| Urban Naruto |
Author has written 5 stories for Naruto, Harry Potter, Overlord, and Prototype. Favorite Anime: Naruto, Bleach, MAR, Inuyasha. Favorite Music: Rock, Metal Favorite Color: Orange Favorite Character's: Uzumaki Naruto, Harry Potter, River Tam Favorite Naruto Pairings: NaruTema, NaruHanabi, NaruIno, NaruSaku, NaruHarem, and some others. Favorite Harry Potter Pairings: HarryFemBlaise HarryDaphne HarryPansy HarrySusan HarryHannah Teen Titans Pairings: BBXRae Favorite crossovers: HPXSerenity HPXStarWars Hermione: "Hey! She's only interested in you because she thinks you're the Chosen One!" Harry: "But I am the Chosen One." Hermione: "(smacks him on the head with a newspaper)" Harry: "Sorry...um...kidding!"— Hermione and Harry on Romilda's obsessive crush DBC Chapter 4: 0 Wizard Overlord: 0 Naruto Gamemaster: 0 Operation Infection: 0 Then there are the plot bunny's Naruto rant: I'm doing this mostly out of boredom alright. First off Nibi is a male. Nothing else. Just because the container is female does not mean the Biju is female. This the truth. Next the whole Kakashi bashing because he never trains anyone but Sasuke. Um how do I put this plainly. He doesn't have to train any of them. When they become ninja Sasuke, Naruto, and Sakura are adults. In that they are expected to be able to think for themselves. Kakashi is only there to guide them. Not to hold their hand. We are never given any hint that he has to train them. Just think of Team 8. Hinata, Kiba, and Shino never show any signs of using genjutsu and Kurenai is a GENJUTSU SPECIALIST. If they only use clan jutsu then it shows she never trained them personally just gave them hints and guidance. Finally on the changing of the teams in Naruto. First off if you think about it all the teams in Naruto are perfect as they are. Team 7 is a Combat team with a female that has perfect chakra control. Team 8 is a Tracking squad. Each member has something that can be used to track along with subdue enemies. Team 10 is an interrogation squad. Shikamaru captures, Ino mind walks for info, and Choji makes sure they are protected. The only change you can really make without totally screwing up what the team is supposed to do is Switch Choji with one of the males on Team 7. Namely Naruto or Sasuke. Naruto would fill Choji's place perfectly because he is a literal Juggernaut so he can take damage and dish it out. Sasuke could also fill it because he has Ninjutsu and Taijutsu on his side so he can attack from afar and up close. Any other changes to the teams and you literally are making a team doomed to fail in the original scale of things. To make the story good you have to create a new storyline all together. Nobody ever does and the stories end up ending around the time skip because they can't go anywhere when the teams start to truly specialize in their given duties. Now I'm not telling people to follow these guidelines I just think if you want to write a story, write a good story that people will love. Well I'm bored again so I'm going to light something on fire. Ja. Another thing I've wanted to understand is why do authors tell you the entire history of Naruto of when Kyuubi was sealed in him and not change anything or change very little. I know his history people. I've read it thousands of times now. It gets really annoying because I read it just to make sure that I won't miss anything important to the story, and no Kyuubi being good does not count as being important to the story where you have to devote an entire prologue to that fact. Just mention it when Naruto meets Kyuubi and your done. Or better yet put it in an AN or the summary. You're a 90's kid if: You can finish this 'ice ice _' | |||||||
1. DBC » reviewsThis is the rewrite for Double Biju. Naruto grew up knowing only one emotion, hate. So he learned to only think with that emotion. This is his story.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,699 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 10-20-11 - Published: 9-13-08 - Naruto U. & Matsuri2. Double Biju Combination » reviewsNaruto had 2 demons sealed in him so he was hated by everybody and now he will show them not not fuck with him. GodNaruto DarkNaruto Rewrite in processNaruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 4,414 - Reviews: 60 - Updated: 4-26-10 - Published: 10-23-07 - Naruto U.3. Wizard Overlord » reviewsHe was convicted of a crime that he can't rememeber now he's in the darksest catacombs of Askaban with no way out. HP OverlordXoverCrossover - Harry Potter & Overlord - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,514 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 2-12-10 - Published: 3-13-094. Operation: Infection » reviewsNaruto has Kyuubi sealed in him, but what if Kyuubi was Alex Mercer stuck as Kyuubi after he tried to consume it. Follow Naruto as he gains the powers of Alex Mercer one step at a time. NaruHarem.Crossover - Naruto & Prototype - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,189 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 10-12-09 - Published: 8-20-09 - Naruto U.5. Naruto: Gamemaster » reviewsNaruto dies at the Valley of the End. Now he begins his adventure again trying out all the new forms he can use. Looks like he'll be raising hell.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,351 - Reviews: 47 - Updated: 7-17-09 - Published: 7-6-09 - Naruto U.