| Ogehsim 's Beta Reader Profile
Author has written 12 stories | Kim Possible, Sweeney Todd, Firefly, and Fullmetal Alchemist.
β : Ogehsim is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
|Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I like to beta as a give and take process. First thing I'll do is read it over for flow, continuity, and coherency. I'll give you my comments and let you decide what to change. Of course, I'll repeat the process as many times as both of us feel the need to. Then I'll go through for spelling, grammar, and the like. I try to teach you what your mistakes are so that you can improve as a writer and future betas can focus more on content than on syntax and structure.
|My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Grammar (esp. punctuation) and phrasing. I'm good at rearranging/rewriting sentences to be clearer.
|My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Action Stories: I have a hard time writing action sequences, so if I read a confusing sequence I can point that out, but I'd have few suggestions to improve.
Pure Humor: Not my strength. I would not know how to improve it.
|Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I like short stories. Oneshots, or a series with only several chapters- definitely no more than 10-15 depending on length.
For Kim Possible, Shego and Drakken are my preferred characters.
|Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
|Content Rating: Fiction K » T
|Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Cartoon Kim Possible
|Movie Sweeney Todd|
Movie Treasure Planet
|Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for