Kiyoka Kurosawa 's Beta Reader Profile
action: Follow . Favorite
profile: p User Profile
since: 07-16-08, id: 1637470
Author has written 3 stories | Skip Beat!, and Harry Potter.
β : Kiyoka Kurosawa is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Okay im just gonna get this over with: I suck at editing my own stories. I suck with things having to do with my stories. But I am pretty good with pointing out mistakes/errors with other people's stuff. just ask my beta, Moonlight Petal. She will tell you i am not that good at doing my own stuff, cause I wrote it. So if you don't like it, you can get over it.

my reading/editing stlye;
These are the steps that I take to help make a complete chapter.
1. You send me your copy. 2. After reading your copy, I'll add notes to it in bold, or whatever you don't have it written in.
3. After I send that version back, you take it, correct it or tell me why it's written like that and send that copy to me with any notes that you might have.
4. If I still have any questions, I will most likely Private Message but If its like super major, then I will repeat step 3. 5. Then If it's good, I will fix any spelling errors, cause the grammar would be in step 2, and you can post it.

My Rules;
1. must Make sense; if it doesn't I won't know what the hell is going on 2. i want credit! okay!
3. I don't like people who whine when I don't edit their fanfic immediatly, so I won't except it. 4. When It comes to characters, send me a detailed description of how you see then, and what they are like. I go into more detail if you choose me to beta your work.

One other thing, just like my beta, she rubbed off on me when it comes to bluntness. I won't say your story sucked, but don't be offended if I say, you need help, cause I can barley understand this.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
When it comes to spelling, I am not that great, but I do know how to, and I will look it up to see if I can find the right spelling. I do know most though when It comes to that kinda things.
I am good with lots of drama, friction, action, and big things like that. Blowing things out of porportion like a character is fun to do, if it's done right.
Grammar is okay. could be better, but works out enough to get a 95% on a midterm.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
spelling and grammar, its not that bad, but not the best either.
I don't catch every single detail, but most.
Major fluff stories. like nothing but I love you, lets go have sex.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
pairings Harry potter- HarryXoc, RonxHermione, Siriusxoc, Remusxoc, Remusxocxsirius love triangle, lillyxJames Skip-Beat!: KyokoxRen, YashiroxKanae, KyokoxSho(depending on quality)
Tokyo Crazy Paradise:TsukasaxRyuji Hana Kimi: MizukixSano (I will do MizukixMostly others too, just depends, ask if interested.
Hana Yori Dango: TsukasaxTsukushi, TsukushixRui (love triangles here too!)
Spirited Away: HakuxChihiro, duh. Twilight: This ones kinda off balance right now, because I have nott read the last twoo books yet, but I do love Almost all pairings so far, even possibly a Bella/Jacob Full Moon: MitsukixTakuto, OoshigexWakaouji, MerokoxIzumi. (Johnathans my fave, if you've ever seen the anime christmas scene, but there are no pairings for him. so sad)
Any questions about others, just ask.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
just depends, you would have to ask me. srry for lack of detail.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Full Moon wo Sagashite
Anime Hana Yori Dango
Anime Hana-Kimi
Book Harry Potter
Anime Honey Hunt
Anime Skip Beat!
Anime Spirited Away
Anime Tokyo Crazy Paradise
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for