Forohe Toxophilus 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 08-25-06, id: 1121970
Author has written 3 stories | Cats, Stargate: Atlantis, and Warhammer.
β : Forohe Toxophilus is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am a simple man, who believes that plot, character development, and dialogue are the most important bits to any story. Without one of those three, the entire story will fall apart. br /br /br /

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With that in mind, I am going to unabashedly harp on you if you do not do all of these things to my standard. If you do them better then I don't know why you're contacting me for Beta services. br /br /br /

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Tenses are important and I'm going to be very critical about those. If you're mixing present and past, I am going to be extremely /br /br /

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If your dialogue needs help sounding more natural expect me to address that.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Plot development, action writing, character development, human interaction.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Anything that is like a monologue, something with cultures that I am unfamiliar with, and "girly" fan-fics. I'll be honest and say that I, like many other men, do not understand women. And romance is not a strong suite. Even though I love seeing it in stories.

I'm also terrible about keeping a schedule.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Action, humour (as dry as it may be), war, personal conflict. Things along that nature.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I think I'm good with just about anything within the categories I've laid out specifically. If I'm not a fan of your story there's likely an author error reason for it, and not a setting, plot-use, or character reason for it.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Appleseed
Game Battlefield
Tv Battlestar Galactica: 2003
Game Borderlands
Play Cats
Tv Firefly
Game League of Legends
Game Mass Effect
Tv Stargate: Atlantis
Game Warhammer
Comic X-Men
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Parody
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Western
Crime
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship