Athos Aras 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 04-08-06, id: 1024110
Author has written 6 stories | Fullmetal Alchemist, and Bleach.
β : Athos Aras is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I use to do this through reviews but I guess this is easier, I usually check for spelling errors (Wich I may have myself) or diffrent words to make your story a bit more catchy. I can also tell if a story is moving to quickly or the trama is just to slow, might tell you to add som stuff or omit other events. As a writer I do these kind of evaluations to myself often and lets say they dont come out that bad.What I usually lok in a story is the originality. Many romance stories tell the typical ´I found out I love you so lets kiss and be together forever´I like the stories I read out of that frame or maybe inside it with some special details. I do like the fact that, if its a romance, it should not be easy for either of them to get to realize theyre feelings or to express them to easily. I´m usually not that hard on people, wich means I dont bite.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
My strengths might be more like originality, some ideas to add, adventure stories are easy to fill in with these kind of stuff. Im not that hard on a writer either,and I will always praise you for your hard work. Even though Im bad at spelling, Im not that bad at grammar.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
My spelling. My first language is spanish and my second is English (Im still in the process of learning Japanese so I would´nt call it a third one) Besides that I might take a while in checking and returning your stories because aside from this I have a lot, and I mean A LOT else to do.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I like stories, like I said before, that have suspense and originality. Originality is the key, surprises and hooks are very well received.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Id rather not have any Hentai or Yaoi stories (In a less sutile way, I wont read them and dump them the minute I see something)
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » K+
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Bleach
Anime Fullmetal Alchemist
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Adventure
Mystery
Angst
Suspense