the refvised one i promise. honestly i think i did a butter job on this one but still it was just getting way too long so i cut it short after a while. it was completely filling 12 pages on google docs. but still this one has more story and a better ending than the previous one, the previous ending is rushed and crap compared to this one. i hopes you like this one more.
Rated: T - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,506 - Published: 12/6/2014 - Complete