Kiali 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 10-29-06, id: 1156107
Author has written 2 stories | Inuyasha, and Sinbad: Legend of the Seven Seas.
β : Kiali is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Hey there! I currently teach English in Southern California and have thus finished my degree in English. I have always enjoyed character development, and I really enjoy collaborating with other writers. Most of my writing has been done outside of this website, especially in recent years, and my style has shifted over time to become much more detailed. Don't worry, I don't bite! I will gladly take the time out of my day to read your story and give you constructive criticism. I am not just your personal spell-checker, but someone who will help you flesh out your plot and explore your characters more deeply. I expect the person who wishes for my services to truly want my help and my comments. I don't want to waste my time, so if you're willing to improve your writing skills and also get in a few comments and happy times, then I'm the beta-reader for you!
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
My strengths are grammar and improvising. Character development is incredibly important to me, and thus I have a very harsh eye for plot and characters. When I find a new word, I go look it up in the dictionary and recommend it to people who I know will use it correctly. I also excel at creating plot lines. I can write a good story and I'm proud of everything I put out there. I believe that my strengths also lie in taking an old story and freshening it up. I am very good at picking pairings and will always listen to the writer. I'll take in your perception of things before I do anything major. I'm professional, but I do enjoy getting to know my writers. It gives me joy knowing I'm helping others put their ideas to paper.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
My weakness would probably have to be...chocolate. But, since virtual chocolate isn't very tasty, my other weakness is that I tend to procrastinate. I'll be honest, It's very hard for me to finish a story...and type it out, no less. This is usually because of how my mind works. I can certainly help others with their stories, but when it comes to my own, my mind is so jumpy and so full of ideas that by the time I start writing one brain is already trying to work on another! My slacking problems have gotten better, though, and I will work hard to make sure your story is as amazing as it can possibly be.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Let me just start out by saying that I love angst. It's probably kind of unhealthy and odd how much I love reading and writing angst, but if you mention that there is even a little hint of hurt/comfort/angst in your fanfiction, I will probably demand to read it. Good angst done well is essentially a kink of mine.

I prefer to read stories about topics I know very much about. Pirates of the Caribbean, Harry Potter, Marvel, Sherlock Holmes, The Man From Uncle, and Anime are just a few of the things I love to read stories about. I also very much like original stories and ideas. My critiques might not be the best if I haven't read whatever genre you're fanfictioning off of, but I can still be of grammatical and general advising assistance. I also like to read longer stories, but short stories are also very fun to read during math class. It is very easy to get me to read your story, but if it is about something I have absolutely no idea about, I will let you know beforehand. I love romance and adventure, but I also like original ideas. Anything that catches my attention will do. I also prefer to be emailed the documents, but all of these minor details can be worked out easily once you message me :) Some fandoms that I commonly read/write:

-anything MCU! Avengers! (Iron Man is my favorite)

-Sherlock Holmes (TV and Movieverse)

-Harry Potter

-The Man From Uncle

-Pirates of the Caribbean

-Sinbad: Legend of the Seven Seas

-The Hunger Games


-Fruits Basket



-Bioshock Infinite

-AND SO MUCH MORE that I can't even remember at this minute. Message me and I'll let you know if I'm familiar with it!br /

Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Ones with the really far-out kinks, like bathroom play (for example).
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Misc Anime X-overs
Movie Avengers
Game BioShock
Misc Book X-overs
Movie Captain America
Tv Doctor Who
Anime Fruits Basket
Anime Full Metal Panic
Anime Fullmetal Alchemist
Misc Game X-overs
Book Harry Potter
Book Hunger Games
Anime Immortal Rain
Anime Inuyasha
Game Minecraft
Misc Movie X-overs
Anime Ouran High School Host Club
Movie Pirates of the Caribbean
Tv Sherlock
Movie Sherlock Holmes
Movie Sinbad: Legend of the Seven Seas
Movie Thor
Misc TV X-overs
Book Twilight
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for