Eleri Undomiel 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 08-18-06, id: 1117443
Author has written 10 stories | X-Men: Evolution, Justice League, Avatar: Last Airbender, and Twilight.
β : Eleri Undomiel is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am a sixteen year old female who you may call Eleri. :) First off, anyone who would like me to beta for them must reach a few requirements.

First, if it has excessive profanity. I don't mind the OCCASIONAL dang or crap, but for me, if it isn't in that character's makeup to swear profusely, then don't use it!

Second, no lemon or slash. At all. Like I said, I am sixteen, and I am of the Christian faith. If it has anything, even indirectly, that points to this, I will not take it.

Third, don't argue with things I've said, please. Unless it's over the placement of a comma and our discussion is going something like this: "ME: You should change it to a dash, instead." "YOU: Actually, I put the comma in at that point because I was trying to emphasize that particular bit." Get it? Good.

Fourth, I reserve the right to choose NOT to accept any fanfiction. I may or may not tell you why. But please, don't take this as me not WANTING any fanfiction to read, it's just ... sometimes I am at my limit of fanfic, or am too swamped, or just don't like the story. K? :)

Now that I have established how mean I can be (-snicker-), let's go on to how nice I can be.

In beta-reading, I will make constructive critiques, not anything that would discourage you. My job is to keep you writing, and writing well. I LIKE to give compliments... it's very difficult to have to tell someone "Oh, hey, this here? Yeah, it can't be like that." But I'm willing to do whatever I can to help with bad grammar and spelling (AND SPACING!) on this site. :)

Remember... books (and fanfiction) are your friends! And so am I - I'm here to help you write better and more realistically (As realistic as fiction can get). :)

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I am an A+ English student, my recent research paper got the highest grade in the class. I am very good at spelling, have a large vocabulary, and I know (mostly) the proper use of grammar and punctuation.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Umm... I have a temper... so please, no harsh comments to what I've said to you. I may say something I regret. :(
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I am in love with Edward Cullen. So if you have any Twilight fanfiction, then I'd be happy to take it! I also prefer Sailor Moon, Avatar: The Last Airbender, or anything along the Justice League line. Or X-Men, animated or no. Any of the things mentioned in my favorites lists on my profile. All of these are just letting you know, because if a character I'm not familiar with is OOC, then how am I to know?!
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
AGAIN! Let me say, NO LEMON OR SLASH. Whatsoever. Lime...not sure yet. I'd have to know what it is first... A NOTE: I DO ACCEPT SOME 'M' Ratings, it just depends for what.

Plus, I am not going to beta read anything that I find immoral. I will send you a message with my apology if this is the case. See my list of expectations for more info.

Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender
Anime Sailor Moon
Book Song of the Lioness
Book Twilight
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for