I am a senior English major in college with an "A" average. I will go over your entire story and not only fix grammar and spelling but also fix sentences to improve coherence, remove adverbs and remove dialogue attributions where excessive to improve your story's flow. But, you don't have to take my suggestions if you don't want to. It would be nice if you proofread your story yourself and tried to fix all the errors you could before submitting it to me.br /
I am going to go ahead and list all the anime I can betaread for here cause it's a pain to go and search them using that stupid tool:br /
Naruto, Bleach, FMA, Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, Death Note, InuYasha, Loveless, Ouran High School Host Club, Nononono, Liar Game, Ikigami (if anyone even fics this, which I sort of doubt), Kuroshitsuji, Higurashi, Durarara!, Code Geass, Scrapped Princess, Spiral, Jigoku Shoujo, FruitsBasket (I guess, haven't finished the manga), Nabari no Ou (I guess, not up to date on the manga), Monster, Battle Royale, Shion no Ou, Blood Plus (saw a very long time ago, lil rusty), Claymore (saw long time ago), DNAngel (saw long time ago). That's all I can think of for now.