knightsprincess24 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 07-01-06, id: 1079674
Author has written 7 stories | Shaman King, Final Fantasy VII, Yu Yu Hakusho, Fruits Basket, Juvenile Orion, Whistle!, and Card Captor Sakura.
β : knightsprincess24 is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
well i'm not exactly one to make a profile like this, but i love to talk. lol. as of today, my mom is no longer my mom, because she has destroyed my life long enough. my parents have been divorced for almost ten years and out of those ten years, my 'mom' has gone through three husbands and failed at all those relationships. i don't get her.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
i'm like a math wiz. so much fun. i don't care if i'm supposed to writing about my strength in writing but i wanted to say that if people need help in math. i'm quite good in grammer until i go and proof read things. i kinda think i suck at that. the easiest thing to get right is when to say 'well' or 'good'.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
i'm terrible at knowing when to put semicolons or commons and things like that.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
blah blah blah...
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Was It That Important?
Lindsey Wolff

You took off again Leaving him like all the rest

You took off Knowing you have children What will you do?
What have you said?

It’s different in the end You lost your cool I lost my head

That’s all I need to know You fought the cold While I fought the snow

I watched the tears run down your face You said, “No.”
And my mind went crazy again

Now it’s over I took your place on the street It’s my turn to freeze at night I never thought I’d say, “Goodbye”
That’s when you left again

My eyes filled by dotted lines Of water waiting To try the slide down pale cheeks

I saw it coming You were never reliable You destroyed my hopes and dreams

I crashed on the bench that night It all took me by surprise I thought this was the end What happened to my best friend?

Did she leave because of him,
Or because she was happier with that other man?
Did she forget about her baby girl?
She used to be her entire world Did she think it over in time?
The little girl lost her sweet smile Will we ever see it again?
Will she ever go back to him?

I never knew her to be so cruel We all turn blue Turned the darkest blue

She sits there contemplating The darkest things to do He never saw it coming He took her and led her on home

That’s when she knew he was gone She’s never going back again She nothing but a teenage queen Dramatic to the very end

Beta Preferences
Language: English & Finnish
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Fruits Basket
Movie Velvet Goldmine
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Crime
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship