, but young enough to not give a shit. This expression has been used quite a lot, but whatever.

LANGUAGES:
Swedish: It’s my native so thereby it’s automatically my best language. It's not like that in all cases, but for me it is.
British English: This is my best English, and it’s the accent I’ve got as well. I don’t know what kind of accent but I think I’ve got one from Oxford. Grammar is horrible though.
American English: I can read and understand American English perfectly well, but I do not use it myself.
Spanish: I’ve studied this for nearly four years now, but there’s no way in hell I’m ever going to speak this language fluently, you’ll have to excuse that. I know the basics and that’s it.
Norwegian: I can’t speak Norwegian, but I can understand it when I read it or when someone uses this language in real life.
Danish: I can read Danish, I can only understand it if you speak slowly when using this language in real life.

OCCUPATION:
Alive, bitching and has got a writer's block while listening to music like crazy. Broke up with my girlfriend recently as well, sweet . . .

ORIENTATION:
Pansexual: To me it matters who you are, not what you are.

APPERANCE AND ETHNICITY:
Eyes: I’ve got dark emerald green with some light green, yellow and grey in them. Looks like an orange split in two, with all those “threads” running around all over the place.
Hair: I’m naturally dark blonde, I’ve dyed it a few times though and I’ve had dark brown, purple, black, bright red and natural red. For the moment I’m trying to get back my natural hair colour, so it’s dark blonde with a tint of orange and brown in it.
Complexion: I’m extremely pale with quite smooth, flawless skin and freckles – barely visible though. I easily get sunburn when out in the sun too much, geez . . . I hate it!
Height and Weight: It’s not that interesting. I’m about 1.71 meters tall and that’s 5'6". About my weight: I’m not thin, I’m not big. I’m somewhere in between.
Ethnicity: I’m from Sweden as it says at the top. I don’t really know what is that special/different about me because of me being a Swede. . . when it comes to pronunciation Swedes tend to pronounce the R’s and S’s quite a lot; both in Swedish and other languages. Appearance wise there’s nothing that screams Swede . . .

FAVORITE FILM:
"2:37"
Director: Murali K. Thalluri
Genres: Drama, Thriller and School

FAVORITE BOOK:
“Skinny Boy”
Author: Gary A. Grahl

FAVORITE COLOURS:
Orange: I love it, simply love it. I can wear this colour on my clothes as well, and it looks good on me, so I’ve kind of got attach to this colour thanks to the clothes I got when younger.
Black: It’s not an official colour, it’s a shade, but still, it’s beautiful. You can wear it to everything, you can match any colour with it, so yeah; an awesome “colour” – shade.
Lila: It’s also known as purple, and it’s a beautiful colour, and even if you don’t think about it, you can use this colour with a lot of other colours.
Emerald: A deep green. My eyes are this colour, and I like them, so I unconsciously got attached to this colour.
Deep blue: Only as an eye colour or when it comes to jeans is this beautiful. I don’t like it otherwise.
Red: Blood! I just love this colour, I don’t know why, but it’s freaking beautiful!

FAVORITE AUTHORS:
Books: Edgar Allan Poe, J.K. Rowling and Jane Austen.
Manga: Masashi Kishimoto
Fanfiction: BackstabberEM (Harry Potter), Kurinoone (Harry Potter), Kaikouken (Naruto) and asashouryuu (Naruto).


~~Fanarts~~

Exchanging a Dream For Reality:

CaffineFreekar
Minato and Naruto ch 21

X-Dark-Veils-x-Hidden-Sorrow-X
Minato, Kaikou and Kyuubi ch 24

MrsHellman (me)
Minato and Naruto

Kisses and Suicide:

No More Masquerade
No Woman No Cry


Stand By Me. Playing For Change. Song Around The World. Found it thanks to Kathryn's NomDePlume.

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1. Kisses and Suicide » reviews
A loving family? Check. Sadistic bastards all over the place? Check. If there is a God, he hates him? Check. AU Future SasuNaru
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 25 - Words: 157,194 - Reviews: 430 - Updated: 1-24-10 - Published: 8-10-08 - Naruto U. & Sasuke U.
2. Exchanging a Dream For Reality » reviews
The Akatsuki's about to extract Kyuubi, but then something happens. The impossible is made possible, but for a high and... very strange price. Daddy!Yondaime Young!Naruto
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 31 - Words: 152,158 - Reviews: 705 - Updated: 8-6-08 - Published: 11-15-07 - Naruto U. & Minato N. - Complete
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