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since: 08-23-07, id: 1359794, Profile Updated: 07-16-11
country: USA
Author has written 5 stories for Naruto, Harry Potter, Overlord, and Prototype.

Favorite Anime: Naruto, Bleach, MAR, Inuyasha.

Favorite Music: Rock, Metal

Favorite Color: Orange

Favorite Character's: Uzumaki Naruto, Harry Potter, River Tam

Favorite Naruto Pairings: NaruTema, NaruHanabi, NaruIno, NaruSaku, NaruHarem, and some others.

Favorite Harry Potter Pairings: HarryFemBlaise HarryDaphne HarryPansy HarrySusan HarryHannah

Teen Titans Pairings: BBXRae

Favorite crossovers: HPXSerenity HPXStarWars

Hermione: "Hey! She's only interested in you because she thinks you're the Chosen One!" Harry: "But I am the Chosen One." Hermione: "(smacks him on the head with a newspaper)" Harry: "Sorry...um...kidding!"— Hermione and Harry on Romilda's obsessive crush

DBC Chapter 4: 0

Wizard Overlord: 0

Naruto Gamemaster: 0

Operation Infection: 0

Then there are the plot bunny's

Naruto rant:

I'm doing this mostly out of boredom alright. First off Nibi is a male. Nothing else. Just because the container is female does not mean the Biju is female. This the truth.

Next the whole Kakashi bashing because he never trains anyone but Sasuke. Um how do I put this plainly. He doesn't have to train any of them. When they become ninja Sasuke, Naruto, and Sakura are adults. In that they are expected to be able to think for themselves. Kakashi is only there to guide them. Not to hold their hand. We are never given any hint that he has to train them. Just think of Team 8. Hinata, Kiba, and Shino never show any signs of using genjutsu and Kurenai is a GENJUTSU SPECIALIST. If they only use clan jutsu then it shows she never trained them personally just gave them hints and guidance.

Finally on the changing of the teams in Naruto. First off if you think about it all the teams in Naruto are perfect as they are. Team 7 is a Combat team with a female that has perfect chakra control. Team 8 is a Tracking squad. Each member has something that can be used to track along with subdue enemies. Team 10 is an interrogation squad. Shikamaru captures, Ino mind walks for info, and Choji makes sure they are protected. The only change you can really make without totally screwing up what the team is supposed to do is Switch Choji with one of the males on Team 7. Namely Naruto or Sasuke. Naruto would fill Choji's place perfectly because he is a literal Juggernaut so he can take damage and dish it out. Sasuke could also fill it because he has Ninjutsu and Taijutsu on his side so he can attack from afar and up close. Any other changes to the teams and you literally are making a team doomed to fail in the original scale of things. To make the story good you have to create a new storyline all together. Nobody ever does and the stories end up ending around the time skip because they can't go anywhere when the teams start to truly specialize in their given duties.

Now I'm not telling people to follow these guidelines I just think if you want to write a story, write a good story that people will love. Well I'm bored again so I'm going to light something on fire. Ja.

Another thing I've wanted to understand is why do authors tell you the entire history of Naruto of when Kyuubi was sealed in him and not change anything or change very little. I know his history people. I've read it thousands of times now. It gets really annoying because I read it just to make sure that I won't miss anything important to the story, and no Kyuubi being good does not count as being important to the story where you have to devote an entire prologue to that fact. Just mention it when Naruto meets Kyuubi and your done. Or better yet put it in an AN or the summary.

You're a 90's kid if:

You can finish this 'ice ice _'
You remember watching Doug, Ren & Stimpy, Pinky and the Brain, Bobby's World, Felix the cat, The Tick...AAAAAAAH Real Monsters!
You've ever ended a sentence with the word "PSYCHE!"
You just cant resist finishing this . . . "Iiiiiiin west Philadelphia born and raised . . ."
You remember TGIF, Step by Step, Family Matters, Dinosaurs, and Boy Meets World.
You remember when it was actually worth getting up early on a Saturday to watch cartoons.
You got super excited when it was Oregon Trail day in computer class at school.
You remember reading "Goosebumps"
You took plastic cartoon lunch boxes to school.
You still get the urge to say "NOT" after (almost) every sentence . . . not
If you remember seeing hot tub bubbles make bubbly sounds before every music video on VH1.
when everything was settled by rock paper scissors..or bubble gum bubble gum in a dish...eeny meeny miney mo...and even better daddy had a donkey inky binky bonky.
You used to listen to the radio all day long just to record your FAVORITE song of ALL time.
"Where in the World is Carmen San Diego?" was both a game and a TV game show.
Captain Planet. He's a Hero.
You knew that Kimberly, the pink ranger, and Tommy, the green ranger, were meant to be together.
You remember when Super Nintendos and Sega Genesis became popular.
You always wanted to send in a tape to America's Funniest Home Videos . . . but never taped anything funny.
You remember watching Home Alone 1, 2 , and 3 . . . and tried to pull the pranks on "intruders"
You remember watching The Magic School Bus, Wishbone, and Reading Rainbow on PBS.
You remember when Yo-Yos were cool.
You remember those Where's Waldo books.
You remember eating Warheads.
You remember watching the 1st Batman, Aladdin, Ninja Turtles, and 3 Ninjas movies.
You remember Ring Pops.
You remember drinking Surge, and Tang.
If you remember when every thing was "da BOMB!"
When they made the new lunchables so that you could make pizza AND tacos.
You remember boom boxes vs. cd players.
Making those little paper cootie-catcher things, and then predicting your life with them.
You played and/or collected "Pogs"
You had at least one Tamagotchi, GigaPet, or Nano and brought it everywhere.
. . . Furbies
Saved By The Bell was the coolest show ever!
You haven't always had a computer, and it was cool to have the internet.
And Windows 95 was the best.
You watched the original cartoons of Rugrats, Power Rangers, and Ninja Turtles.
Michael Jordan was a king.
YIKES pencils and erasers were the stuff!
All your school supplies were "Lisa Frank" brand.
You remember when the new Beanie Babies and Talking Elmo were always sold out.
You collected those Beanie Babies.
Mortal Kombat was awesome--the game and the movie
Carebears
Gak was the coolest stuff invented.
Lambchop's song never ended.
The old dollar bills.
Silver dollars, which were cool to have.
You remember a time before the WB.
You collected all the Troll dolls
You had to read Weekly Reader's in class.
If you even know what an original walkman is.
You remember wanting to sit on the orange Nickelodeon couch.
You've gotten creeped out by "Are You Afraid of the Dark?"
You know the Macarena by heart.
"Talk to the hand" . . . enough said
You always said, "Then why don't you marry it!"
You remember trying to collect all 150 original pokemon cards but never could and if you did you thought you were all that!
You remember Highlight's magazine.
You went to McDonald's to play in the playplace.
You remember playing on merry go rounds at the playground.
Before the MySpace frenzy . . .
Before the Internet & text messaging . . .
Before Sidekicks & iPods . . .
Before MIKE JONES . . .
Before PlayStation2 or X-BOX . . .
Before Spongebob . . .
Back when you put off the 5 hours of homework you had every night.
When light up sneakers were cool.
When you rented VHS tapes, not DVDs.
When gas was 0.95 a gallon & Caller ID was The new thing.
When we recorded stuff on VCRs.
When we called the radio station to request songs to hear off of our walkmans.
When gameboy was a brick.
You did MASH to figure out your future
When you weren't cool unless you had a Starter jacket.
Way back.
Before we realized all this would eventually disappear.
Who would have thought you'd miss the 90's so much!
Post this in your profile if you remember these days . . . .
or if you smiled at one of these things

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1. DBC » reviews
This is the rewrite for Double Biju. Naruto grew up knowing only one emotion, hate. So he learned to only think with that emotion. This is his story.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,699 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 10-20-11 - Published: 9-13-08 - Naruto U. & Matsuri
2. Double Biju Combination » reviews
Naruto had 2 demons sealed in him so he was hated by everybody and now he will show them not not fuck with him. GodNaruto DarkNaruto Rewrite in process
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 4,414 - Reviews: 60 - Updated: 4-26-10 - Published: 10-23-07 - Naruto U.
3. Wizard Overlord » reviews
He was convicted of a crime that he can't rememeber now he's in the darksest catacombs of Askaban with no way out. HP OverlordXover
Crossover - Harry Potter & Overlord - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,514 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 2-12-10 - Published: 3-13-09
4. Operation: Infection » reviews
Naruto has Kyuubi sealed in him, but what if Kyuubi was Alex Mercer stuck as Kyuubi after he tried to consume it. Follow Naruto as he gains the powers of Alex Mercer one step at a time. NaruHarem.
Crossover - Naruto & Prototype - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,189 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 10-12-09 - Published: 8-20-09 - Naruto U.
5. Naruto: Gamemaster » reviews
Naruto dies at the Valley of the End. Now he begins his adventure again trying out all the new forms he can use. Looks like he'll be raising hell.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,351 - Reviews: 47 - Updated: 7-17-09 - Published: 7-6-09 - Naruto U.
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