| Pahoyhoy 's Beta Reader Profile
Author has written 1 story | Kingdom Hearts.
β : Pahoyhoy is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
|Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Reading a story should be something fun and enjoyable, but there is nothing I hate worse than opening a story that is incomprehensible. Poor sentence structure, the misuse of verbs and adjectives, and just having one really long paragraph; they are all the enemy! I feel it is my mission to help combat these evils. No, don’t turn away. We can do it together.
I like to be as helpful as possible. Not only will I fix up work, but every change I make I will type in a different color text. This is so you can see each change I have made without searching and so you can hopefully learn from it.
If you wish to have me as a Beta, I am more than happy to assist. I have a few rules though.
First please don’t ask me how your story should go; asking my opinion on your story however is more than acceptable.
Second I really want to help people who help themselves, please at least pretend you are going to learn something from me.
Finally here is a list of things that I will not Beta for fear it may kill me:
|My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Well mainly my strengths are grammar and sentence structures. If I can think of anything else, I'll let you know.
|My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I have no weaknesses; okay, you caught me in a lie. A bad weakness I have is that I like to be a perfectionist, so I don’t believe anything I do is ever good enough. My biggest weakness is the fact I procrastinate until the very last minute possible. This only goes for writing, but it’s fair to know anyway.
|Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Kingdom Hearts: Usually any yaoi pairing
Naruto: Sasu/Naru Neji/Gaara Shika/Kiba
Honostly I will Beta any story as long as it falls out of the range of the Not My Cup of Tea portion of this profile. Meaning yes, I don't mind Het or Yuri either.
|Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Truth or Dare fics
Gender bending fics (this does not include cross-dressing fics or Mpreg fics)
Character bashing stories
Fics that have the one main character raping the other, and the victim instantly falling in love.
|Content Rating: Fiction K » M
|Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
|Anime Death Note|
Game Final Fantasy VII
Game Final Fantasy VIII
|Game Final Fantasy X|
Anime Gakuen Heaven
Game Kingdom Hearts
|Anime Only the Ring Finger Knows|
Anime Princess Princess
Game Super Smash Brothers
|Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for