Sun Daughter 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 05-17-09, id: 1937879
Author has written 9 stories | Avatar: Last Airbender, Percy Jackson and the Olympians, and 39 Clues.
β : Sun Daughter is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
As a Beta Reader, I tend to proofread your work and leave of comments about your strengths. I'm a very lenient Beta Reader and don't tend to have a "You have to fix this and this and this" type of attitude unless it is clashes with the rules of grammar. I try to help your story reach its full potential while letting you maintain complete /br /

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When you ask for my services, I will always ask you if you want it back by a certain time. This is because I am not always a quick Beta Reader. Depending on the length of your document, I could get it back to you by the next day or in a /br /

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I have Beta read a lot of people before, so I'm experienced. I know what I'm doing. I also get my point across without being cruel. I'm very sensitive to other peoples' feelings and will never be rude to you. If you're looking for a drill sergeant Beta Reader who will tell you everything you're doing wrong, then you've come to the wrong profile. I like to suggest things and tell you things you can improve on, but YOU are the writer. You make your own choices.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Spelling and grammar has always come easily to me, so if you're struggling, I could definitely help you in that /

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Detail is another one of my strengths. If you're having issues developing your setting, characters, or even just with basic imagery, then I could definitely help with that. I find that a lot of fanfics don't have enough narrative, so I can ask you some probing questions to get you to expand /

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I like to look at your story as a whole when trying to help it reach is potential, but if the spelling/grammar is bad, that needs to be fixed first.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Mary Sues. I have created a few Mary Sue OCs in my writing career. This means that I can recognize if a character is a Sue at first glance, but it also means I am not good at eliminating one. You may have to find someone else if you have that /

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Also, sparking the right emotions in my readers is something I've been working to improve on.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I like Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Familly, and Friendship fics. I thrive off of Adventure stories, and I have so much fun Beta-ing those (you'll probably be able to tell by the comments I give you), but my all time favorite is Romance. Mostly because I'm good at tell you if it's realistic or not. I like making sure the love is true to life. I'll really Beta /

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In terms of fandoms, I'll Beta anything, but I'd prefer to do something where I'm familiar with the fandom. If I'm not familiar, I can still help with spelling/grammar and basic narrative, but that's about it.

Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Horror stories... not really up my ally, but I'll take them. That's really it.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book 39 Clues
Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender
Anime Bakugan Battle Brawlers
Play Bye Bye Birdie
Movie Cinderella
Anime Code Geass
Game Dragon Quest Series
Movie Forbidden Kingdom
Book Gallagher Girls
Book Harry Potter
Book Hunger Games
Movie I Am Number Four
Movie Jurassic Park
Book Percy Jackson and the Olympians
Cartoon Spectacular Spider-Man
Play West Side Story
Movie X-Men: The Movie
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Adventure
Parody
Angst
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship