Musical Sunrise 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 12-22-08, id: 1778138
Author has written 27 stories | Ouran High School Host Club, Loveless, Junjō Romantica, Fullmetal Alchemist, Maximum Ride, Sukisho, Penguin Brothers, V.B Rose/V[ベルベット]・B[ブルー]・ローズ, Fruits Basket, Count Cain: God Child, Gakuen Alice, Misc. Anime/Manga, Naruto, xxxHOLiC, Detective Conan/Case Closed, and Tsubasa Chronicle.
β : Musical Sunrise is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Hey, so I'm recently getting back into after being away for a few years. And I like to beta read stories. I don't have a Bachelor's in English or anything, but I love to read. I love to write. And I would love to help you make the stories you write be the ones you want to tell. My spelling and grammar are very good. If there are areas that you have to rewrite, we'll work on those before worrying about spelling, because if you're going to rewrite it anyways there's not much point. That being said, I will not do rewrites for you. I'll just point out issues and suggestions on how to fix them, and whether you do or not is up to you. It is, after all, your story. When it comes right down to it, you're the one who decides how you want to tell it. I will, however, take a document and fix spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors after you're done all the structural edits.

Please don't be offended when I point out flaws in your story. A writer and beta writer partnership exists to fix those flaws, and we cannot do that without first pointing them out. I get it, feeling criticized is hard. But even the best writers make mistakes, and I think it's better to catch them before your work is presented to a wider audience.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
My spelling and grammar are excellent. I can tell where a story is falling flat, or is bland and needs to be spiced up. I can offer advice on how to structure your story, and how to make sure you have something exciting or interesting in each chapter to keep your readers interested.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
My weaknesses would be anything in relation to Sci-Fi. I'm also not too good at Mysteries. Thus I won't beta-read for either, since I don't want to mess up your work. If you need me to have a deep knowledge of something, such as weaponry, vehicles, or even clothing brands, I really won't have a clue, since I don't pay attention to that sort of stuff.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
As previously mentioned, I do like comedies and darker stories. I also like fluff. Anything with a really gripping story.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Sci-Fi. Mystery. Poetry. Sometimes something about a story will really grate me and I won't want to continue it due to personal preference.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime +C: Sword and Cornett
Anime 07-Ghost
Anime 7 Seeds
Book A Little Princess
Anime Aishiteruze Baby
Book Animal Ark Series
Anime Beast Master/ビーストマスター
Anime Beauty Pop
Anime Black Cat
Anime Bloodhound/夜型愛人専門店−ブラッドハウンド−DX
Anime Card Captor Sakura
Book Circle of Magic
Book Circle Opens
Anime Clamp School Detectives/CLAMP学園探偵団
Anime Count Cain: God Child
Anime Duklyon: CLAMP School Defenders/学園特警デュカリオン
Anime Fruits Basket
Anime Fullmetal Alchemist
Anime Gakuen Alice
Anime Gate 7
Comic Grey is...
Book Hunger Games
Book Immortals, Tamora Pierce
Book Infernal Devices, Cassandra Clare
Anime Kiki's Delivery Service
Anime Legal Drug
Anime Loveless
Book Mortal Instruments
Anime Nabari no Ō
Anime Natsume Yūjin-Chō
Anime No. 6
Anime Ouran High School Host Club
Anime Penguin Brothers
Book Protector of the Small Quartet
Anime Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ
Anime RustBlaster/ラストブラスター
Book Samaria series
Anime Shiawase Kissa Sanchoume/幸福喫茶3丁目
Book Song of the Lioness
Anime Sukisho
Book Trickster series
Anime Tsubasa Chronicle
Book Twelve Houses Series
Anime X/1999
Anime xxxHOLiC
Anime Yami no Matsuei
Anime Yasashii Ryuu no Koroshikata/やさしい竜の殺し方
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for