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since: 12-29-05, id: 959312, Profile Updated: 07-05-08
country: United Kingdom
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Author has written 22 stories for Song of the Lioness, Bones, CSI: New York, and Criminal Minds.

I've been writing on fanfic for well over two years and it's been the best writing training I could ever have received, due to people's reviews and the friendsI have met on here who have the same interests. Fanfiction meant that myself and Sonnet Lacewing started a writers' circle - Keyboard Scribblers - and this has helped me write an original novel and a half, along with around 5 other books being finished. Now the agent hunting has begun.

I still write fanfic when I want to practise a different style. My recent foray into CSI:NY has been because I've wanted to tighten by writing, and cut the needless description that isn't suited to the crime genre. I have a WiP - Sleep Tonight - on the go, but the muse seems to want to work on my second original crime novel, so I'll probably just nip back to update every so often on that.

I love writing - as most of us do on here - and I alos like helping people improve their own writing. I'm currently a secondary school teacher in Stockport and I work with children who need a boost with their literacy skills and confidence, teaching English, History, Maths, Geography, R.S and working in the Learning Support base with pupils with SEN. I've been teaching four years and love it. Next year, I'm hoping to start my MA in SEN which I'll do at night school.

A run a crime fiction reading group at Borders in Stockport which happens on the third Monday of the month - if you're ever around drop in.

I am listed as a beta, and I'm happy to look through people's work. I do prefer to beta the writing of people who are closer to my age. I'm 28. As I teach secondary, beta-ing work by younger teenagers can seem a little like marking, as I'll end up thinking what grade GCSE this would be etc.

I have some poems on the fictionpress.com website. My home page is http://www.fictionpress.com/~sarramaks if you care to have a browse - reviews will be most welcome!

Beth, Sylvia, Ros, Ava and Emma - cheers!

Thank you to those people who nominated and voted for Hotwired, Captain Glass and myself on the CSI:NY Fanfiction Awards - I am honoured, and have a lovely shiny avatar also! :)

