Sunflower729 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 08-21-06, id: 1119472
Author has written 1 story | Chronicles of Narnia.
β : Sunflower729 is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am fairly new to the Beta-Thing but am completely ready to take this on. I am not afraid to tell you what you need to fix, but promise to do it in the nicest way I can. I understand that everyone wants to have an amazing Hero or Heroine, and thus am tolerant of Mary Sues. I will try to help you find the balance between a good OC and a bad Mary Sue.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
My strongest point is makeing a story flow and sound/look good to a reader. I am also good with words; I can give you synonyms,idioms, the works to make your work less repetitive and mundane. Grammar is also one of my better points.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Over useage of commas. I use them like a madwoman. I also tend to be a bit wordy and take a while to get to the point sometimes. I am also a hopeless romantic and despise sad stories.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
C.S Lewis, Eragon, Lord of the Rings, Tamora Pierce, Twilight, Pirates of the Carribea...I will beta jusrt about anything if it has a decent plot line
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Anime, manga, cartoons...yeah, not really my thing but I can try...
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book Chronicles of Narnia
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for