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1. Calverville Point, South Dakota » reviews
Case fic with a little HP sauce. The team face two cases in Calverville Point: high school girls are being abducted and murdered, and men are going missing. Can the team find the killers before the body count rises? Whole team focus. Chapter 16 up 7 Nov.
Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 68,594 - Reviews: 185 - Updated: 11-7-09 - Published: 10-4-09 - A. Hotchner/Hotch & E. Prentiss
2. Sleep Tonight » reviews
Case fic centred around a Flack/Angell relationship, hints of Mac/Stella and some DL angst - may turn to romance! FINAL CHAPTER NOW UP. Enjoy. COMPLETE.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Crime/Romance - Chapters: 23 - Words: 68,705 - Reviews: 234 - Updated: 4-28-09 - Published: 6-7-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
3. The Naming reviews
Flack recalls what it is like to be a nervous teenager. Flack/Angell one shot.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,892 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 6-4-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
4. Distance » reviews
A one shot told in three parts. Flack/Angell romance/angst, Flack/Danny friendship. Angell's rumoured to have a new man and Flack can't eat. Sometimes the night just ain't long enough. Final chapter up.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,650 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 6-1-08 - Published: 5-30-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
5. In Half Lit Worlds reviews
Oneshot. Mac/Stella. Mac and Stella search a crime scene with a rather unusual observer present.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Crime/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,549 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-30-08 - Mac T. & Stella B. - Complete
6. The Place reviews
Flack/Angell one shot. Set post 4.13 and follows on from Opening and The Call, although you needn't have read those. Angell waits for Flack to go for Irish coffee.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,892 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 5-29-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
7. The Call reviews
One shot set prior to 4.13 All in the Family. Angell receives surprise night time guests. A sort of follow-on from Opening, but you needn't have read it. FA, Flack/Danny friendship.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,275 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 5-28-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
8. Opening reviews
One shot set post 4.07 Commuted Sentences . Flack and Angell have their first Irish coffee. First in a planned series of one shots.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,428 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 5-26-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
9. Hotwired » reviews
Flack's apartment is destroyed after a seemingly unprovoked attack. With no leads, and no apparant motive, the CSI's must find a way to catch the perpetrator before more devastation is caused. FA, DL angst, DF friendship. Epilogue now up!
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Crime/Romance - Chapters: 28 - Words: 77,236 - Reviews: 261 - Updated: 5-15-08 - Published: 4-14-08 - Don F. & J. Angell - Complete
10. Closing Doors reviews
A long day and a quiet night. Tempe is alone, too alone. One shot.
Bones - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 606 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 11-14-07 - T. Brennan & S. Booth - Complete
11. Stream of Consciousness reviews
Set during Emperor Mage. An odd oneshot that needed writing. Please read and review.
Song of the Lioness - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 903 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 1-8-07 - Complete
12. Apart reviews
Flack muses over a difficult decision. FlackLindsay, DannyOC, FlackDanny? Please read and review
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,941 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8-22-06 - Complete
13. The Eagle and the Mountain reviews
Flack persuades Danny to go with him to a yoga class. FlackDanny. Please read and review.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,202 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-21-06 - Complete
14. Alone reviews
Danny Messer considers his predicament in a bar. Oneshot. DF, HawkesOC, Danny? Please read and review.
CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,335 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-20-06 - Complete
15. Two Bodies in Denial » reviews
COMPLETE Fluff with a plot. Booth and Brennan compete against the weather and other factors to catch a killer before another life is taken, and step out of denial of their feelings. Chapter 20 now up completed.
Bones - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 20 - Words: 86,908 - Reviews: 788 - Updated: 4-23-06 - Published: 4-2-06 - Complete
16. SLEEPING » reviews
A little ditty about a tired Brennan and a visit from Booth late one saturday night that has now become a strange mystery involving lots of BB interaction. COMPLETE, epilogue now up!
Bones - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 33,326 - Reviews: 373 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 3-22-06 - Complete
17. Just Wondering reviews
ONESHOT set before DN go to Carthak. Focuses on Daine's growing feelings for Numair. Basically an excuse for a little DN pre fluff! Please R & R!
Song of the Lioness - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,311 - Reviews: 27 - Published: 3-22-06 - Complete
18. FESTIVAL SEQUENCE » reviews
COMPLETE. A sequence of stories, each 3 chapters long, focusing on each of the festivals in Daine and Numair's first year together. Includes weddings, births, much fluff and a few cliff hangers too. Have a read, and then review!
Song of the Lioness - Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 135,026 - Reviews: 393 - Updated: 3-19-06 - Published: 2-12-06 - Complete
19. Watching reviews
ONESHOT. A little glimpse into the lives of some of the Gods and how their relationships might be. Includes DN and inspired by thoughts of summer and warm weather. Please read and REVIEW! And enjoy!
Song of the Lioness - Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,051 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 2-20-06 - Complete
20. A Stepping State » reviews
Set immediately after RotG, A Stepping State focuses on the beginning of Daine and Numair's relationship and the rebuilding of Tortall after the Immortals War. Contains fluff and some peril! Please R & R. FINAL CHAPTER NOW UP!
Song of the Lioness - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 76,823 - Reviews: 276 - Updated: 2-11-06 - Published: 1-15-06 - Tortall - Complete
21. Interlude » reviews
Set straight after the fall of the barrier in ROtG and fills in what might have happened before Daine and Numair reach Port Legann. Some DN nearlyfluff. My first fanfic! Please review! COMPLETE EPILOGUE NOW UP
Song of the Lioness - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 20 - Words: 39,456 - Reviews: 103 - Updated: 1-15-06 - Published: 1-1-06 - Tortall - Complete
22. Embers of a Flame reviews
ONESHOT. On a warm Beltane night Sarra Beneksri took a walk in the woods... How Daine's parents might have met. Please r & r.
Song of the Lioness - Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,541 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 1-3-06 - Tortall - Complete
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